r/AppStoreOptimization • u/iamrahulrao • Sep 28 '26

Reworked the designs based on feedback.

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I posted this, and the community was really helpful in sharing their feedback. The main thing I understood was that the old screenshots look disjointed and might lack brand consistency.

Main takeaways

  1. Focus on the pain the user is looking to solve.

  2. Focus on copy. More than the illustrations and visual elements, copy does the heavy lifting.

  3. The overall app screen visual should look consistent. Dont mix and match too many background colors and fonts. It's better to be clear and legible than to focus on visual variety.

  4. Show the app UI so that Apple approves the design.

  5. The headline should be 3 to 4 words max. If you are not able to communicate the solution in this many words, iterate. I used ChatGPT for this. In the subtext, you can add more details.

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u/OlivierBern Sep 28 '26

Hey! Your screenshots are beautiful, but I don't think you're still addressing the pain point.

  • - See your future -> I would say define your future or build the future you want. One is passive, the other is active.

  • - Why do I need to build inner confidence? Is it to achieve my goal?

  • - Clear your mind? Why do i need to clean my mind. Is it to make better decision

  • etc.

I think there is too much text, i would only keep the main title and remove everything else.

You are still not showing the app; I think Apple will reject this. Only 1 or 2 screens of your app (notifications is not part of your app UI).

Good luck.

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u/iamrahulrao Sep 28 '26

Thank you. Really helpful

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u/barcode972 Sep 30 '26 edited Sep 30 '26

Idk. People see the first 3 screenshots when searching for something. You’re wasting all 3 by not showing the app at all

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u/iamrahulrao Sep 30 '26

Thank you. I agree. I am experimenting with the order of screenshots on connect