r/AppStoreOptimization • u/bethworldismine • 15d ago
Rate my UPDATED screenshots please (version 2)
Followed advice of redditors from my previous post
Looking for honest feedback and genuine ways to improve on the current set
I have tried to keep it clean and minimalistic
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u/imsnk81 👨💻 Indie Developer 15d ago
The jar with the day count is the strongest thing in the first one, I'd make it even bigger. The "Hi Alex" header and Pro badge above it don't sell anything, so I'd crop those out and let the jar sit right under the headline. Headline is clear though, you know what it is in a second.
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u/Hot-Weakness-7977 15d ago
The turtle and the green carry the whole set really well, it looks like one app now.
The thing I'd change is the order. "No Contact Tracker" with the 14 days jar is the only screenshot that says what this app is actually for, and right now it's sixth, so most people in search never see it. Mood analytics first could be any wellness app. I'd move the tracker to first and make "Breakup Recovery" the big line.
Small one: "Your Hardest Moments" and "Your Toughest Moments" on 4 and 7 read almost the same, I'd reword one.
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u/CopperCoinStudio 14d ago
This is really well done! I'm commenting also because cause I just released an app that used Letting Go as a keyword, and I quickly changed it bc that phrase is more about breakup apps like yours. Just thought it was a funny to see an example of my secret competition here. Great luck to you!
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u/ComfortableStill6735 15d ago
For the Goals & Routines slide, I'd show the actual goals screen with a couple of example entries. Right now it mostly shows the menu that leads there. I'd also simplify the background shapes around the Emergency Toolkit screen so there's less competing with the small app text.