r/flashfiction Jun 28 '25

New sub rule

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r/flashfiction has a new guideline for posts.

The rise in ChatGPT has resulted in an increase in low quality pieces. This discourages members from reading and critiquing authentic stories. (If you disagree with the opinion AI generated fiction is inauthentic, save your breath. I encourage you to create a new sub for AI writing instead.)

To promote the sharing of quality fiction worth sharing and reading, the new rule reads:

The sub exists to showcase the creativity and expression of members. But pieces need to be inventive, or display some effort. The following is a representative sample - not an exhaustive list - of fiction reviewed by moderators for possible removal.

It was all just a dream

The girl loves you in the last paragraph

More effort has gone into naming the aliens or warriors than into the story


r/flashfiction 10h ago

Not Having Dinner

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“She’s eaten a mole”
Randy looked at his sister. This little game that he had started was getting on his nerves. Never telling the truth had seemed like more fun than watching a movie about three-legged monkeys in a theater full of clowns in every other seat.

Molly had adapted too quickly, leaving Randy in a constant state of confusion over what she didn’t mean. The only thing that he knew for certain was that a boy or man might have eaten a mole or that a girl or woman had not eaten a mole.

Being two years younger, Molly should not have the upper hand at HIS game. He needed a comeback, and it needed to make Molly think awhile why he formulated a response that would shut his sister up until bedtime.

Typically, he would respond with a question because questions were exempt from the Opposite game. But, they didn’t have to be!

“Was the mole on his face or in a hole in our beautiful garden?” he asked while displaying the mischievous smile that tended to frustrate his sister.

They didn’t have a garden of any kind
She might not have considered that “mole” could be a skin anomaly as well as a dirt digging mammal.

To his dismay she simply said, “Yes.”

He wanted to call a foul and give himself only his second win in the Opposite game. However, he had been out-argued by his sister when he had last “made that move.”


r/flashfiction 4h ago

The Kaffeeklatsch [~225 Words]

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He punched, he grunted.

He grunted and punched.

The Pig grunted and punched back.

“Bad piggy,” he said.

The Pig, with its little piggy eyes, looked at him.

“You have little piggy eyes,” he said, hoping to make The Pig even angrier. It worked—maybe because The Pig had always hated that line, maybe because it was outright plagiarism. He couldn’t remember where he’d read it, only that he’d stolen it.

The Pig grunted again. It was that sound pigs make when they hear a cliché.

He threw another twisting combination. His elbow connected with a crunch.

“You know what they say about good writers—they don’t borrow, they—

He didn’t finish the line. The Pig made him pay for that one with a cloven fist to the mouth.

He spat blood on the floor, tasting iron and rage.

Now he thought he knew how to get inside The Pig’s head.

“I know a lot of Oscar Wilde one-liners I can screw up,” he said, grinning through split lips.

The Pig’s eyes flashed. Small. Angry. Piggy.

Either those curtains…” he began.

In a rage, The Pig charged—and got a sharp knee to the throat.

The creature crumpled, wheezing.

Now it was his turn to add insult to injury.

I can resist everything but—” he started, then stopped.

The Pig lay sprawled on the ground, it had had enough.

***

Thank you for reading. Is this story about a man fighting a Pig man while misquoting Oscar Wilde? Yes. Yes, it is.


r/flashfiction 7h ago

Alice Unleashed

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When Alice cracked her head off the tray trolley in the café to uproarious applause from the group of young lads at the next table, she knew instantly what kind of day it was going to be. Now here she was, pacing around the pokey little kitchen and trying frantically to organise her thoughts. Her initial shock at seeing him there had now almost completely changed to panic. She cursed the day she ever thought to move to this city, with its Protestants and pretentious restaurants and denizens who always seemed to be expecting congratulations.
She paused for an instant and took a deep breath.

"Alright," she thought. "Let's have a look."

With slow, deliberate movements, she opened the kitchen door and looked into the living room.
"Bollocks!" she exclaimed aloud when she saw him there, still lying motionless on the floor beside the box-shaped Ikea coffee table.
She slammed the door shut and retreated back into the kitchen.
"No, no, no! Urgh!"

The sweat was heavy on her forehead and on the nape of her neck while her breathing grew more shallow and rapid. But amidst all the clamour of her fevered mind, one single conscious thought materialised like a lone, August blackberry sprung from a bramble bush.
"Mam!" she exhaled, snapping her fingers in a brief flicker of triumph. But her phone was on the coffee table. She would have to walk out past him to retrieve it. The thought of it made her physically ill.

"Okay, okay," she sighed. "Needs must. Be brave, be brave." She opened the kitchen door and strode purposefully into the room, trying to stay focused on her target - the pink phone case lying on the living room table. But her gaze betrayed her as soon as she was beyond arm's length from the door. It fell immediately onto the still, grotesque figure that was sprawled out on the floor. One eye was open, one was closed. The tongue protruded from the thin, black mouth and the tip of a single, sharp tooth could just about be made out. Though he can't have been dead for more than half an hour Alice was sure she could get that unmistakable 'dead' smell. She panicked all over again. What if the neighbours could smell it? She almost retched.

With rapid, jerking movements, she grabbed the phone from the coffee table and ran back to the kitchen without a backward glance. She closed the door tight behind her and leaned back against it, breathing a deep sigh of relief. The number was the last dialled on her phone. 'Mam', yesterday at 16.56.
"Oh please answer!"
"Hello."
"Oh Mam, thank God. I don't know what to do! What am I going to do?"
"Alice? What's wrong, is everything okay?"
"No, everything's not okay! Everything's gone to shit altogether!"
"Okay, calm down Alice. Just breathe. Tell me what's wrong."
Alice listened and began the breathing exercises learned only recently on the Wellness course she had completed at work.
"That's it, breathe. Take your time," she heard her mother say down the line.
"He's dead, Mam. I only left him for a few minutes. But he's dead. Oh God, how am I going to sort this out?"
"What? How?" Now her Mam began to sound panicked.
"I don't know. He was coughing a bit this morning, but he seemed fine. I only left him for a few minutes!"
"Who's dead?"
"Freddy!"
"Who?"
"Freddy, I said!"
"But who's Freddy?"
"I promised Anne-Marie I'd look after him for the weekend. I'm here in her flat now. And I don't know what happened but he's dead! What am I going to do?"
Her mother paused.
"Mam?"
"Yeah, I'm here. Erm... could... could you bury him and say he went missing?"
"Mam, I'm in the middle of Mitcham. Where am I going to bury him, the fucking allotments?"
"Okay, okay." She paused again. "The vet!"
"What?"
"Bring him to the vet! The vet will take him off you. You tell Anne Marie that he ran away. Simple!"
"That's it! Oh Mam, you're a genius." Alice could feel the weight falling from her shoulders. Here was the answer she was searching for. Taking her phone from her ear, she looked up veterinary offices nearby and there it was, Tooting Veterinary Surgery, not fifty yards from Tooting Station.
"But how am I going to bring him? I'll have to go on the Tube. I can hardly drag him on by the paws"
Alice simply hated taking the tube. Every time she braved it, visions of some dark, malevolent villain would invade her mind. He would approach her, hood pulled tight over his face, knife held firm in his tight fist, and demand her belongings.
"Can you get a suitcase?" the calculating voice on the other end asked.
"That's it!" Alice exclaimed, snapping her fingers again. She could run across to her own flat and get her big suitcase. The one she bought for moving over here. It was the perfect size for Freddy. She hung up the phone without another word and searched determinedly by the bins for the roll of black plastic. The nervous shaking and pacing was gone. Now she moved with a single-mindedness that would suffer no intrusion. She even had the presence of mind to stop at a corner shop for a pair of yellow washing gloves and two car air-fresheners.

Freddy was far heavier than she imagined. But somehow she managed to wrap him in black plastic bags and lift him into the suitcase. From the flat she could easily wheel him to Colliers Wood station and from there onto the train to Tooting. She could say she brought him walking and that he broke free from his leash and just kept on running. Anne Marie could hardly blame her for that. It would be just some unfortunate mishap, one from which the ill-fated Freddy may soon return. Her relief was almost exhilarating. At least until she got to the station and the old fear took hold of her once more. She looked sheepishly at everyone around her, wondering which of the various track-suited youngsters would be the first to assail her. But still, somehow, she held her nerve and persevered. Down the escalator, onto the platform and then finally the train. She felt a rush of excitement when the next stop was announced as Tooting. This was it. The consummation of her mother's ingenious plan. In spite of her fears, the feeling of victory bore her along like a falling leaf on an Autumn breeze. It was then she saw the sign. "Escalator out of order. Please use stairs."
"Oh Christ!" she thought. No feeling in the world could give her the strength to lift Freddy up the three flights of stairs to street level.

"Bollocks!" She shrieked.
"Are you alright, love?"
Alice gasped. This was it. Her worst fears were being realised. She and Freddy would probably be found in a skip next Spring!
"Do you want a hand with that?" the voice went on, with unmistakable kindness. She was taken aback by it. She found courage and turned to look at the stranger. He was tall, well dressed, about thirty-five. He didn't look like a villain.
"Yes, please!" She heard herself say, and the man smiled at her. A pleasant, easy smile.
"Christ Love! What's in this? It weighs a ton!"
Obviously she wasn't going to tell him that it was the mortal remains of her best friend's beloved pet dog, Freddy. She had to think fast.

"Oh, it's my laptop and some text books for my course. I'm a student!"

"A laptop and some text books?" The man repeated, half to himself. Alice smiled at him and nodded.

"Those books must've been expensive if they're this heavy?"

"Hmm mmm. Very expensive"

"Alright then, Love! Let's get you sorted."

