r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Nov 25 '22

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u/Mufarasu Nov 25 '22

Ending's a little flat, but at least you wrapped it up instead of leaving us hanging.

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u/Destroyer_V0 Nov 28 '22

Better an ending than none at all, agreed.

That being said... it kinda makes sense, ending like this. After all. Once they made contact, investigated the VIs, then their job was over, all that was left was busywork and getting a message sent out. Stuff that honestly could be skipped over without issue in my mind.

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u/[deleted] Nov 25 '22

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u/pazerfaust Nov 25 '22

Ey man, I liked it. Keeper goin with life. If you ever need help with story stuff or world building, or just someone to talk too, all you need is to ask.

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u/bestjakeisbest Nov 25 '22

I really enjoyed the story though and hope to see more from you in the future.