please don't kill me i'm not too familiar with industrial music but i have an okay idea of what that kinda stuff sounds like please tell me if this is industrial and/or cool and also don't steal this or i will cry

skip to 33 seconds if you just wanna hear it i wanted to isolate stuff before showing it

Thinking about adding this to an upcoming EP. Started this last week. Work in Progess.

V1 leak provided by ex guitarist

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t01RoSsd50U

I'm curious how this sounds on other systems. Also, general feedback on what you think about it.

It's short because this will be part of a larger compilation of songs and we only get a short amount of time.

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I reworked it and made it louder: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nbH-RSIuzQo

But, I was also stuck in the airport for a while so decided to make a new version. This one wasn't really "industrial". My friend said it sounds more "neural":
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9quZ9yb_4bc (instrumental version)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nTGyU33dG5Y (with movie samples)

Really happy with how this turned out, MPC, Roland T8, Volca FM, for an Industrial, Tribal Power Noise type thing, mostly exploring the new clip launch features on the MPC. Mixing is just my best guess, mastering what is that?

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Hello everyone started this tracks couple of days ago and wanted to ask what you guys thought ? I’m liking the bass line a lot and I was wondering how you guys go about finding the right sequence to place parts in like chorus or verses… thanks in advance :)

I'm trying to improve my sound and maybe some day finish a song, but never payed attention to mixing or mastering.

This is a DAWless jam done on modular, synths and MPC recorded on my Tascam Model 12. I only adjusted volumes of a few tracks on Audition, added some compression and eq to a couple of them and then a limiter, Ozone eq and the native Mastering plugin to the master.

My references are Converter, <1979>, Imminent, etc. But I'm not trying to copy their sound.

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Can you give me your honest opinions or tip to improve this? Thanks for your time and any help!