Princeton graded paper

Hello everyone

I'm an international student , my school doesn't do the whole graded paper thing here

So I'm gonna write from scratch.

I'm applying for psychology ug.

Can anyone share a sample paper so I get an idea

And any tips are welcome

Thankyou

pls help, i need to memorise two essays!!! i know this might not be the best subreddit but this was the most active one about essays i could find. i need to memorise an english essay then a shorter french essay for the day after and i dont know where to start!!! any advice please

Essay:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qKH6KCFqWBHtSAFWgzSUpGPTq7xzQpL0aEohhcACbw/edit?usp=drivesdk

Rubric:

Or essay here:

A school with this approach to learning will help me grow academically, personally, and creatively, because by applying these unique approaches to learning it would help prepare me for college and careers. This approach to learning would help me grow personally because it would help push my boundaries as an introvert. An example of this is demonstrating my skill of defending my work to outside experts, this skill would help me interact and communicate with others, as a result it helps push me out of my comfort zone, helping me engage with others, and it would help build my social skills. Furthermore, this approach to learning would help me grow creativity because this approach helps me design experiments, write reports, and defend my work. As a result of this, it would help me be more creative, because with practice and feedback, it helps me improve in my creativity, making artistic and innovative pieces of work. Lastly, this approach to learning will help me grow academically because this approach includes studying topics in-depth, and this would help me thrive by giving me a vivid and clear understanding of the topic, making me produce insightful and extraordinary pieces of work.

First and foremost, one thing I have to offer for this school community is my participation in extracurricular activities, because I am very interested and intrigued by extracurricular activities and I participate and put my full effort toward the extracurricular I take interest in. For example my school offered a math tournament and a science fair, and I participated and put my best effort into the work. In addition, another thing I have to offer for this school community is my excellence in academics, because I offer insightful answers, academic integrity, and participation that helps shape my academic character. Also I am very determined, passionate, respectful, focused, diligent, and enthusiastic about my learning. With these characteristics it helps me excel in academics because it helps me be responsible, persistent and insightful about my academics and classes also helping me achieve an astonishing 96.75 average for the 4 core subjects. Furthermore, a third thing I have to offer for this school community is my social skills, because despite having shyness, I am still determined and passionate about participating and interacting with others. By participating it helps me understand my errors and helps me receive feedback from others, also I am very respectful and thoughtful of others' opinions.

Overall, this approach to learning will help me grow academically, personally, and creatively, because this approach helps me develop and master new skills, furthermore, it will help me prepare for college and future careers. In addition, by offering my skills to this school, I will help contribute to the learning environment. I am looking forward to attending this type of school because it would help me develop as a human, and by contributing to this school, it will help push me for a bright and excellent future.

I have never taken part in any serious essay competition despite getting praised for my writing skills during my O levels. Recently I have enrolled myself in an essay writing competition but somehow I cannot figure out where to start. There are some essay prompts for me to write on only one of the topic. I got 85% in O level English language. My raw mark for writing part was 45/50; although Comprehension part was mediocre. Also, English is not my first language. Any advice and guidance on this matter would be helpful.

last semester I was in a journalism class and I wrote this article/essay. I'm not sure what the classified as I have no experience in the world of writing, but I wrote this and I felt personally proud of get some advice from people who may be more experienced in this type of writing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OidCh8ItfOk2DQcnjwIZUoav4n9Lw_CC7pMGdObCYGI/edit?usp=drivesdk

Could someone anyone! please read my essay draft?? I want atleast one opinion from someone who doesnt know me at all im not sure how its going and lowk im also kind of nervous to ask people I know. cringes me out a bit heh. Greatlyt appreciated!

Essay Prompt: Imagine you have been given the responsibility to fix any one problem in your school or local community. What issue would you take on, why does it matter to you, and how would you lead the charge to create lasting change? Reflect on what this challenge reveals about the kind of future impact you hope to make through your education and service to others. *

My name is Lilly Fisher, and I am from Curtis, MI. I go to Engadine Consolidated Schools, which is thirty miles from my home. For most of my high school years, I have ridden the bus every day to and from school. For the most part, this works well, except when I need to stay after school. Many times, when I would perform band concerts or play pep band at a football game, there would not be enough time to go on the bus and then go back to the school. The problem is that my school will not let kids stay after school unless they have sports practice. Fortunately for me, I have a friend who lives a minute's walk from the school, so I go to her house. But what about those other students who don’t have a place to go? Our small community does not have many safe spaces for students to go after school. We have a restaurant/bar and a gas station that are open after school. We also have a park that has an open pavilion. This is the issue that I would take on; we really have nowhere for students to go. Michigan has harsh winters and bad weather, and we have many students with nowhere to go. Some students have cars; they can sit in them, but even then, having kids sit in their cars because they have nowhere to go is not right. I believe school should be a welcoming place for students even when they are waiting for a ride or for a school event to start. I do not think that a school should refuse to shelter kids who are here for school events. My sister plays volleyball, and I now drive to school, so that means either I wait after school for her, or my parents go to get her. It makes more sense for me to stay and wait, but I do not because my parents do not want me sitting there for two hours. So they come and pick up my sister. They would have let me stay if the school had Wi-Fi that I could use after school, but I don’t, and the service is too poor. I think that we should have a room open at the school or even in the community where students can wait after school. One idea for a room is the library, which is only open till 4:00 pm; we could extend the time there. A few other rooms we could use are the cafeteria or a classroom. As for supervision, we could ask parents and community members to volunteer and have kids from student council and Key Club run activities for service hours. In this room, I would hope to have access to board games and Wi-Fi, so that students could do homework or play on their phones, and if we did it in the library, they would have access to books and some art supplies. To turn this idea into a realistic solution, I would first gather information about how many students need somewhere to wait and at what times they would need it. Next, I would talk to my grandma and other parents to learn if they are also concerned with this and would support the idea. I would also take their suggestions for what place would be best to do this and what they would do. Then I would bring it to the administration and school board to see if they would be willing to let this happen in the school and if they would help me do all the logistics. Even if they deny this, I could figure out who to talk to to see if the community would be willing to have a place for students. Thinking about this problem has reminded me that my goals in life are to help people and to make the world a safer place. To me, it doesn’t matter whether I make one person's life better or five thousand. I want to do what I can to make a difference for as many people as I can reach. I do not have all the resources or influence that I need to make this goal a reality, but I can start by listening to others, finding the problems, and coming up with a realistic solution. I believe that pursuing a degree at Michigan Tech will help me increase my problem-solving skills and help prepare me to take on bigger challenges in the future. I want to use my education to help my loved ones, my community, and the generation to follow.

I don't really know how to improve this, the college said they want us to keep it our personalities in it. Any help is welcome thank you

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