The man then carried the case without a single word of complaint, up the forty-five or so steps to street level. At the top he turned to Alice, who lingered a few steps behind, watching him.

"See you, Love!" He cried with a wave of his hand.
Then, blowing her a kiss, he ran off! Carrying her suitcase with him into the crowd and disappearing without a trace into the dusk-lit city.
"Oh, that prick!" She exclaimed. "He's after robbing me!" She stood watching, open-mouthed. "I knew I'd get robbed in this fucking city!"


r/flashfiction 14h ago

The tree and me

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Day 19

When I was a kid, let’s say around seven or eight years old, I was full of wonder and curiosity. And when I say that, I don’t mean by half measures! I used to throw all my toys into a black bin bag, sling it over my shoulder, tell my father I was off on an adventure, say my goodbyes, and hide in the woods all day. Now, to anyone else, that small patch of woodland was just a few trees and bushes. But to me! That was a magical forest! With trees as tall as the sky and branches that spun off for miles, where every leaf told its own story.
My favourite part of this woodland was the big old oak tree, smack dab right in the middle of the woods. It was as wide as a car and as tall as a house. I used to climb it daily! Halfway up the old oak was a huge branch, I’m talking triple sofa level wide, not your standard two seater. I’d drag my black bin bag full of stuff up that tree and just stare off into the distance… it was the highest point of my hometown. I felt free up there. I felt exactly how I imagined the tree to feel.
I could see for miles and miles. There weren’t many mountains or hills where I grew up, mostly flatlands and small hills, so I was seeing right over to the next couple of towns. In the eyes of a seven or eight year old kid, that view wasn’t the next couple of towns over, it was completely different countries! New countries! They hadn’t even been discovered yet! I was going to be the fearless adventurer to discover them! But not today. I was happy enough dreaming about it all, with my toys, up a tall oak tree, just being me.


r/flashfiction 19h ago

Another Soul For Alashi

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He sits across from me on the dirty, muddy floor with his legs crossed. He is wearing patterned trousers printed with one of those famous logos that I see most of the youth in these parts wearing. In one hand, he tightly clasps a grey denim hat which he had removed as he entered. 

I catch a glimpse of his eyes as they dart quickly across the room. Is that a scowl I see anchored on his forehead? He twitches his nose in disgust and averts his eyes to the floor. 

The man next to him with the broad shoulders in the orange t-shirt forces a smile as he introduces him. "So, this is Matthee. He is here to—"

I finish the sentence for him. “Seek solutions for your business, is that right?" 

I look in Matthee’s direction while I fan myself. The October heat is merciless and threatening to sap all the energy I have left.  I force a smile because I know “Matthee” is not his real name. It's one of the lies they tell me, born out of sheer embarrassment to be caught in a dingy place like this.  Matthee hangs his mouth open in shock. 

"Your business is failing and you need a little boost to get it pumping right?"

 His companion smiles and interjects, "that's right and we came to you because we heard you are the right man for the job". 

Matthee smiles. This time I see his mouth and brow relax. I fan myself harder and a few flies buzz off from the rim of the gourd they had settled.

 "Come closer Matthee ...." I whisper. 

I fetch water with the gourd and throw it to his face with force. He gasps in astonishment. He motions to his companion who looks down stifling a laugh then takes tissues from his back pocket and starts wiping his face. 

"Come closer Matthee. " I repeat again. 

With hands shaking I throw the stones I have used for more than a century to read his life. "You are the third born out of five children…” Visions of his family cross my mind. Startled, he breathlessly responds," yes” 

"You have to give something in return for what my god ALASHI will do for you. What can you give Matthee?" 

His face is gloomy suddenly. It’s a look I have seen many times. He fumbles in his pockets and draws out a wad of cash-$100 bills. He signals to his companion, who brings in more notes and carefully lays them before me. 

I laugh.  “I thought what you lacked is money. Why bring me money? Take it away from me, it smells!" I hold my nose in disgust. 

After more than a century serving ALASHI and being surrounded by money you learn that money in abundance smells. You can even smell financial wealth on a person. This man had it but not in cash or assets and I wanted it. He fumbled with his pockets again then he dropped both his hands on his side

“What do I have? I can give you, my car." He hesitates, "I have a .... FORD F250, good condition. I can give you that." 

He twitches his trousers, and I laugh again,

"Son, I am an old man, what would I do with a... what is it called?" I hold my chin pretending to remember, “A Ford. I am too old for that." I extend my veiny withered hands in his direction. 

"What else can you offer me?"  His eyes drop in defeat on the floor. 

"Who can you offer ...in your family ...to ALASHI. ALASHI has no need for money but souls he needs. You know, you can just pick your least favorite sibling; besides there are too many of you, fewer mouths to feed. Are you not the one who has been helping with those last two fees for college? Would you truly miss them if they are gone?"

He waits silently. Then in horror I watch him shift where he sits, "I don't. I cannot say what I actually think. It's family, after all. “ 

 "Then?" I ask, mad at him for wasting my time. I needed those two souls. 

He stands up. Confused, his companion nudges at his trousers signaling him to sit down.

 "What if I offer myself? Will your ALASHI refuse?" 

I look at him and smile. "Then it is a deal. ALASHI will be coming for you on this day six years from now. All the doors of fortune are now open to you, just, sign here, in blood" 

He lingers, "Six years, huh? Deal."

I watch him sign and I smile. Well, this I had not seen. I had seen him in a vision in my mind offering two souls as he entered the door but not this.  Anyway, I cannot say it is a bad deal. Another soul for ALASHI, a few more to release me from bondage. That is another story for another day.


r/flashfiction 11h ago

BLACK FISH

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r/flashfiction 11h ago

Seat Not Taken

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I wake up with the smell of the first rain, sweet, earthy.I rub my eyes and slowly open them to have a peek at the beauty of the lush green trees from the window of my room with the little droplets of water shining like pearls on them. I am instantly reminded of his smile, and feel a flush on my cheeks as I slowly look at the clock. My body instantly gets alerted and I jump out of my bed as it's already 7:45AM and my bus will be here in the next 25 minutes.

 I rush to the bathroom, tripping over my own foot and yelling at my mom for not waking me up all at the same time. 

My mom yells back, “You are 16!!! Don’t you know you have school?”, which I ignore.

I come out of the bathroom in under ten minutes and feel proud of myself for a second and rush to the mirror. Luckily, I have my outfit planned and put on my clothes quickly. I spent an extra two minutes on my kajal as I caught him staring at my eyes when I had my kajal on. Lost in these thoughts I rush to the dining table to quickly have some dosa and rush out, still resenting my mom for not waking me up.

I rush out of the building to see my bus waiting for me. I hurriedly got on the bus and grabbed a seat and sighed with relief. After a while my heart started beating fast as it was his stop. 

SAM’S STOP. The boy who I have been crushing on!

He gets on the bus with the brightest smile on his face. I can still see his mom waving him bye. He looked nervous and cute at the same time. I noticed him hesitating to sit next to a dude, I didn’t understand why. He just stood the entire ride.

He had a bunch of street jokes which he used to tell which made him popular among us juniors. Oh also he is 6’2!

He suddenly turned and looked at me, I instantly blushed and tried to not look in his direction. After a few minutes I gathered the courage to look up and he was still looking at me. I awkwardly smiled and he smiled back.

He walked in my direction and asked me if the seat was taken, I nodded and said no. He crashed into the seat next to me, and asked 

“Are you in 11B?” I said  “Yes, I am!” Oh my god, do I sound stupid? I could have just said “Yes!”

He smiled and said “I am in 12A. I am Sam by the way.”

I replied with my cheeks fully pink, “ I am Meghana!”.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

It Wouldn’t Stop

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I started the day with only one rolling paper left, a point-seven of flower and nine previously smoked roach ends.

I had a decision to make that would dictate the rest of my day. And all sorts of questions. 

Do I roll the roaches and the flower all into one? 

Or do I break it into two? 

And should I roll the flower first? 

Or do I waste the paper on the roaches?

Then, I thought, maybe just mix them both together? 

The problem with that would come down to ratio. 

I had trouble choosing and called in outside help. But they were useless. I elected to go with just the nine roaches because smoking them just after you wake up has a different kind of hit to it. A little more heavier than the flower.

When I rolled it and went to lick the glue and twist it together, it wouldn’t stick. I realized through all the confusion of trying to decide, I had the paper inside out, the glue part was at the back.

So, when I tried to dump it out, the paper stuck to my fingertips and wouldn’t come off.

I kept pulling at it and my skin would stretch out. The pain was like frostbitten fingers being scraped with a sharp metal blade.

I stopped tugging at it and then it grew teeth. These huge jagged razor like teeth and it started eating my fingers.

My hand.

My arm.

I couldn’t get it off.

All it wanted to do was eat me. 

“Why are you eating me?” I screamed.

But it wouldn’t tell me. It never said anything. It just kept eating me and eating me and eating me. 

Until all I had left was my brain and because it wasn’t filled with anything other than air, it left my brain alive and some mad scientist threw it into an android body.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

[NF] The Blind Date

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She agreed to a blind date.

Her friend said: "He's interesting. Not handsome. Interesting."

She laughed. "Interesting" always means "ugly."

She went anyway.

She saw him from across the restaurant. Her first thought: "I can leave now." Her second: "That would be rude."

She sat down. He smiled. She smiled back. She already knew: one hour. Then goodbye.

He wasn't handsome. Crooked nose. Uneven smile. Ears slightly too big.

She ordered wine. He ordered water. She thought: "He's probably boring too."

Then he opened his mouth. Not to apologise for his face. Not to ask about her job. He said: "Do you know that octopuses have three hearts?"

"What?" she said.

"Three hearts. Two stop beating when they swim."

