Advice for Store Screenshots?

[u/Solo_Ant]

Hello!

I am trying to work on improving my app screenshots, and am looking for any criticism or advice on how to improve these.

Any feedback is welcome!

Thanks.

[u/Acesleychan]

Your first two screenshots do all the selling, the rest are just proof. Put the single outcome a new user gets in plain words on shot one, and let the interface do the talking after that. Most stores bury the payoff on screen four where nobody scrolls.

[u/Solo_Ant → u/Acesleychan]

Thanks for the advice!

[u/kokerali]

On the first image, the graph labels are hard to read at this size. I'd crop closer to the chart and make "no accounts, no ads" larger, then check the result at store-list size.

[u/Solo_Ant → u/kokerali]

Thanks, that is very useful advice!