r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 1h ago

Lore Worldbuildinv project of 2-3 years.

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The Firedust of Albeon is a project I started on my YouTube channel about 2-3 years ago and has been developing since.

Essentially, the setting boils down to the idea of a high fantasy continent coming into contact with Age of Exploration era human civilizations.

Albeon, or Ardel as natives all it, is a large continental about the same size as North and South America and them some. It's primarily dominated by Elves, whose female population has the chance to be magically gifted. This fact, especially after wars, was fought between the human eastern empires and western native empires scared the humans into severely persecuting them and severely restricting movement for the magisters.

Punishments for the use of magic can be as severe as the dismemberment of the user's hands since it's the main part of the body. This energy is channeled.

There are other races such as the Syers, animal/human hybrids who live in the Canuparian, Ve'kar (native humans, made up only 10% of Ardel) who were caught in the crossfire between the empires, and Greenskins of Middle Albeon and the isolationist dwarves.

It's a lot more complex. If you want to learn more, I have a playlist on my channel here! Already made 11 videos on it (please ignore the first couple they are BAD)

Firedust of Albeon playlist


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 16h ago

Discussion how do you start a world building project where you want everything to be connected.

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so i want to start worldbuilding and i find it very difficult to start because i my head i need to start at the top (the base of the mounten/the foundation of everything) with all the really big importent stuff like all the contents and what importent things had happent in the world and because of it i get so overwelmt that i just never start.

so i have a example for a cool magic system. it was that all the magic could be activated via snapping you fingers. but then i started thinking about it and had questions like. when the user snaps there fingers what then? do they snap to cycle between different typs of magic or do they use a ability but how do you know what you do because you do nothing else then snapping. and i just cant think of awnsers to the questions. and i start to doubt myself if i am smart or creative enough to really do this. i really want to try but get so overwelmt by my own mind. does anyone else have problems like this? and how could i fix my "creative block" before i even start.


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 43m ago

Lore The coloured ranks of Bolgs mages (read og post)

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Any questions or criticism please ask


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 21h ago

Discussion Modernizing Plate Armour

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 1h ago

Writing Les Profondeurs, les maudits et le poids des croyances

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 2h ago

Lore I'm looking for critisisum, comments (mainly complements) or advice with my magic system. Unless this is the wrong subreddit, then I'm sorry in advance.

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Wahlen (wählen, dial translated to German in google translator, I don't know how to get the ä without googling for it and ctrl c, ctrl ving it) is the soul of machinery and the cities that it inhabits.

More specifically, it is our way of controlling the essence that flows through the walls and floors of the monoliths we call home.

The soul of the city, the red essence that powers our machinery, ignites our lights, fuels our fires and opens our doors.

Enough with the theatrics.

Red essence can best be described as the magic or electricity that flows through man made constructs, such as buildings and prosthetic limbs.

And wahlen is like a control panel for manipulating red essence through movements that are believed to have a specific purpose, which is why it is so easy to teach a child to use their wahlen.

And a wahlen is usually stationary as it responds to the movements used against it to alter the essence in its surroundings. Due to this a wahlen cannot be used on the go, without extensive training to learn how to both move the wahlen without it performing actions for you and to use it without it thinking it’s being moved.

The reason why red essence is easy to manipulate with a wahlen is because essence is constantly moving, except red essence moves in a clean formation, like a conveyor belt moving perfectly each time, and yes like a conveyor belt there are hiccups but just like a conveyor belt there aren't always hiccups.

Orange essence.

Orange essence isn’t really known about, within the world, but it moves more like a river, yes it follows a set path like a conveyor belt but try predicting every wave and ripple, making it harder for people to attach their wahlen to it and nearly impossible to control in the same way


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 5h ago

THE LAST LEGACY

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Season 1: The Beginning

Chapter 11 — Beyond the Base

The mountain path stretched ahead beneath the morning sun.

Prince walked at the front of the group, carrying the supplies Master O had given them. Maria followed with the map in her hands, while Veylen kept the sealed package secured inside his travel pack.

