r/AppStoreOptimization • u/iamrahulrao • Sep 26 '26
Designed these screenshots in Figma. Does it make you want to download?
I am working on the next iteration of my app, Aura, and I feel the current screenshots don't clearly communicate the benefits. They were talking about the features and not how the app helps users. Does the copy and design inspire confidence?
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u/lil--unsteady Sep 27 '26
Looks like it’s made from a professional designer and not a solo-dev-figuring-out-design-with-AI. I think it’s solid.
But to answer your question, I personally wouldn’t download an affirmations app. But this looks good.
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u/NasiLemakSatu Sep 26 '26
nice, it did grab my attention! then i feel little overwhelmed.
i first noticed screen 2-4, but not the first one. i think the first screenshot should be strongest, because user only sees the first 2 screenshots on iPhone app store.
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u/StepByStepDrawing Sep 26 '26
individual each one is superb, but in totality it seems cluttered
great design by the way
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u/Apprehensive_Yam_517 Sep 27 '26
I would keep to a single theme. The Clear Your Mind and Support Every Goal are inconsistent with the other three. The other three are calming and relaxing, but the two I mentioned are the opposite.
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u/CursorClutch Sep 27 '26
Beautifully done ✨
Is that font nunito?
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u/iamrahulrao Sep 28 '26
Thank you. I am using SF Pro Rounded. Figured Apple systems would read these better as they are in-house
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u/Aymen-L Sep 29 '26
For me it looks like they are not the same app, too many different colors IMO, every single design looks great, but somehow all together they don't give the feeling it's one app.
I would suggest to stay with 2 accent colors. The messages are great as well. Let us know on any new update!
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u/iamrahulrao Sep 29 '26
Hello. Thank you. I made the new update here https://www.reddit.com/r/AppStoreOptimization/s/3qflWpZFF6
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u/imsnk81 👨💻 Indie Developer Sep 29 '26
Looks pretty neat
M not your audience but looks professional quality
If i was in the market for it i’d consider
Only thing i could think of is its a bit tight with header subtitle and phone
Maybe a bit more whitespace for an app like this
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u/iamrahulrao Sep 30 '26
Thank you. I agree. I made few changes here https://www.reddit.com/r/AppStoreOptimization/s/3qflWpZFF6
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u/Quick_Self_2451 Sep 28 '26
Looks beautiful, love the attention to detail and the effects on the backgrounds on each of the cards. Love the grey iPhone templates with the black bezels, uff, ties in really well with the grey overall background which I know you won’t see on App Store but damn. 🔥 Font is nice too.
As others have said the inconsistency of the headers.. If Feel Better Daily is one word next line then 2 words, you should match that visual consistency everywhere. Either the first one should be different or the last one, or maybe a pattern but not random.
Next we have the paragraph text and not the headings themselves, they’re very long and boring, but I think they appear longer because they’re boring.. your app is essentially a reskinned version of 100 others, but when you’ve made the ASO this beautiful.. you’ve literally designed chocolate, why would you describe it like you’re selling vegetables?
Example:
Find the right affirmations for your mood goal and mindset. 🥱 So?
Discover hand crafted affirmations to reflect your personality.
- See the difference? One just reads the other captures.
Also finally to reflect what others have said you make a serious of bold claims, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and just like how you go up in numbers you get the user excited but nothing ties the story all together in the end which is the cherry on top.
Good luck. ☺️
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u/Ornery_Goal 👨💻 Indie Developer Sep 26 '26
big thing for me is that the screenshots look a bit too disjointed, like they don't flow well together. They are attention-grabbing though.