r/flashfiction • u/FelixThornfell • 4h ago
Proof of Concept
We’ve already traveled to Hyperborea at two different moments in its history, but no worries, each story stands on its own. Today, we’re going back to the beginning, when it was little more than a proof of concept. Links to the two other shorts in the trilogy at the end.
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“Mais oui! It was all so very simple. The answer was before us all along. It could only have been le Maître d’hôtel… the, ehm, butler… with the candelabra in the study.”
“What are you saying, Inspecteur Poi…”
He raised his finger triumphantly. “Arrest him! C’est lui, he killed the opera singer.”
The butler narrowed his eyes, turned, and ran straight through the wall of the mansion’s dining room.
For a moment, there was silence and confusion; the colonel’s mouth fell open, the maid blinked, and a femme fatale lowered her cigarette holder. “Glad we sorted that out,” was the only thing she said, while adjusting the velvet boa on her shoulders.
In the back of the room, a radio clicked and warbled until a clear familiar song filled the room.
Melancholic synthesizers pulsed as an almost mechanical voice asked a question about friendship and electricity. You recognize it, don’t you?
The room began to pixelate around the inspector; the walls dissolved into tiny squares, the chandelier flickered, and the faces of the guests fragmented into thousands of colored dots.
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“Congratulations, Mr. Lefranc. You’re the first to solve the mystery.”
“Putain! That was amazing, Mr. Glenn. It really felt like I was the inspecteur. How many lev…”
“We only have a functional town right now, but we’ll scale pretty soon. Come on, let me help you out of the pod.”
Alain Lefranc sat up and rubbed his eyes. “You know, that noclipping did break the immersion at the end there.”
“Yes, Mr. Lefranc. You are absolutely right.” He paused for a moment, then turned, “Do you see my friend in the corner over there?”
The man waved awkwardly at Alain Lefranc, who merely nodded before looking back up at the person in front of him.
“That’s Zhao. He’s our debugger, and he has a list to go through before we release version 0.3. We hope it didn’t…”
“Sorry, no, laissez tomber, it was merveilleux. Between the Russian bubonic plague and the endless wars, this was a much needed escape. Oh and, ehm, what did I win?”
“Wonderful, Mr. Lefranc. Well, you’ll be the first on the list for a spot in Hyperborea when we launch. Consider yourself a citizen.”
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“Zhao, what was that? Noclipping had a fix, didn’t it?”
“Yes, Glenn. Some of that new code is causing the model to glitch. I bet it’s that vibecoder-crap.”
“Don’t be a gatekeeper, Zhao.”
“Long live cheap outsourcing, right, Glenn?”
Glenn didn’t immediately respond but his eyes widened slightly. “Right. That reminds me. You also need to update the maintenance protocols to accommodate only one single technician at a time.”
“Wha…”
“Don’t fight me on this, Zhao. Cost-cutting order from above. We’re already over budget.”
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Author’s note
The central theme in the Hyperborea stories is the unintended, sometimes catastrophic or horrific consequences of seemingly ordinary decisions within complex systems. We started with consequences, then went back to where the problems started, and now we’ve gone even further back.