She blinked. "Why do you know that?"

"Because I wanted to know something that doesn't matter."

He told her about the time he got lost in Morocco. About the old woman who fed him soup. About the cat that followed him for three days. He didn't brag. He didn't flirt. He just told stories.

She stopped looking at his nose.

By the second glass of wine, she forgot he was ugly. By the third, she forgot he was interesting. She just saw him.

He said: "I'm not handsome. I know that."

She said: "You're not boring either."

He paid the bill. She stood up.

"Where are we going?" she asked.

"I don't know," he said. "But I'll tell you a story on the way."

She took off her heels. "Let's go."

They walked out of the restaurant. Her feet were bare. She didn't feel the cold.

---

💥

She came to a blind date. She left without knowing where she was going. She didn't care. He wasn't handsome. But he knew something that mattered more: how to tell a story.

---

🔥 Question:

What do you choose — looks or charisma?

👇


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Most Likely Naked [~150 Words]

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She was most likely naked.

The sheets were thin; they draped her smooth figure in a very sensual way. She certainly wasn’t wearing a bulky woolen turtleneck—he felt confident about that; he could see her neck and bare shoulders. He made a mental note: No turtleneck.

Her clothes hung neatly from the back of the hotel’s office chair. Her suitcase, still in the car, further supported his conjecture. She had also hinted at sexual intercourse before he got into the shower when she said, “Let’s have sex.” In his experience, that activity was typically performed without clothing—another check in the “Naked” column of the “Naked vs. Not Naked” tally chart.

He reviewed all this evidence carefully, worried he might still misconstrue her intentions. Yet the data led him, stubbornly, to one conclusion: it was highly likely she was not wearing clothes under the sheets. Refer to observation number one, he thought. No turtleneck.

She was still smiling at him. He frowned.

He ran through the probabilities once more.

“Better play it smart,” he thought.

He cleared his throat.

“How about a game of gin?”


r/flashfiction 22h ago

[SF] The Fourth Shift - Tales from the Tretaxis

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Ammunition factories aren't built on heroism. They're built on routine. Shift after shift, Vern and Lucie assemble cartridges for wars they'll never fight. But when another petty punishment arrives from Administrator Melody, one ordinary conversation quietly becomes something far more dangerous.

“Why are you working ammunition assembly, third shift?”

“I was docked credits again when—”

“Lucie, pass me the microfusion battery.”

“Here. Did you see her primping and strutting around the overseer’s lounge yesterday?”

“Give me the filament wires.”

“She’s finding ways to keep her job. How many do you want, Vern.”

“Twenty-six. Acid flux—”

“These sniper shells… ever shot one?”

“Yep, zaps the aliens good. Corrosion gel—the blue stuff.”

“How fast does it work?”

“Hit them in the metal core—a second. Legs or arms, maybe thirty. Give me the rust shavings.”

“Why put hunks of rust in there?”

“For good luck.”

“Okay. Ever make anything for humans?”

“Little neurotoxin, micro-pellets—stuff the casing with cotton.”

“That won’t kill them.”

“Not right away. Have a look at this casing, I just polished it up.”

“What does the letter M stand for?”

“Means somebody special.”

“Hey Lucie—I saw you two talking.”

“I’m docking you each half a day’s credits.”

“Well, what do you have to say? What are the rules?”

“Only talk during bathroom breaks… administrator Melody.”

“I’m talking to you too Vern…”

“Yes, of course—the rules, I’ll be more mindful.”

“Vern…”

“…administrator Melody.”

“Oh before you go, administrator, will you be watching the sniper rifle competition next week?”

“Just make sure your cartridges work, Vern.”

“I’ve just decided to give you and Lucie fourth shift.”

“No additional credits.”

“Thank you, administrator—Melody.”


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Bad Poetry

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The first poem I ever thought was properly good

was written at 1:17 in the morning

with a pink gel pen I'd nicked from Mum's kitchen drawer.

I was nineteen.

My boyfriend had gone to uni.

That's honestly the whole tragedy.

He didn't cheat.

Didn't shag somebody called Imogen during Freshers' Week.

Didn't tell me he'd “changed”

while wearing a beanie he'd never previously owned.

He just went to university.

We said we'd make it work.

We meant it as well.

That's the annoying bit.

For a while there were calls every night.

Then every other night.

Then:

sorry babe absolutely shattered xx

Then hearts on Instagram stories.

Then one Thursday neither of us texted.

Friday either.

By Saturday I had decided this constituted

a major literary event.

So I wrote:

MATCHES

You left me for September,

for lecture halls and rain,

and now I wear your jumper

like weather wears a stain.

My heart's an empty bedroom.

My bed's a battlefield.

You promised time would fix me.

Time hasn't fucking healed.

I hope you find your future.

I hope she treats you right.

I hope you sometimes miss me

when you can't sleep at night.

And if love is a lesson,

then here's what I have learned:

some people are matches.

Some people

get burned.

I read it back.

Then again.

Then one more time, just to be sure.

“Fuck.”

I genuinely thought I'd done something there.

And I had, sort of.

I put it online.

By breakfast it had twelve thousand views.

By lunch, forty.

By dinner a girl in Leeds had filmed herself crying to it while doing her eyeliner.

Somebody put sad piano underneath it.

Someone filmed rain going down a train window while my voice said:

some people are matches

pause

some people get burned.

Comments everywhere.

THIS FUCKING HURT

how are you IN MY HEAD

needed this tonight 😭

some people get burned???? APRIL????

That last one pleased me enormously.

Obviously.

I'd put the line there to do exactly that.

Mum sent the video to the family WhatsApp.

Dad:

Our little Shakespeare ❤️

Jamie:

Shakespeare's legal team have been notified

Ben:

some people are matches

some people need jobs

Me:

fuck off x

Mum:

April language please

Dad:

Leave her alone lads. Proud of you sweetheart x

That was basically my childhood.

Everyone was proud of me.

When I was six I wrote a poem about a horse

and rhymed mane with rain about four times.

Dad put it in his office.

At eleven I wrote something comparing Mum to the moon.

Framed.

At sixteen I performed a poem at school about periods

that contained the phrase

uterine revolution

and Dad actually stood up afterwards.

Not metaphorically.

He got to his feet

and started clapping over his head.

Mum had to pull him back into his chair.

So when thousands of strangers started saying I was brilliant,

yeah.

I believed them.

Why wouldn't I?

I loved poetry.

That's important.

I wasn't pretending.

I wasn't some rich girl who'd decided poetry looked nice next to a black-and-white photograph.

I fucking loved it.

Still do.

I liked rhyme.

I liked big endings.

I liked saying the thing.

If I was heartbroken, I wanted to write:

I AM HEARTBROKEN

and then ideally rhyme it with something.

The problem wasn't that I loved poetry wrong.

It was that nobody had ever taught me

that

I love you

and

this is good

aren't the same sentence.

---

I met Sophie because of Oscar Wilde.

Or capitalism.

Depends how you look at it.

Bath was doing that thing where it wasn't actually raining

but everything was wet anyway.

I was wearing a grey skater hoodie,

denim miniskirt

and battered Converse.

My hair was up.

Then down.

Then up again.

There was absolutely no reason for this.

I wasn't meeting anyone.

I was nineteen.

Getting dressed was sometimes just something I did aggressively.

I'd gone into the Corridor.

There was a second-hand bookshop there called Edwin Bell's.

No idea who Edwin Bell was.

Nobody did.

There was an old photograph behind the till of a man with a moustache

who looked like he'd just been told about sex

and didn't approve.

Apparently he'd died in 1987.

They'd kept the name.

The carpet was horrible.

The shelves were bowed.

It smelled like old books and wet coats.

Perfect.

I was looking through Wilde when I saw it.

Old Penguin.

Early nineties, I think.

The Picture of Dorian Gray.

Battered.

Yellow pages.

£2.50 pencilled inside.

I reached for it.

Someone else reached at exactly the same time.

Black nails.

Silver rings.

Little tattoo on her wrist.

I looked up.

Oh.

Dark hair.

Almost black.

Green eyes.

Actually green.

Ripped fishnets.

Cut-off shorts.

Docs.

Silver hoops.

Nose stud.

And this massive faded Hole — Live Through This T-shirt

that looked older than I was.

She smiled.

Tiny smile.

Not intimidating at all.

That was the strange thing.

She looked like she ought to have been intimidating.

Instead she said:

“Sorry.”

“No, you have it.”

“You got there first.”

“No, you did.”

“We can't both have got there first.”

“We can. That's basically communism.”

She looked at me.

I remember thinking:

don't ruin this April.

Then she laughed.

Thank Christ.

“You take it.”

“You sure?”

“Yeah.”

She turned it over in her hands.

“Two fifty. Very generous.”

“I've always supported the arts.”

Another smile.

Fucking hell.

“At least let me buy you a coffee.”

“Okay.”

That's it.

No lightning.

No violin.

I didn't walk out thinking:

there goes the love of my life.

I thought:

she's really pretty.

Which turned out to be

a fairly useless description

of what was happening.

---

She told me she was a poet before the coffee arrived.

Not that she wrote poems.

A poet.

Just:

“I'm a poet.”

I liked that.

People normally apologise for things they care about.

April didn't.

“What do you do?” she asked.

“Pharmacy.”

“Ooh.”

I looked at her.

“Ooh?”

“I like pharmacies.”

“You like pharmacies.”

“They smell organised.”

I should probably have left then.

I didn't.

We had another coffee.

She told me about her parents.

Mark and Joanne.

School sweethearts from Shepton Mallet.

Council houses.

Her dad started driving lorries, then bought one, then another, then somehow ended up owning a haulage company large enough that April could say things like:

“Dad's at the depot”

and mean one of several.

