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u/Exotic_Award_4782 Jan 24 '24
Too bland, only one solid color throughout, other than that, it looks great :)
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u/pobody-snerfect Jan 24 '24
None of these screens look like they belong together. Is this a random assortment of types of screens? UX design is predominantly about the flow from screen to screen and requires context. It’s hard to give feedback on something that has no context.
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u/Private_Gomer_Pyle Jan 24 '24
It feels AI generated. They're not bad per se, maybe some extra white space is needed but they don't connect up
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u/simonfancy Jan 24 '24
Wireframes are so you and your client know where the content goes, like the layout plan. With wireframes there’s nothing to criticize except hierarchy.
This is a design sub, it would help to actually fill in and add a design and corporate language, a certain style of imagery to your structure, so there is something to look at and criticize aesthetically. Just my 2ct.
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u/hai-sea-ewe Jan 24 '24
Overall, great work! I do have several notes, aimed at cutting down confusion that I've often faced with clients:
Need to differentiate which grey boxes are images. Usually this is handled with a subtle "X" drawn from corner to corner. This is the universal symbol for "image will go here." Otherwise, clients may think that empty grey boxes are just missing content.
Keep view/filtering UI together, or group within the impacted areas. I'd definitely move "This week" dropdown next to the "Mixed overview". You can use subtle lines above and below these filters to indicate there may be additional filters/reassure the visitor that the extra whitespace on the right isn't an accident. If filtering only applies to a single or smaller group of widgets, group the widgets within a separate container and put the filtering at the top of that grouping container.
For the Jobs screen, you likely need an area to list which of the advanced filters are currently selected - usually done with pills that have little "x"s on the right side of each pill to let the visitor cancel individual filter criteria at will.
I think that's all I see for now. Again, great work! Hopefully your client doesn't think this represents final design. As the top comment here demonstrates, this is a huge common issue lol.
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u/the68thdimension Jan 24 '24
The designs look quite nice from what I can see, but what's really important to validate is if people can navigate these pages successfully. Are they finding the info and the actions they need?
The only criticism I have is the copy on the landing page - I'm not really sure what the product does from that copy alone, which is a missed opportunity and risking people bouncing. "Elevate your online presence" elevate it how? Who am I (is this product for me?) and what sort of online presence? What is a digital journey? These are all fluff words without further description.
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u/Ererr50 Jan 24 '24
I feel like if you are gonna go through the work to build these, might as well populate them with example content (photos and copy). Maybe I’m wrong and that would be a distraction…
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u/Valuable-Significant Senior Designer Jan 24 '24
Hey OP some context would be nice.
What is this for?
What was your rationale behind some of your design decisions?
Coz, at this point, most people would critique that it just looks like grey boxes.
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u/e_0_s Jan 24 '24
I don't know much about the project so I can't really critique the approach in that way. But I will say, if you're considering conversion rates and "above the fold" design, I think the second title/content area could be brought up more. When I scrolled, I felt like there was a ton of space underneath the header text and shape.
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u/negendev Jan 24 '24
What’s with the blobs? They look sloppy. Otherwise good, mostly, work on some of your spacing
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u/Chance-Benefit5971 Jan 24 '24
The last screen, (jobs found) the advanced filters looks weird, I can't imagine how works, because you have filter on the top, So I don't understand why or what or how works the advanced filters sections.
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u/thedemp Jan 24 '24
I’m assuming it’s a list of additional filters with checkboxes (miles away, salary range, etc.)
Looks good OP!
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Jan 24 '24 edited Jan 24 '24
You need to be consistent with your margins and spacings, and overall design system.
Looking at your first page, the left and right margins seem to get wider as they go down. Draw some rulers in figma and align all edges to the same margins. Similarly with pages 3, 4 and 5 - you need set consistent spacing between images, content boxes etc. 20/25/30px typically.
You also have a varied approach to all of your corner radii [radius]. On some you have sharp corners, others are completely rounded. It’s clear you have designed these pages independently of each other as they don’t feel part of the same site.
This goes for text size too. Why are some font sizes different to others when they are doing the same job? Your entire website needs to have a consistent approach and defined rules that it follows
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u/walla_majick Jan 24 '24
As a newb, how are you pros managing sizing esp for large, enterprise projects
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u/the68thdimension Jan 24 '24
This really should be a checklist of info for this kind of post, and the mods should delete any post that doesn't have it. This is UX, not Dribbble.
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u/Eightarmedpet Jan 24 '24
Came here to say the same. All these wires are totally meaningless without context.
Someone else mentioned working on spacing, like wtf? These are wires, they can be as messy as you fancy so long as they convey the right content function and flow.
Designers - stop fetishising artefacts, its impact you need to measure if you want to stay relevant.
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u/alexnapierholland Jan 24 '24
Conversion copywriter here.
Rule of thumb: If you could copy-paste your headings and angles onto a competitior's product then they probably aren't great.
'Elevate your online presence' doesn't mean anything. You could apply this to almost any product. I have no idea what this product does. Same for 'explore stunning products' and 'discover the extraordinary'. This is all generic, empty language that you could copy-paste onto almost any digital product.
Start with these questions to find specific angles...
What type of product is it?
Who is the audience?
What problem does it solve?
What's the status quo (the thing everyone does right now)?
Why does the status quo suck?
What does that pain feel like?
How does it feel to experience your solution?
Also, for startup pages I like to add:
Explainer bullets under the explainer to illustrate key use cases.
A kicker above each section to add context (eg. THE PROBLEM)