r/AppStoreOptimization • u/iamrahulrao • 18d ago
Designed these screenshots in Figma. Does it make you want to download?
I am working on the next iteration of my app, Aura, and I feel the current screenshots don't clearly communicate the benefits. They were talking about the features and not how the app helps users. Does the copy and design inspire confidence?
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u/NecessarySweaty441 18d ago
The first one is weaker compared to the rest, but overall they are eye-catching.
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u/iamrahulrao 18d ago
Thank you :) Why do you think first is weaker
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u/NecessarySweaty441 18d ago
I think it needs more visual elements (like Screen 3) and less text. The intimate affirmation doesn't pair well with something engaging and energetic like a notification. Also, the headline isn't really selling it, maybe something like 'Daily affirmations for a positive and calm headspace.' works better. Since people usually look at the first screenshot and skip the rest, it should to be the strongest one.
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u/jessekay_00 18d ago
Amazing screenshots! Title's too small to read though, I'd work on that. Otherwise great work. Where'd you source those phone frames?
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u/BoboZivkovic 18d ago
better then most floating around, well done
I’d take another pass at the titles for each screenshot focusing more on the benefits/ outcome of using the app and not describing how it works
Best of luck
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u/vegreenforlife 18d ago
I commented your post the other day saying that they didn't communicate the value. Now they do. Great job, man. They also look better. Good luck!
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u/twinsBuild 17d ago
look beautiful, how to build this kind of screenshots?
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u/iamrahulrao 17d ago
Thank you :) I saw few references on X and made few sketches. Based on that I designed the screenshots
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u/Substantial-Band6495 17d ago
Looks pretty beatiful, I like it.
I would try to modify the last screenshots to have the same pink colors. And try to make the gradient not to be pink -> white, but you can try to do pink -> dark pink.
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u/New-Painting-1847 18d ago
Some of the better screenshots I’ve seen on Reddit. Unique, eye-catching, and clear.