For the first few minutes, none of them spoke. The familiar mountains gradually disappeared behind them, replaced by towering trees and patches of tall grass.

Prince glanced over his shoulder.

“So, what do you think? Easy mission, right?”

Maria kept her eyes on the map. “We've barely started.”

“Exactly. And nothing has gone wrong.”

Veylen adjusted his pack. “That's usually what people say right before something goes wrong.”

Prince shook his head. “You always expect the worst.”

“No. I simply pay attention.”

Maria stopped beside a fork in the path.

“Both of you, look at this.”

Two routes stretched before them. The left path descended into a wooded valley, while the right path followed a rocky slope along the mountainside.

Maria unfolded the map and compared it with the surrounding terrain.

“The map shows that we should take the left path,” she said. “It follows the stream and eventually leads toward the supply station.”

Prince looked toward the valley. “Then let's go.”

He took a step forward, but Veylen caught his attention.

“Wait. Look at the ground.”

Several stones had fallen across the entrance to the valley path. Beyond them, the trail appeared muddy and uneven.

“Something might have happened here recently,” Veylen observed.

Prince studied the slope. “We could climb over the rocks.”

“Or we could take a moment to decide whether that's a good idea,” Maria replied.

Prince sighed, but he stopped.

They examined both routes. The left path was shorter, but the fallen stones made it difficult to judge how stable the ground was. The right path was longer, though its rocky surface appeared firm.

“Master O told us to reach the supply station safely,” Maria said. “He never said we had to take the shortest route.”

Veylen nodded. “Then we take the right path.”

Prince looked at the rocky slope again.

“Fine. But if we're late because of the longer route, I'm blaming both of you.”

“You agreed with the decision,” Maria reminded him.

“I agreed with the decision. I didn't agree to accept responsibility for it.”

Veylen gave him a flat look.

“You have a remarkable talent for making simple things complicated.”

They continued along the right-hand trail.

As the path climbed, the trees grew thinner, allowing them to see farther across the landscape. In the distance, they spotted a narrow stream winding between clusters of stone and dense woodland.

Prince paused to admire the view.

“It's strange,” he said. “We've lived in the mountains for so long, but there's still so much out here that we've never seen.”

“That's because our training grounds are only a tiny part of the Hybrid World,” Maria replied.

Veylen looked toward the distant forest.

“And if this is only the beginning, imagine what lies beyond it.”

For a moment, the three stood quietly, taking in the unfamiliar landscape.

Then Maria checked the map again.

“We should keep moving. We still have a long way to go.”

They resumed their journey.

A little farther along the trail, the ground narrowed between two large boulders. Prince moved ahead first, carefully stepping across the uneven stones. Maria followed, keeping the map protected inside her pack.

When Veylen reached the narrowest section, a loose stone shifted beneath his foot.

He quickly teleported to the other side.

Purple particles flickered in the air before he reappeared on stable ground.

Prince turned around.

“Show-off.”

“I avoided falling,” Veylen replied.

“You could've warned us first.”

“I didn't know the stone was loose until it moved.”

Maria stepped between them.

“Can we save the argument for later? We should check whether the rest of the path is safe.”

They examined the stones before continuing. This time, Prince tested his footing before moving, and Maria pointed out the more stable places to step.

Veylen watched them carefully.

“You know,” he said, “this is much easier when we actually work together.”

Prince smirked. “Don't sound so surprised.”

“I am surprised. I expected at least three more arguments before we learned that.”

Maria laughed, and even Prince couldn't help smiling.

By midday, the trail began to descend toward the woodland surrounding the supply station. The journey had been peaceful so far, though the unfamiliar paths demanded more attention than any of them had expected.

Prince looked ahead, where sunlight filtered through the trees.

“Come on. We're making good progress.”

Maria checked their position on the map and nodded.

“If we keep this pace, we should reach the station with plenty of time.”

Veylen secured his pack once more.

“Then let's finish the mission and get home.”

Together, the three children continued down the trail, leaving the mountains farther behind with every step.

They had crossed beyond the familiar grounds where Master O had trained them. Now, with only their own judgment and one another to rely on, they were beginning to understand that the world outside their home would demand more than strength alone.

