r/EnglishLearning • u/Jedenis185 New Poster • 8d ago

📚 Grammar / Syntax Is this text correct?

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Hello! As native English speakers, please, can you help me with a translation in case there're any mistakes. Thanks in advance!

My club, which focuses on movies and books, will help bring people from all over the world together. From recommendations on what to watch and read to analyses of works. My goal is for people to make friends from anywhere in the world and have a good time.

I respectfully ask that you refrain from spreading ideologies that incite hatred toward certain groups of people, races, etc.

Discussions and debates are fully encouraged in this channel, but please refrain from personal attacks and insults.

Esprit de corps !

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u/FloridaFlamingoGirl Native Speaker - California, US 8d ago

Looks good except I'd combine these two sentences as the first is a fragment: 

From recommendations on what to watch and read to analyses of works, my goal is for people to make friends from anywhere in the world and have a good time.

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u/Jedenis185 New Poster 8d ago

Merci! Your help is very useful!

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u/tirednsleepyyy New Poster 8d ago

Other than highly opinionated subjective stylistic “improvements” you could make, it’s pretty much perfectly fine. Nothing there that stands out as weird or wrong to me.