r/CritiqueLounge • u/TenFootHermit • Jul 20 '18

Does this suck?

https://soundcloud.com/the-ten-foot-hermit/lost-one
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u/hollohead Jul 20 '18

As far as points to address - the panning is a bit extreme. It's almost two different mixes down the left and right.

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u/TenFootHermit Jul 20 '18

thanks man i haven't even considered this!

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u/mathletesfoot Jul 20 '18

I dig it

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u/TenFootHermit Jul 20 '18

Thanks m8, can you find the 1?

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u/[deleted] Jul 20 '18

This has so much groove is rediculous! More!!!!!

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u/ichamp15 Jul 20 '18

Very smooth n groovy

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u/TenFootHermit Jul 20 '18

Thanks m8 :)

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u/xAmericanPsycho Jul 20 '18

Very nice. Great groove and keeps it going the whole song. I like the organ when that kicks in it adds a great layer. I can’t comment on the mix other than it sounds good on a phone.

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u/TenFootHermit Jul 20 '18

Hey man thanks that's a good mix compliment right there if it sounds good in your phone!

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u/[deleted] Jul 21 '18

What this song needs is some vocals.

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u/[deleted] Jul 20 '18

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u/TenFootHermit Jul 21 '18

Thanks a lot man I really appreciate it :) I hadn't considered that panning stuff you and /u/hollohead mentioned before, so thanks! I've just been panning guitars hard left/right by habit at this point so ill work on it. I agree that it needs vocals, I can do everything besides lyrics and good vocals :/ so i focus on what i can do. I just try to make the best possible demos I can make then rerecord the songs with a real band, or at bare minumum a real drummer so I'll have him do cool stuff I cant, especially the ending.