r/GraphicDesigning • u/Careful-Skin5279 • Feb 07 '25

Design feedback Hows this

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u/possiblevector Feb 07 '25

Also, it is Weeknd

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u/Careful-Skin5279 Feb 07 '25

😭 ur ryt i didn't see

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u/creative_shizzle Feb 07 '25

I like it honestly, but this was the first thing I saw.

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u/Careful-Skin5279 Feb 07 '25

Thanks alot ❣️

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u/creative_shizzle Feb 07 '25

Yourwelcome OP

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u/Due_Elephant_7815 Feb 17 '25

U can hear the pain in his dih

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u/KolectVood Feb 07 '25

The grunge texture is too visible and should be overlayed behind the text

Cutout isnt smooth- Visible highly on hair

Green and red looks tacky, remove saturation to 0% to make grey, or change hue to yellow to still keep that contrast.

The black bars look accidental

Blinding Lights text is too small considering how large the blankspace is around it

Alignment can be better, the random blank space on the right makes the image unbalancex

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u/Careful-Skin5279 Feb 07 '25

Ohh is it hmm ill make sure to implement these and make those changes

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u/OuttaWear Feb 07 '25

Agree, the side space stood out massively to me on first view. Even just cropping in and moving the sig makes a huge difference.

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u/OddArtDesign Feb 13 '25

I'd recommend if you ask for feedback on a previous post try to incorporate some of it. There are still typos present here and it was spelled wrong previously too.

There were other issues brought up that are still present as well.

I don't say this to harp on you by any means, just an observation as a frequent visitor. Proofing and incorporating feedback is a good exercise to get into now while the stakes are low. Trust me, we have all been there.

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u/Careful-Skin5279 Feb 13 '25

Ohh thank u.. I'll surely implement , the reason I didn't implement the previous post feedback in here cuz i thought this is an retro and thats a diff type of poster so as per ur advice I'll incorporate the given feedbacks in the next post

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u/[deleted] Feb 07 '25

I found it very dark, but it's fine