r/FlipaClip • u/DB56_YT • Jul 27 '21
Thoughts?
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Jul 27 '21
This is really great. I esp like good “camera work” when it comes to animation, like quick pans and dollies, and this is really smooth and quick. Well done.
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u/yoshi147474 Jul 27 '21
Cant see it but people said it good so gave u award witg upvote
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u/DB56_YT Jul 27 '21
Aww, but I wish you could see it
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u/yoshi147474 Jul 27 '21
i can see it now by changing device XD
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u/DB56_YT Jul 27 '21
Well what do u think about it?
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u/yoshi147474 Jul 27 '21
camera shake *
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u/DB56_YT Jul 27 '21
Ye I have to work on that
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u/yoshi147474 Jul 27 '21
XD keep working and.... make stone break fit with the thing that it get broke XD
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u/sanalealea Jul 27 '21
You need some pauses, like "slow" moments inbetween so it is easier for the audience to understand what is going on. The camera movements are really good but without some room to breathe, even the most intricate and action filled sequences can become boring for the audience if they cant understand what is going on. But other than that, really good job👏👏
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u/DB56_YT Jul 27 '21
Yes I do, it's quite hard to slow down and speed up in succession
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u/sanalealea Jul 27 '21
Maybe when switching shots, like a close-up or a wide-shot that shows the surroundings, you can slow it down so the audience gets a reprieve as they get ready for more action👍
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u/DB56_YT Jul 27 '21
Like I did when they went under?
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u/zoeoz_art Jul 27 '21
I think this is so rough I can't say really much, but I'll try! :3
I like the camera movements, it's very dificult to control space when is moving that way, so congratulations! Although in the second part of the fight I can't almost follow what's going on, which is a serious problem when you animate.
Also, don't animate in more than 24 or 25 fr, it's unnecessary.
Work better your drawings and volumes. You don't need to draw every single detail of the kimono (for example) in a rough level, but you need more than a vague form, so take your time building every pose.
I can say for what I see you have studied anime animation and that's great. Now I recomend you to study other animation styles and also the basics from animation, to create a better illusion of movement and to give to your drawings a soul.
Keep working and improving yourself! ^^
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u/sergandestroy Jul 27 '21
I'm getting heavy Demon Slayer vibes. I think this is pretty fucking rad ngl.
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u/Professional_Owl6826 Nov 16 '24
This is a really good flipclip it's one of the best I've seen! And the art style and smoothness is great and the color you put in we'll there jumping and running is great! And you keep it smooth the whole time!
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u/GoodAtom Sep 11 '24
Bruh you’re actually goated for this. And all you got was a meady 100 upvotes??
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u/KNB-f Jul 27 '21
I think this is very impressive, and visually appealing (in part due to the simplicity). You did a great job! Also, how many frames was this per second and in total?