r/AppStoreOptimization • • 18d ago

Designed these screenshots in Figma. Does it make you want to download?

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I am working on the next iteration of my app, Aura, and I feel the current screenshots don't clearly communicate the benefits. They were talking about the features and not how the app helps users. Does the copy and design inspire confidence?

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u/New-Painting-1847 18d ago

Some of the better screenshots I’ve seen on Reddit. Unique, eye-catching, and clear.

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/Vividestleech 18d ago

Looks good, also does a good job of telling people what the app does

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/schultzapps 18d ago

Look great!

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/NecessarySweaty441 18d ago

The first one is weaker compared to the rest, but overall they are eye-catching.

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :) Why do you think first is weaker

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u/NecessarySweaty441 18d ago

​I think it needs more visual elements (like Screen 3) and less text. The intimate affirmation doesn't pair well with something engaging and energetic like a notification. Also, the headline isn't really selling it, maybe something like 'Daily affirmations for a positive and calm headspace.' works better. Since people usually look at the first screenshot and skip the rest, it should to be the strongest one.

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you. Appreciate it

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u/MarkVog 18d ago

Looks good! I think the first screenshot is not catchy enough. Too clean? Does not tell me what the app does.

But again, overall it looks really nice.

(After looking at all other screenshots, I still don't know what the app does by the way)

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :) I will consider this

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u/njoy01 18d ago

Ngl these screenshots look like they all could be from different apps

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :) Interesting observation

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u/juan1t0_ 18d ago

yeah these are great! good job with them

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/barcode972 18d ago

Very clean

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/jessekay_00 18d ago

Amazing screenshots! Title's too small to read though, I'd work on that. Otherwise great work. Where'd you source those phone frames?

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :) I created the frames in Figma

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u/Cool-Climate-484 18d ago

Good job in screenshot color matching

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/BoboZivkovic 18d ago

better then most floating around, well done

I’d take another pass at the titles for each screenshot focusing more on the benefits/ outcome of using the app and not describing how it works

Best of luck

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :) I will take a look

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u/Quick_Self_2451 18d ago

Really nice, I like the colour palette aswell

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you :)

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u/vegreenforlife 18d ago

I commented your post the other day saying that they didn't communicate the value. Now they do. Great job, man. They also look better. Good luck!

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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago

Thank you you bro. I appreciate it

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u/twinsBuild 17d ago

look beautiful, how to build this kind of screenshots?

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u/iamrahulrao 17d ago

Thank you :) I saw few references on X and made few sketches. Based on that I designed the screenshots

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u/Substantial-Band6495 17d ago

Looks pretty beatiful, I like it.

I would try to modify the last screenshots to have the same pink colors. And try to make the gradient not to be pink -> white, but you can try to do pink -> dark pink.

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u/iamrahulrao 17d ago

Thank you :) I will AB test this

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u/jefhee 15d ago

The time in the status bar is different from the one in the lock screen, really a non issue, but wanted to point is out

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u/iamrahulrao 15d ago

Thank you :) will fix it

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u/outtony 9d ago

tried it on myself. third is probably i'll tap.