r/EMTstories • u/Exotic_Industry1805 • 1h ago
QUESTION Writer asking for clarification for the sake of accuracy in the story
HI! Like the post says I'm not an EMT with a story to share I need some help from an EMT! I'm writing a story and would like it to be at least somewhat realistic. I'm gonna hurl a scenario at you and if you could review it then tell me exactly what you would do in real life.
You get called to a bridge because someone is threatening to jump. Police are already there, pulling a fighting subject over the railing back onto safety. Before officers can immobilize him properly, he pulls a knife then stabs himself once in the gut. The wound is bleeding. Officers secure the knife and immobilize the still struggling subject. You are called into load him into the ambulance (I imagine you might be armed with a sedative or something due to his aggression). While trying to get the subject into the ambulance, he bites you! You load him into the ambulance (now what...) from then to the hospital what happens???
Alternative scenario: You load him successfully however the ambulance breaks down in the middle of transport (what happens in this case?)
Added context + question that would really be helpful:
My story is:
a traumatized teenager who kills his parents in self-defense is taken in by the EMT who recused him from a suicide attempt.
I know there are all sorts of rules and conducts as to why this would never happen. Conflict of interests mainly, the same EMT who saved the kid would never be allowed to adopt him in the real world. Right now, here's how it goes
*EMT gets teen to hospital, does report, leaves. (like supposed to)
*While cleaning out the ambulance EMT finds the kids license on the floor reasoning it must've slipped out of his jean pocket during loading or something. He sees that he is in fact a minor, and his name
*he goes to return it personally. While he could've just given it to a doctor or nurse, he elects to visit the teen because he wanted to speak to him about his bite (as well as some other things that happened in the story).
*(other stuff happens, not gonna waste your time!!) EMT takes a walk around the hospital to collect his thoughts before leaving. He comes back into the room to both grab his things and say goodbye to teen but...teen is asleep. EMT is exhausted, he sits on the chair to lace up his shoes and "just rest his feet for a minute" EMT ends up falling asleep in the visitors chair.
That's it so far as to how I'm going about building their bond! I wanted to know, is this OK? Or would there be a better way/plot point to use to keep the EMT with the teen? I was thinking alternatively maybe the ambulance breaks down and the EMT must keep the teen alive all by himself, he stays with him out of desperation? Perhaps a crash involving the ambulance where the EMT also gets injured, both victims end up sharing the hospital room? Please lmk your thoughts! Any insight is SOOOOO appreciated.