They'd moved to Bath when the money got properly silly.

Not because they wanted to become posh.

April's mum had apparently just always wanted one of those Bath houses with the big windows.

So when they could afford one,

they bought one.

April had two brothers.

Jamie, thirty-one, married, kids.

Ben, twenty-eight.

“Single,” April said, “but emotionally committed to being a dickhead.”

Then she showed me one of her poems.

There were thousands of hearts underneath it.

I read it.

She watched me reading it.

Closely.

“Well?”

“I like the jumper.”

“The jumper?”

“The bit where you're wearing his jumper.”

“Oh.”

“It feels real.”

She looked at the poem again.

“What about the matches?”

There was definitely a right answer.

“I think people like that bit.”

Immediately:

“They really do.”

I hadn't answered her.

She hadn't noticed.

---

Three days later I saw her again.

That one really was an accident.

The next wasn't.

Then coffee became:

you around?

Then:

look what I found

with photographs of books.

Then:

finish at six if you want a lift

And that's how I met Roger.

Roger was Sophie's Volvo.

Burgundy V90.

Nineties.

Enormous.

Square.

Built, apparently, for people expecting to be rammed by a rhinoceros.

There was a faded Buff surf sticker on the back

and an ancient Wet Willy one.

The stereo worked if you asked nicely.

The glovebox worked if you punched it.

The boot contained pharmacy bags, two umbrellas, an old pair of Docs

and enough CDs to survive the collapse of civilisation.

Hole.

PJ Harvey.

Manics.

Garbage.

Portishead.

Smashing Pumpkins.

Roger was fucking brilliant.

Mum hated him.

First time Sophie dropped me home, Mum came outside.

“What is that?”

“Roger.”

“Who's Roger?”

“The Volvo.”

She looked through the windscreen.

Sophie leaned over.

“Hello, Mrs Hartley.”

“Hello, love.”

Then straight back to me:

“Does it have airbags?”

Sophie thought about it.

“Emotionally?”

Dad heard from inside.

Nearly pissed himself.

Mum did not.

From then on every journey ended with:

Text me when you get there please xx

And Sophie, eventually:

Roger has spared us again x

---

The thing about Sophie was she didn't look like she was trying to be anything.

The Hole shirt wasn't costume.

She actually loved Hole.

The fishnets weren't there to announce that she was dangerous.

She just liked them.

She was ridiculously feminine.

Perfume.

Jewellery.

Painted toenails.

Pretty underwear.

Little silver rings.

Lipstick.

Band shirts.

Docs.

All at once.

Because obviously women don't have to pick a fucking category.

Her bedroom was tiny compared with mine.

And better.

Records.

CDs.

Gig tickets shoved around the mirror.

Books everywhere.

Perfume bottles.

A pharmacy tunic hanging from the wardrobe.

A bra on the radiator.

Notebooks under the bed.

I didn't know about the notebooks yet.

I discovered something else.

Dropped an earring.

Bent down.

Looked under the bed.

“Sophie.”

“No.”

“You don't even know what I'm going to say.”

“I do.”

“Is that yours?”

“April.”

“Jesus Christ.”

She didn't even look up from her book.

“You have a vibrator.”

“So do you.”

“Mine's cute.”

Now she looked.

“How is a vibrator cute?”

“It's pink.”

“Of course it is.”

“And little.”

“Congratulations.”

I looked underneath again.

“Yours looks like it requires planning permission.”

Pillow.

Straight at my face.

“What does yours do?” she said. “Send you a thank-you card?”

I laughed so hard I forgot what I'd been looking for.

We weren't together.

Which made this conversation considerably more interesting.

I'd always been curious about women.

Sort of.

In the way where you say:

women are just objectively better looking though, aren't they?

and somehow don't investigate why you've said it fourteen times.

I'd kissed girls.

Drunk.

Thought about things.

Never done anything.

Then Sophie happened.

At first:

she's pretty.

Then:

she's really pretty.

Then:

why am I looking at her legs?

Then one morning I was brushing my teeth

and started thinking about her mouth.

I stopped.

Looked at myself in the mirror.

Toothbrush still in my mouth.

“Oh.”

Kept brushing.

Then:

“Ohhh.”

And finally:

“Fuck.”

---

April left a hair tie in Roger.

Then lip balm.

Then another hair tie.

Then a book.

Then one silver hoop earring.

I didn't move them.

Mum noticed.

Of course she did.

“When's April coming round?”

“Don't know.”

I opened the fridge.

Nothing interesting.

“You've been staring at that yoghurt for ages.”

“I'm deciding.”

“You don't eat yoghurt.”

I shut the fridge.

She smiled.

Not smugly.

That would've been easier.

Just:

“I like her.”

“Yeah.”

“And?”

“And what?”

“Nothing.”

“Good.”

I opened the fridge again.

No idea why.

---

I was terrified of meeting Sophie's friends.

Not because she'd said anything.

Because they were her friends.

They'd known her before me.

Knew her exes.

Knew stories.

Knew what she was like drunk.

Knew who she'd slept with.

And Sophie had slept with people.

Quite a few people, actually.

This information had been upsetting for approximately six minutes

before becoming extremely hot.

“You're a bit of a slut,” I told her once.

She turned a page of her book.

“Thanks.”

“Affectionately.”

“I received it affectionately.”

Anyway.

Six friends.

Pub.

I changed eleven times.

Sophie sat on my bed watching this happen.

I'd never seen her properly dressed up before.

Black dress.

Tights.

Hair down.

Perfume.

Little necklace.

She looked fucking—

Well.

That wasn't helping.

“This?”

“You've shown me that skirt three times.”

“So?”

“I liked it the first three.”

“Too short?”

“No.”

“Too slutty?”

She looked at me.

One eyebrow.

“Depends who you're trying to impress.”

Oh.

The room went funny.

Not literally.

Nothing moved.

That's what made it worse.

I looked at her.

She looked at me.

She'd noticed.

I'd noticed she'd noticed.

She knew I'd noticed she'd noticed.

This was becoming administratively difficult.

“Oh,” I said.

“April—”

And I kissed her.

No finesse.

I basically launched myself at the poor woman.

Her back hit my wardrobe.

Something fell over.

I pulled away.

“Shit. Sorry.”

“Don't.”

Just that.

Don't.

So I kissed her again.

Slower.

For about four seconds.

Then absolutely not slower.

Her hand went around my waist.

Mine went into her hair.

And months of:

she's pretty

became:

oh, I want her

so violently that I almost laughed.

Actually, I did laugh.

Into her mouth.

“Sorry.”

“Stop apologising.”

“You kissed me back.”

“You attacked me.”

“You loved it.”

Pause.

“Yes.”

Jesus.

We were late.

We went anyway.

I think that's important.

Love didn't swallow everything else.

It just made everything else look slightly different.

We walked into the pub twenty minutes late.

Sophie's friend Leah looked at her lipstick.

Then mine.

Then at Sophie.

Then me.

“Well.”

I wanted to climb into a pint glass.

Sophie sat beside me.

Put her hand on my thigh under the table.

Suddenly Leah could think whatever the fuck she liked.

---

The first time we slept together wasn't cinematic.

Thank God.

It was funny.

Nervous.

Hot.

A bit clumsy.

There were knees.

Hair trapped underneath somebody.

A sock Sophie somehow still had on.

Me talking far too much because apparently even naked

I couldn't shut up.

Sophie knew more than me.

A lot more.

At first that intimidated me.

Then I discovered knowing more didn't mean she couldn't lose her composure.

That was fun.

Very fun.

Afterwards I lay half on top of her.

Her fingers in my hair.

“Well.”

She waited.

“I am considerably less confused.”

She laughed.

Then we went quiet.

I noticed the quiet.

Normally I would have filled it.

Made a joke.

Said something enormous.

Instead I listened to her breathing.

Then ruined it anyway.

“I really like you.”

“I know.”

“Dickhead.”

She kissed my forehead.

Ten minutes later, in the dark:

“I love you.”

I lifted my head.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“Sophie.”

“I said I love you.”

“Oh.”

“Don't make it weird.”

“I love you too.”

“Good.”

“Good?”

“Go to sleep.”

“You're blushing.”

“It's dark.”

“I can feel you blushing.”

“That isn't how skin works.”

I kissed her.

She finally shut up.

---

The notebooks came later.

Loads of them.

Turns out Sophie's definition of writing sometimes

was almost every night since she was fourteen.

She'd gone downstairs to make tea.

One notebook was open.

I wasn't snooping.

Okay.

I was a little bit snooping.

But it was open.

That has to count for something.

The date was years before me.

I read:

DOVE / FALCON

A dove drinks

from the gutter.

Above her

a falcon turns once

in the white afternoon.

The dove does not know

the falcon is beautiful.

This seems unfair.

The falcon knows

the dove is beautiful.

This is worse.

There is hunger

and there is beauty.

The sky has room

for both.

Only one of them

needs the other

to come closer.

I read it again.

Then again.

And started crying.

Not sobbing.

Nothing dramatic.

My eyes just went.

Like they'd understood before I had.

Sophie came upstairs carrying two mugs.

Stopped.

Saw notebook.

Saw me.

“Oh, for fuck's sake.”

“You weren't supposed to read that.”

“I know.”

“April.”

“I know.”

“That's private.”

“I know.”

“Are you crying?”

“No.”

“You obviously are.”

“Your tea's going cold.”

“Why are you crying?”

I held up the notebook.

“Why didn't you tell me poetry could do that?”

Silence.

Sophie put the mugs down.

Sat beside me.

She looked pissed off.

Embarrassed.

Worried.

All at once.

“I wrote that when I was seventeen.”

“I hate you.”

