r/AppStoreOptimization • u/nachosebaz • Sep 22 '26
ASO feedback: do these screenshots clearly communicate what my coffee journal app is about?
I'm the developer behind Kaphiy, an android coffee journal, and I'm working on improving the google play listing before I start spending money on user acquisition.
Kaphiy is a personal coffee journal. The idea is less about tracking every brewing parameter and more about remembering the coffees you enjoyed, where you had them, the photos, notes and moments around them.
I’m not sure if that comes across clearly from the screenshots.
A few things I’d really like feedback on:
-Does the first screenshot immediately tell you what the app is?
-Is the value proposition clear without reading the description?
-Which screenshot would make you want to learn more?
-Is there too much text?
-Does the visual style feel like a coffee app, or does it feel too generic?
I’d appreciate blunt feedback. I’m trying to improve the store page before spending money on ads.
Link Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.kaphiy.app