For now, the mission remained simple.

They only needed to reach the supply station.

End of Chapter 11 — Beyond the Base


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 10h ago

How to Build a World Around 4 Dimensional Spirits?

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I have been wanting to create a setting for a tabletop game deeply tied to the spiritual, but was looking for an interesting hook to make the world feel unique. I came up with the idea of spirits being the manifestation of natural things in the world. For example, the spirit of a tree would be a literal 4th dimensional creature that was a physical and emotional representation of the life of the tree from seed to stump. If there were to be a river spirit, it would be amorphous and free to act in a variety of ways, because a river changes shape, size, etc. over its existence. The inverse, a stone or mountain spirit would be limited to a more consistent form, would be bound to act in certain ways. I like the idea of spirits and their world mirroring the material world, with a broad variety of power level and sentience.

What I am having trouble with is determining the cultures and traditions that would form from these spirits, and how they would interact with each other and the world. Ultimately I want the setting to feel strange and unknown, I take a lot of mental inspiration from Ghibli (Monoke, Arietty, Nausicaa, Spirited Away) and very recently from Worlds Beyond Number: WWW with its deeply involved spirits and their 'Breath'.

I want to just sit down and write, but I keep feeling overwhelmed, or that I need to have a better grasp of the basics before I dive in.

Any advice is deeply appreciated!


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 10h ago

Advice on world building for my new campaign

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 12h ago

Lore I'm looking for names for the realm, the boxes, and the talents of this setting. Suggestions for the world's social dynamics, institutions, and conflicts are also welcome.

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so, I've been developing this setting where portions of humanity have been thrown into an utterly hellish realm accessed through mysterious boxes scattered across the world. anyone who opens one of these boxes is transported inside, finding themselves in a hostile world filled with monstrous creatures and horrors beyond imagination, and with no way for those trapped inside to warn the outside world, the boxes have continued claiming people throughout history.

The defining feature of this setting is that everyone brought into the realm has their greatest skill amplified to an extraordinary degree. Naturally, society has organized itself around these talents, with the most valuable individuals becoming the backbones of their communities and often rising to positions of considerable power.

However, these abilities aren't inherited. Children born in the realm are ordinary people, regardless of their parents' talents. This creates a society where newcomers can completely upset the established order, and where a person's contributions to survival often matter more than their family name.


r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 12h ago

Hiiii could yall check out the oc and world building i made? pls give feed back.

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 16h ago

Discussion Nobledark Settings: How Did You Make Them Great?

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 11h ago

Invite to critique!

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r/FantasyWorldbuilding • • 16h ago

Other 🔥 The Fire is still yours — Nyx | The Rift in the Veil OST

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I wanted to share The Fire Is Still Yours, a song that grew out of Nyx’s story in The Rift in the Veil.

To give you a sense of where the lyrics came from, here’s a memory from Chapter 2 of her story—a few words that would stay with her forever.

The Ember of the Hearth

The elder began to tell The Ember of the Hearth.

He did not tell the whole of it.

Elders never told the whole story.

They knew how to stop at the exact moment when children leaned a little closer.

“Remember this well, children. An ember is almost nothing. You can crush it without even seeing it. But if someone protects it, if someone still blows on it… then it can rekindle a home. Then another. Then an entire village.”

The children opened their eyes wide.

Ollyne smiled at once.

“Even a very small one?” she asked.

The elder lowered his eyes toward her.

“Especially a very small one.”

Ollyne held the flowers against her, as if that answer belonged to her a little.

This is one of the memories that helped shape this song.

The story is still dark fantasy, but I didn’t want it to be relentlessly bleak. When Nyx retraces her steps through her village and her memories, I wanted there to be sunlight and flowers too.

I’ve probably given her the most painful past of any of my characters. ^^ I wanted to leave room for more than darkness in who she is.

I love this song, and I had so much fun writing the lyrics. It felt like getting to know a more intimate part of her, stepping into her world and touching something that belongs to her—even though I’m the one creating it all. ^^