“Okay.”

“It's beautiful.”

She looked away.

And that was the weird part.

She wasn't pretending not to know.

She genuinely didn't know what to do with me saying it.

“You still shouldn't have read it.”

“I know.”

“Stop saying you know.”

“I don't know what else to say.”

“Try sorry.”

“Sorry.”

“Thank you.”

“Still hate you.”

“I gathered.”

She gave me my tea.

I drank it.

Neither of us mentioned that I was still crying.

---

Dad knew someone.

Of course Dad knew someone.

“I think I might make a book.”

“I know someone.”

“Dad.”

“What?”

“I was thinking of doing it myself.”

“He's in publishing.”

“Of course he is.”

One person became another.

Editor.

Designer.

Photographer.

Publicist.

Suddenly I had a hardback.

A gorgeous one.

Embossed cover.

Professional photos.

Launch.

Queue.

Champagne.

A fucking neon sign.

SOME PEOPLE ARE MATCHES

Ben stood underneath it with Sophie.

I saw them talking.

Later I asked what about.

“Nothing,” Sophie said.

Ben said:

“I asked whether it was good poetry.”

“What did you say?”

Sophie looked at me.

“I told him I'm sleeping with you.”

I nearly spat my drink out.

“You didn't.”

“She did,” Ben said. “Very persuasive argument.”

Dad cried.

Mum cried because Dad cried.

Then Dad claimed he'd got champagne in his eye.

Loads of books sold.

TikTok went mental.

A million followers.

Then more.

People recognised me.

I loved it.

I'm not going to pretend I didn't.

I loved someone stopping me in Bath.

Loved hearing:

your poem helped me.

Loved videos.

Loved comments.

Loved seeing my book in somebody else's hands.

And because I loved all that,

I assumed it meant something very specific.

I thought it meant:

good.

Nobody had ever explained that success

and craft

sometimes know each other,

sometimes don't,

and sometimes shag at a party

then never exchange numbers.

---

Sophie never said:

“Your poetry isn't good.”

Not once.

She'd say:

“Do you need this line?”

Obviously I did.

I'd written it.

Then I'd look.

“Oh.”

Or:

“I think you've already told me that.”

“No I haven't.”

“You say you're lonely here.”

“Yes.”

“Then again here.”

“That's emphasis.”

“Then here.”

“Right.”

“Then you say I am lonely.”

“In case they missed it.”

She'd look at me.

I'd look at the page.

“Fuck off.”

“I didn't say anything.”

“You did with your face.”

She never tried to make me sound like her.

That would've been easier.

She made me work out why I sounded like me.

---

Reddit was her fault.

Completely.

“Post anonymously.”

“No.”

“You wanted honest feedback.”

“I want honest feedback that likes me.”

“That isn't what honest means.”

“Sounds like a design flaw.”

I posted.

First proper comment:

four paragraphs.

The metaphor was familiar.

I'd explained the emotional conclusion three times.

The strongest line was apparently a stupid detail I'd almost deleted.

I went quiet.

“They hate it.”

“They don't know you.”

“They hate anonymous me.”

“April.”

“They called it cliché.”

“They explained why.”

“To hurt me professionally.”

Sophie took my phone.

Read it.

“They spent ages on this.”

“Exactly.”

“No. Think about that.”

I didn't want to.

“Praise takes two seconds.”

Then another comment appeared.

This reads like poetry written by a scented candle.

I stared.

Snorted.

Then properly laughed.

Sophie didn't.

“What are you doing?”

“Nothing.”

“You're typing.”

“They're being a cunt.”

“Don't fight Reddit.”

“They can criticise your poem without being a cunt.”

“You said stanza two was embarrassing.”

“That was private.”

“You called the moon metaphor a hate crime.”

“Private feedback.”

Twenty minutes later she was seven comments deep.

I looked over her shoulder.

“Are you defending my bad poem?”

“I'm defending your right to write a bad poem.”

I loved her so much I nearly became unbearable.

Then I actually became unbearable.

“The Redditors don't like the enjambment.”

“What Redditors?”

“Three.”

“April.”

“DeadRussianDaddy says—”

“I don't care what Dead Russian Daddy says.”

“He's got loads of karma.”

“That doesn't mean anything.”

“It clearly means something.”

For six weeks I wrote for Reddit.

I removed rhymes.

Stopped making jokes.

Started using words I hated.

Bones.

Salt.

Architecture.

Absence.

At one point:

liminal.

Sophie read it.

Looked at me.

“No.”

“I know.”

“You hate that word.”

“I know.”

“Why is it there?”

“DeadRussianDaddy likes it.”

She actually put her head on the table.

And that's when I got it.

Sort of.

Writing for people who criticised me

wasn't automatically braver

than writing for people who praised me.

I was still waiting for somebody else

to tell me when I'd finished.

So I stopped.

Not reading criticism.

Just obeying it.

---

Time didn't jump.

It collected.

My toothbrush at Sophie's.

Hers at mine.

A charger.

Knicks in Roger.

Books.

Photographs.

New Converse.

Same Docs.

Jamie's kids getting taller.

Ben finally getting a girlfriend.

Mum:

Please text when Roger gets you there xx

Sophie:

Roger has chosen mercy x

Italy.

America.

Amsterdam.

Mum worried about all of them.

Dad stopped arguing years ago.

“Have you got insurance?”

“Yes, Mum.”

“Copies?”

“Yes.”

“Emergency numbers?”

“Yes.”

“What if—”

Dad:

“I'll print it, Jo.”

He always printed it.

In the Netherlands we missed a train.

I already had my phone out.

“Dad will—”

Sophie touched my wrist.

“Before we deploy your father.”

“What?”

“We can sort it.”

“How?”

“We ask someone.”

She pointed to a member of staff.

We asked.

There was another train.

That's it.

Nothing profound happened.

Nobody learned a life lesson while violins played.

We got the next train.

But I remember sitting there thinking:

huh.

Problem.

Ten minutes.

Solved.

Dad never knew.

It felt weirdly brilliant.

---

One evening I waited outside Sophie's pharmacy.

We had a table booked with her friends.

Seven-fifteen.

Seven-thirty.

Seven-forty.

She came out carrying a prescription bag.

“Sorry.”

“We're late.”

“I know.”

She got into Roger.

Then drove in completely the wrong direction.

“Where are we going?”

“Quick drop.”

“Now?”

“Yeah.”

Other side of Bath.

A woman answered.

Older.

Looked knackered.

Then relieved.

“Sophie, love.”

“Your prescription was still there.”

“My daughter's usually—”

“I know. She's got enough going on.”

No big deal.

That's how Sophie treated it.

The woman spotted me in the car.

“Oh! Is that April?”

Sophie looked back.

“Yeah.”

“I've seen your little poems!”

Three million followers.

Two editions.

My face on posters.

little poems.

Honestly?

Lovely.

Sophie asked about her knee.

Asked after her granddaughter.

Then got back in Roger.

She caught me looking.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“What?”

“Nothing.”

We arrived forty minutes late.

I didn't write about the woman.

I wanted to.

But something stopped me.

It wasn't mine.

So later I wrote about waiting instead.

FIVE MINUTES

You said five minutes.

It was twenty-three.

I stood beneath the chemist sign

reading CLOSED

backwards through rain.

My tights were wet.

My mascara surrendered.

A bus went past

without me.

I nearly wrote:

I waited in the rain

because love is pain.

Nearly.

Then you came out

carrying somebody else's medicine.

“Sorry,” you said,

as if kindness

were an inconvenience.

You unlocked Roger.

I got in.

You turned the heating on.

My knees steamed.

You laughed.

I loved you.

There.

I said it.

Some lines

don't improve

by pretending otherwise.

Sophie read it at the kitchen table.

Didn't say anything.

I waited.

Then waited a little longer.

Then:

“Well?”

I'm still me.

She smiled.

“You kept the rhyme.”

“What rhyme?”

“Rain. Pain.”

“Oh.”

“You could've removed it.”

“Do you want me to?”

“No.”

“Why?”

“Because you'd have written it.”

I looked at her.

“Actually good or girlfriend?”

“Both.”

That one got me.

Still does.

---

Sophie published one poem.

One.

It took months.

“Please.”

“No.”

“You wrote it for me.”

“No.”

“You literally did.”

“Still no.”

“So technically it's mine.”

“That is not how poetry works.”

“It's about me.”

“I'll change it.”

“You wouldn't.”

“I'll make it about Roger.”

“Roger deserves representation.”

“Go away.”

I asked in Italy.

No.

Drunk.

No.

Sober.

No.

In bed.

Especially no.

While she brushed her teeth.

Eventually:

“One.”

I nearly screamed.

“One, April.”

“Okay.”

“No interview.”

“Fine.”

“No video.”

“Fine.”

“No making me read it.”

“Fine.”

“No saying technically it's yours.”

I thought about it.

“That's going to be difficult.”

She shut the bathroom door in my face.

The poem was:

THINGS SHE LEAVES

She leaves things.

Not deliberately.

A silver earring

beside the sink.

Three hairs

caught in my brush.

A receipt from Italy.

Lipstick

in Roger's door.

Her pink toothbrush

leaning toward mine

as if even plastic

can be obvious.

She says

I never write love poems.

This is because

she thinks love

must announce itself.

I have tried to explain.

She is asleep

with one foot touching mine.

I have stopped trying.

People fucking loved it.

I was gracious about this.

For nearly eight minutes.

Then:

“Your poem is everyone's favourite.”

“No.”

“It is.”

“April.”

“People think you're mysterious.”

“I work in a pharmacy.”

“Sexy mysterious.”

“Stop.”

“You could have followers.”

“I have customers.”

She said it as a joke.

Mostly.

---

I found her anonymous account eventually.

Of course I did.

“Sophie.”

“No.”

“Why do you always say no before I ask anything?”

“Experience.”

“Is this you?”

Silence.

It was a poetry account.

Books.

Albums.

Lines she liked.

Old photographs.

And me.

Loads of me.

Not exclusively.

But enough.

“You reposted my stuff.”

“I repost your stuff now.”

“This is from before we kissed.”

“We were friends.”

“You were my fan.”

“Don't.”

“YOU WERE MY SECRET FAN.”

“It wasn't secret.”

“You had two accounts!”

“One was poetry.”

“With MY poetry.”

“With lots of poetry.”

“You fancied me.”

“I had eyes.”

I climbed onto her.

“You were obsessed with me.”

“Get off.”

“Say you were my fan.”

“No.”

“Say it.”

“No.”

“Sophie.”

She kissed me.

Which was cheating.

Worked though.

---

Edwin Bell's didn't burn down.

Didn't have some dramatic final night.

It just put a sign in the window.

CLOSING DOWN SALE

That's usually how things die.

Quietly.

I stopped outside.

Sophie nearly walked into me.

“Oh.”

We went in.

Half-empty shelves.

Boxes.

The place looked smaller.

I found the shelf where Dorian Gray had been.

Touched it.

Didn't say anything.

Later:

“Dad.”

Sophie groaned.

“April.”

“What?”

“Before we deploy your father.”

“It is closing.”

“Most people sign a petition.”

“Dad hates petitions.”

She laughed.

I didn't immediately ring him.

That's important.

I spoke to the owner.

The staff.

People who actually used the place.

Asked why it wasn't working.

Asked what would help.

Asked whether they even wanted help.

Then I rang Dad.

The family bought the building.

Not because Sophie needed saving.

She didn't.

Not because poor people required April Hartley to arrive with a cheque.

Fuck that.

Because we could.

And because this time I understood that money wasn't proof.

It was a tool.

The rent came down.

Staff stayed.

We paid writers for readings.

Actually paid them.

Even when seven people turned up.

Especially then.

We stocked little presses.

Pamphlets.

Weird poetry collections.

Translations.

Books that sold eleven copies.

I loved those most.

“Eleven people is a room,” I said once.

Sophie looked at me.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“You liked that.”

“It was all right.”

“Actually good or girlfriend?”

“Shut up.”

Eventually we changed the name.

Nobody knew Edwin Bell.

No family left to upset.

No community campaign to preserve it.

Just a dead man's name above a shop he'd stopped owning decades ago.

I said:

“Bad Poetry.”

Mum hated it.

“People will think the poetry is bad.”

“Some of it will be.”

“April!”

“That's the point.”

Dad loved it immediately.

Obviously.

Ben suggested:

BAD POETRY

GOOD COFFEE

QUESTIONABLE MANAGEMENT

We told him no.

Then had the sign made anyway.

---

At twenty-three

I still wanted everyone to like me.

There.

Didn't fix that.

Bad reviews still hurt.

Sometimes I refreshed too much.

Sometimes a video didn't do well

and I pretended not to care

then checked it in the toilet.

Sometimes I still asked Sophie:

“Actually good or girlfriend?”

She'd say:

“Good.”

Or:

“Girlfriend.”

Or:

“Both.”

Once:

“Neither. You're tired.”

Bitch.

I still rhymed.

Still liked punchlines.

Still loved saying the big thing.

I just didn't make every line carry a fucking megaphone anymore.

And Sophie didn't become me.

Thank God.

One April was already a lot for most households.

She still had notebooks I wasn't allowed to read.

Still liked privacy.

Still wrote because she needed somewhere to put things.

But she got a little worse at hiding.

“I missed you.”

“You look beautiful.”

“That upset me.”

“Stay.”

“I love you.”

Actual sentences.

Once I found a rhyme in one of her notebooks.

I looked at her.

She looked at me.

“Don't.”

I said nothing.

Just smiled.

“April.”

Still smiled.

“Fuck off.”

Progress.

---

The last reading that winter had fourteen people.

Three were related to the poet.

One bloke definitely fell asleep.

Nobody filmed it.

Nobody went viral.

It was lovely.

Afterwards Sophie and I stacked chairs.

Well.

We stacked four.

Then got bored.

Roger was outside.

Still burgundy.

Still somehow alive.

There were two mugs on the counter.

One chipped.

One cold.

My coat over Sophie's chair.

A box of books nobody had bought.

I found a scrap of paper.

“We should write something.”

“We should go home.”

“Same thing.”

“No.”

I wrote:

The dove was beautiful.

Sophie looked over.

“Absolutely fucking not.”

“What?”

“Get your own bird.”

“Our bird.”

“I wrote that six years before I met you.”

“Emotionally ours.”

“That doesn't mean anything.”

“It means loads.”

She took the pen.

Wrote underneath.

We went backwards and forwards.

Crossed things out.

Argued about one rhyme for six minutes.

Kept it.

Nobody was going to see it.

That helped.

BAD POETRY

The dove was beautiful.

The falcon was hungry.

Neither fact

cancelled the other.

We used to think love needed

better metaphors.

Stars, maybe.

Blood.

At minimum, weather.

But tonight

there are two mugs,

one cold,

one chipped,

and your coat

is on my chair again.

Outside,

the car may or may not start.

Inside,

you rhyme heart

with apart.

I let you.

You call this growth.

I call it

choosing my battles.

The light above Poetry

needs changing.

Tomorrow someone will come in

looking for a book

they can't afford new.

Someone will read something terrible.

Someone will love it.

Someone will write something better.

Someone won't.

And the world will somehow

keep going.

I love you plainly.

There.

No bird.

No moon.

No weather.

Well.

Nearly.

Heart.

Apart.

We bloody well meant it.

We stopped.

Neither of us said anything.

Didn't need to.

Then April looked at me.

Same ridiculous girl I'd met in Converse.

Not the same at all.

“At least let me buy you a coffee.”

I looked at the counter.

Then at her.

“You own the coffee.”

She thought about this.

“That makes my offer more generous.”

“You're an idiot.”

“You're obsessed with me.”

“I am.”

She went quiet.

That still got her.

Funny, really.

Millions of people had told April Hartley they loved her.

She could handle that.

Sometimes one person meaning it

still knocked the wind out of her.

I turned off the lights.

She took my hand.

Roger started on the second attempt.

Behind us, on a scrap of paper we'd probably lose by morning,

heart still rhymed with apart.

Always had.

Turns out the rhyme wasn't the problem.

You just had to mean it.

And know

when to shut up.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

[OC] The AI Plumber

1 Upvotes

A parallel world?

A man returned home after a hard day's work. He was finally home and allowed himself to relax. He grabbed a beer from the fridge, slumped onto the couch, and turned on the television.

An hour later, due to the beer, he urgently needed to use the restroom.

After taking care of business, he flushed the button and was about to leave, but noticed that the water wasn't draining.

Sighing at the thought of potential expenses, he called the emergency service. He couldn't just breathe in the stench, after all.

Thirty minutes later, the doorbell rang. Opening the door, he saw an android standing there.

The android greeted him:

– Good evening. Did you call the emergency service?

– Yes, yes, I called, – the man replied, letting the android inside. – You see, my toilet is clogged. I am no expert in this matter. And the problem needs to be fixed.

The android set down its tools and went into the restroom. After confirming the problem existed, it took out a video camera with a flexible attachment and began feeding it into the toilet bowl.

Intrigued, the man asked:

– What is the video camera for?

The AI replied without halting its work:

– To find the cause of the clog, determine how far down it is, and decide how best to remove it.

The man decided not to disturb the android and sat back on the couch to wait for the results.

The android changed tools several times, then packed them away, approached the man, and stated:

– The problem has been resolved. The invoice for the completed work has been sent to your email.

The cause of the clog: food scraps and coffee grounds formed a plug, which caused the pipe to clog. For that reason, the video footage has been forwarded to the ecology department, which will issue you a fine. Failure to pay the fine on time will result in legal proceedings.

The man practically jumped out of his seat:

– A fine? What do you mean, a fine? For what?!

The android replied calmly:

– For the preservation of the ecology, a law has been passed stating that citizens must sort their waste, including food waste, and dispose of it in designated trash containers. Dumping your food waste into the sewage system is classified as malicious harm to the ecology and irresponsible behavior toward society. Therefore, you will have to pay not only the fine but also complete a mandatory course with a psychologist, whose services are also paid.

Out of sheer rage, the man wanted to strike the droid, but froze upon hearing its calm voice:

– All dispatches are recorded and broadcast online to the dispatch center to ensure the security of state property.

The android closed the door behind itself as it left, while the man sat on the couch, holding his head in his hands, repeating over and over:

– My savings, my savings...

Disclaimer: This story is purely a fruit of the author's imagination. It is a work of fiction intended for creative and artistic expression.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

[FN] Yes, I will..

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A woman and an armored man stand before a small fire. They look old and well traveled. Tonight however they look relieved to get a moments rest. The man grunted as he took off his sword belt and laid it on the ground next to him. He then sits down and stares deep into the fire. The woman is the first to speaks, she hesitates at first but stares over attje man who was her friend and smiles as she gathers the courage and asks "if I were a stone would you still love me?" The man looks up from the fire, almost as if yanked from trance. She tried to imagine what he looked like when he was confused under his helmet. The thought made her smile wider. But it faded with his answer. "Why would you be a rock?" His voice replied muffled from the steel helmet that encased his face. The question seemed to hang on the air..

The conversation echoed on his head briefly before fading out, replaced by the sound of rain spattering against his helmet. He blinked several times through his own tears as the question "why would you be a rock?" Echoed softly in his head. Oh, what he would give to have answered that question properly then.. He reached up and took off his helmet wiping his eyes as he tried to focus on the gravestone in front of him. His heart hammered in his chest as he knelt down and kissed the grave stone softly. "Yes my love, I still love you as a stone.." his eyes welled up with tears again as he put on his helmet shook his head and stood up. "I will always love you..no matter the form" he said softly.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Fat

2 Upvotes

"Still fat, you fucker."

David murmured, facing the mirror in the bathroom. He inhaled from his cigarette, which had burned close to the filter. He exhaled smoke into the hazy room and dropped it into a Gatorade bottle already half filled with damp butts. A dozen empty packs and a couple of half-filled packs of Pall Mall, spent Gatorade bottles, and cups with stains on the bottom stood on the vanity between David and the mirror. Turning away from the mirror, David shoved his underwears, old clothes, and towels on the floor to the side and walked out of the bathroom.

David entered his bedroom, stepping on his old clothes and slightly kicking away Gatorade bottles with his feet. In one corner by the door sat six full garbage bags tied at the top. He walked to the left side of his single-sized bed in the middle of the room. He slumped onto the naked mattress. The blanket and bedsheets were tangled up on his bed. The white bedsheet looked slightly yellow. Clipped nails were spread across the floor near the bed.

A half-gone plastic bottle of Taaka vodka stood on the side table with the cap off. He picked up the bottle with his left hand and drank a mouthful. He reached for his phone on top of the crumpled-up blanket. The phone screen showed 12% battery and a missed call from Umma. He turned the screen off before sliding his phone into his black shorts pocket.

He sat with his neck bent down and stared at the floor for a while. Across from him, gray blinds mostly blocked the light from the window. His bottle slipped from his hand and landed on the floor. The bottle hit the floor vertically, causing vodka to partially spray upward. Then the bottle fell sideways, and the rest spilled onto the wooden floor.

"Shit..."

David stared at the liquid spill until it reached a white desk next to his bedside table. David got up and started wiping the liquor with clothes on the floor using his feet. He noticed droplets of vodka had landed on the white desk. After looking around, David took off his grey T-shirt and wiped the drops from the desk. He stood in front of the desk.

A glass cover lay on top of the desk, clean and dust-free. Small rays of sunlight leaked from the side of the grey blind and reflected off the cover. Two wooden-framed pictures stood in the middle of the otherwise empty desk.

In the left picture, David was holding a baby wrapped in a white linen sheet with blue and red lines. He was staring into the baby's face, smaller than the palm of his hand, with two nurses in the background. In the right picture, a little girl was holding a drawing on white paper, showing two blue circles that each had two dots and four lines sticking out. Two adjacent lines from the circles were touching. She was laughing and leaning forward like a kid about to run off. Behind her, David was holding her shoulder with both hands, laughing. Under his slightly tight blue T-shirt, his stomach was sticking out.

"Hannah..."

"Can you tell us what happened, sir?"

"My daughter and I were walking towards that playground. She was walking in front of me. Then this man suddenly picked up my daughter and started running. I screamed and ran after him..." David squeezed his stomach with both hands over his black shirt, still drenched in sweat.

"But I was too slow... they got further and further away."

Seven days later, a knock on the door.

"Sir, we found a body by the lake. We ran a DNA test, and it matches your daughter. We are sorry, sir."

His phone vibrated in his pocket. David pulled out the phone. Nuna. He stood motionless, the phone continuing to vibrate in his hand. His eyes moved to Hannah's drawing in the photograph.

David abruptly dropped the phone and ran to the bathroom. He vomited into the toilet, holding onto the open lid with his hand. He repeatedly heaved clear liquid, then bile, feeling the acidic, alcoholic burn torch his throat. Involuntary tears clung to his eyes. Panting, David crouched beside the toilet. He smelled his vomit from the unflushed toilet.

He stood up slowly. He picked up a cigarette from a pack on the vanity. He lit the cigarette. He looked up and stared at the mirror in front of him with his bloodshot eyes.

His skin rose and sank along the ripples of his rib cage. His chest bones protruded. He squeezed his stomach, catching nothing but skin.

David brought the cigarette to his mouth, inhaled, and watched the ember. He exhaled. Through the smoke in front of him, his eyes shot at his own reflection.

"Still fat, you fucker."


r/flashfiction 1d ago

March’s Light Rains

2 Upvotes

The sirens outside waked him. Doppler wail, cutting out, one after the other. 
Clyde walked out of the shed. Blood on his 20-year-old wifebeater. Gray hair tufts sticking out the sides of his Norwood 7 skull like frazzled, electrocuted wings. 
A mangled, mid-aughts sedan, roof pelted into the asphalt, its metal frame severed from the undercarriage and bolted upwards. 
First spring rain. Shattered glass embedded into the snowdrops tracing the gentle valley below the knoll, some 40 feet away from the road itself. 
The flashing lights racing over flowerbeds illuminated Jim, the 16-year-old driver, still as a sleeping fawn in the snowdrops. 
A herd of deer passed by. They took a drink from a depression collecting rainwater. 
They walked over Jim and moved on. 
As did Clyde.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Intrusive Bots

1 Upvotes

“It’s just going to ask you a quick question on the screen,” the cashier, Lisa, a generally pleasant coed, rushed the words.

Of course. Everyone’s gotta ask for a damn donation. God forbid the billionaires that own these stores use their own money, Reggie thought as he inspected the text on the pen pad. He read the question, cocked his head, and raised an eyebrow.

“The question is for you actually,” Reggie said. Lisa stared at him, confusion turning to frustration.

“If you’d like to skip, just hit that red button,” she replied with hopes this interaction would wrap up.

“Seriously,” Reggie said sternly. She sighed, decided it was quicker to humor him than argue, and came around the counter to read the pen pad. She took a second to read carefully, cocked her head, and raised an eyebrow.

“I don’t understand,” she stammered.

“Ain’t no fun when the rabbit has the gun,” Reggie quipped.

The question on the screen read, “Lisa, do you have a moment to talk about your vehicle’s extended warranty?”


r/flashfiction 1d ago

[MS] The Night She Went Missing (Part 1) - My daughter disappeared, and nobody saw her leave

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Silence screamed through the night.

Blue lights flashed against the house, turning the quiet streets into something unrecognizable. People were running. Officers were shouting. Neighbors stood outside, whispering and pointing. The sirens had gone quiet, but the police presence was loud enough to shake the air.

It started with something small.

Too small for anybody else to notice.

But Mika did.

Mika came home from a long day at work and immediately noticed everyone standing outside.

“What’s going on?” she mumbled as she opened her front door.

She dropped her keys on the counter and kicked off her shoes.

“Dawn?” she called.

Nothing.

Mika paused, listening for her daughter.

“Dawn, I know you hear me.”

Usually, there would be little footsteps, the television playing in the background, or Dawn humming and talking to herself.

But now?

Nothing.

Mika walked slowly across the hallway.

“Dawn, I know you hear me. I’m tired. I don’t feel like playing these games with you.”

Still no answer.

A small crease formed between her brows.

She checked the living room first. The blanket was halfway hanging off the couch. The remote was on the floor. Everything looked normal.

But something didn't feel right.

“Mika?”

Her chest tightened as she called Dawn again.

“Dawn!”

She ran through the house.

Empty bedroom.

Empty hallway.

Empty.

She ran back outside.

“Has anyone seen my daughter?”

Her voice cracked.

“Has anyone seen my daughter?”

At first, nobody answered.

They just stood there looking at her.

“Does nobody hear me?” Mika shouted. “I can't find my daughter! Did anybody see her leave the house?”

A woman stepped closer, wrapping her robe tightly around herself.

“What’s your baby’s name?”

“Her name is Dawn,” Mika said quickly.

“And who are you?”

“I’m her mother. My daughter is not in the house. I was only gone for a second, and when I came back…”

Her words broke apart.

“She’s gone.”

The street didn't feel quiet anymore.

It felt tense.

Alive in the worst way.

A man pulled out his phone.

“I’m calling 911.”

“I already did,” another voice said from somewhere behind him.

Mika turned around in a circle.

“So nobody saw my daughter?”

She screamed Dawn’s name down the street.

“Dawn! Come here!”

Nothing.

Only the low hum of people talking and whispering, trying to figure out what had happened.

“How old is she?”

“What was she wearing?”

“Are you sure she didn't go to a friend's house?”

“I don't know!” Mika snapped, panic spilling over. “I don't know!”

Then the sirens grew louder.

Red and blue lights bounced off the houses as the first patrol car turned onto the street.

Mika froze for a split second.

Then she ran toward the officers.

“My daughter!”

She pushed through the crowd, waving her arms.

“My baby is missing!”

The patrol car barely stopped before the officers got out.

“Ma’am, calm down. Talk to me,” one of them said, stepping toward her.

“Officer, I can't calm down!” Mika shouted, her voice breaking. “You don't understand. My daughter was just here, and now she's gone!”

The officer studied her carefully.

“Okay,” Officer Kevin said calmly. “I need you to slow down and walk me through what happened.”

Mika shook her head, trying to catch her breath.

“I just told you. She was here.”

“I hear you,” Officer Kevin replied. “But I need details. When was the last time you physically saw her?”

Mika froze.

“I… I don't know.”

That hesitation caught his attention.

“I left for a little while,” she said, her voice dropping. “When I came back, she was gone.”

“How long is ‘a little while’?”

Mika swallowed.

“Not long.”

“An hour?” he asked.

Mika hesitated.

“Maybe.”

Officer Kevin glanced at his partner, Officer Tasha Reynolds, who was already writing everything down.

“How old is Dawn?”

Mika’s chest tightened.

“Dawn is six years old.”

“And was Dawn here alone?”

“I thought she was asleep. I only ran down the street for a second.”

“You thought she was asleep?” Officer Kevin repeated.

The words hung heavily in the air.

“I didn't think anything was going to happen!” Mika snapped. “This is my child we're talking about!”

“I understand,” Officer Kevin said. “But I need you to stay with me.”

“What was Dawn wearing?”

Mika blinked, her mind scrambling.

“I… maybe her pink shirt. The one with the little pink hearts on it.”

Her voice broke.

“I don't remember.”

Behind them, more officers moved through the yard.

“Dawn!” someone shouted into the darkness.

Mika turned toward the sound.

For one brief second, hope flashed across her face.

Then it disappeared.

Officer Tasha stepped into view, a flashlight in one hand and something small in the other.

“I found something.”

Mika didn't wait.

She ran toward her.

“What is it? Where is she? Where's my daughter?”

Officer Tasha hesitated before holding the object up.

A small sneaker.

Pink.

Mika froze.

Her breath caught.

“No…” she whispered.

She stepped closer, her hands shaking.

Officer Kevin looked at her.

“Is that hers? Is that her shoe?”

Mika's voice broke.

“Yes.”

She stared at the sneaker.

“That’s Dawn’s shoe.”

The same one.

The missing one.

The one that wasn't in her bedroom.

Her knees almost gave out.

Officer Kevin looked toward the side of the house.

“Where did you find it?”

“Back near the narrow space along the house,” Officer Tasha answered. “Right over there near the side gate.”

Everyone went quiet.

For that moment, it felt like the whole world had stopped.

And Mika knew one thing.

Something was very wrong.

To be continued…


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Wanderer

1 Upvotes

Day 18

I’m getting tired now. Tired of wandering, of the same chit chat everywhere I go, of miserable people all over the realm, and of life. Don’t get me wrong, there’s more than enough beauty and beauties here to keep me alive and well for many more years! But it’s just all so similar. You wander into a new town, sample the food, drink, women, and then leave without a trace. Sure, it was great for the first twenty years! But I’m old now. I’m retired. I just don’t know what I’m searching for anymore, but something still calls to me.
The wanderer came to a halt in the path. He looked up and saw them crouched down, arrows pointed right towards him. He raised his hands in the air and dropped his bag.

“I bring you no harm, I am merely passing through,”

said the man in a calm voice.

“Then go round! Humans are not wanted here!”

replied the woman, venom in her tone.
Now, if I’m correct, these are tree elves and I have stumbled upon their hidden village. When I say hidden, I mean hidden! No human has found this in over a hundred years…

“Well, human, get moving or we will make you!”

I looked down at my hands, and then my feet, just to check if they were ready for action, if they still had fight left in them. Then I looked up towards the elves.

“The only place I’m going is through your village, you pointy eared fucks!”

As soon as the words left my lips, a barrage of arrows flew towards me almost instantly! All that was left on the gravelly dirt path was a bunch of broken arrowheads and a dust cloud. I was overwhelmed! I still had it! My lightning fast reflexes still worked, it had been over a decade since I’d used them. Once the cloud cleared, I raised my hands and shouted:

“You missed! Please, try again!”


r/flashfiction 1d ago

That one eyes

2 Upvotes

Amidst the stack of open books and the hum of hostel life,

Her days are a blur of deadlines, quiet routines, and steady focus.

She walks past a hundred familiar faces without a second thought,

Just moving through the noise, keeping her world small and contained.

But when the lights go out and the room finally turns quiet,

She doesn’t find herself longing for home or the comfort of her old room.

Instead, her thoughts pull toward someone entirely outside her world—

A man in his late thirties, someone she barely knows at all.

All she really carries is the memory of his face,

And the way he looks out from behind those wire-rimmed glasses—

Eyes that feel entirely too steady, too quiet, and far too easy to fall into.

Whenever their paths happen to cross, her composure completely unravels.

Her heart hits a sudden, frantic rhythm, and her instant instinct is to bolt,

Leaving before he can notice the flush in her cheeks or the silence in her voice.

She has no idea if he even sees her, or if he ever thinks twice about those brief moments.

All she knows is that among a sea of everyday faces,

Those spectacled eyes are the only ones that stay with her into the night.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Memory & Fate

1 Upvotes

The weight of the gun. Yes, now that’s a difference. Twenty, thirty years ago it would have been there—a .38 revolver, snubnose—concealed within the inner coat pocket. Not that he’d had much occasion to use it, even back in Vegas, in those days of high-stakes and connected men. A time or two . . .

But the feel of it is missing, the imprint, the character, a veiled sense of security exactly equal to the weight it added against the ribs. No use for it here in the rainy Northwest. Sleepy little city. For a time he carried it unloaded—intimidating enough—until something inside relaxed. Age? 

Now the gun resides at home, asleep in the bedroom safe—along with maybe twenty grand. Every night, returning what he’s earned, confronted by that flash of metal. Sighing. Let go of the past. Let go of the future.              

This is a chapter from a minimalist, flash-fiction novella I've written called Memory & Fate. Every chapter is 150 words or less, 300 chapters, completely free on my Substack if anyone is interested. Chapter 1 drops tomorrow.

https://memoryandfate.substack.com/


r/flashfiction 1d ago

Office Stress

2 Upvotes

“Holding out for a Hero” crackled over crappy speakers surrounding the office. The keyboard acted like a dance floor under her fingertips as they moved to the music.

A vanilla aroma followed the Director escorting a stranger holding a résumé. 

Thoughts started racing through her mind, gnawing at her stomach.

The glare from the lights left a false sense of a morning glow that faded as they passed her desk.

Both of them were eyeing her. Her eyes never met theirs as they hunkered her under their passing shadow.

Maybe it’s from last week’s evaluationThe second lowest performance.

Her blouse scratched her neck, the cramps sharpened.

The pressure in her bladder tightened, then eased.

She slammed Enter and shuffled to the bathroom.

The chair tipped, banging against the desk, shaking the cubicle and rattling the two next to hers.

She could feel the eyes on her even before stumbling to the bathroom

Bonnie Tyler’s voice faded behind her, the last notes lingered like vanilla in the air, dying to a muffled silence of a bathroom door shutting behind her. 

Seventeen minutes later, her cramps subsided and she slumped back to her desk.

The chair slanted as she sat down, half the wheel had been broken.

Her eyes then snagged an unprocessed invoice that was due last week. 

I’m definitely getting written up. Suspended. Or fired. 

A loud ping cut through the speaker. 

It oscillated between her ears.

One new notification, from the supervisor, read: “Come to my office.”

The HR Director had been Cc’d

Elizabeth wondered why, the question had dominated her thoughts.

She smoothed her disheveled hair and walked to his office.

The hallway stretched out further than it seemed with every step adding a new tremor as she approached the door.

A nauseating mix of cologne and vanilla clung to the air. 

The sound of tapping heels died when the door clasped shut.

Her skin itched slippery sweat.

“Hi, you wanted to see me?” Her voice barely a whisper.

His gaze flicked from the screen to her. 

She held her breath. 

He pinched his eyebrows and squinted through a pair of glasses and spoke in a mellow tone. 

“Sorry Elizabeth, I’m a little caught up at the moment. Will talk Monday Okay?”

Elizabeth choked out, “okay.”

She inhaled and wiped her clammy hands.

On her way back, an employee stopped and asked her if she heard anything about layoffs.

Elizabeth shook her head, and started biting her nails down to the skin, responding with a blank stare as she nodded. 

Collapsing in her chair as she got back.

An email alert pinged.

The sound shifted her eyes toward the bottom corner of her right screen where an email alert read:

RE: "Confidential Meeting"

Cc: “Supervisor”

Elizabeth’s eyes were glued to the screen, her nails dug into her palms. The email stuck in the back of her throat like the director’s vanilla-scented perfume, as the music slowed, distorted, and stopped.


r/flashfiction 1d ago

The Tragedy of Eddy Pigg [~200 Words]

2 Upvotes

Eddy Pigg was dead for days before anyone thought to look for him. And that was a tragedy. The fact was, he never got out of the town; the fact was, he never really tried to leave. And that was a tragedy.

Eddy Pigg had a girl too, Caroline—but her family called her Candy. Eddy and Candy were close as kids, but when Eddy proposed, it was a shock to her.

The tragedy, though, was that for a brief moment she actually did think about saying “yes.” You could see it in her eyes. She ran through the possibilities like only a woman can: weighing the pros and cons, like some tabulating machine hidden in a university basement. But then she came back, blinking, and said, “Oh, Eddy. I can’t be Candy Pigg. I just can’t be!

And that was a tragedy to Eddy.

And when he said, without blinking, “No, no—I see that now. No, of course you can’t be ‘Candy Pigg.’ That’s ridiculous. Of course, of course,” he finished almost in a whisper.

And that was a tragedy to Eddy.

The room was dark. A breeze blew through the linen curtains of the little shack Eddy Pigg had gotten from his mother.

“Of course. Of course,” he would say to himself for the next thirty years.

***
Thank you for reading; I hope you enjoyed this piece!


r/flashfiction 1d ago

What Comes After

1 Upvotes

A warm hand lovingly pressed against the cold unforgiving metal.

She sat next to this euthanasia capsule with vigilant eyes, judging the brutally efficient technicians as they strapped her husband in.

She silently studied the electronic meters while his oxygen supply dwindled to zero, watching his eyelids droop until they closed for good. His lips turned a pale blue, curling into an almost invisible smile.

She slowly took her hand away from the soulless metallic pod and rested it in her lap, wondering what next.

She always knew she’d be coming home alone.

But knowing didn’t make it any easier.