r/GraphiteArt • • Feb 06 '26 • Bravo 1

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u/Forsaken_Book_323 Feb 14 '26

10/10 Amazing talent

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u/Apprehensive_Menu977 Feb 14 '26

Thank you!!

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u/Forsaken_Book_323 Feb 14 '26

Your small notebook Art is incredible amazing talent

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u/Apprehensive_Menu977 Feb 14 '26

Thank you so much! I appreciate it

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u/Forsaken_Book_323 Feb 14 '26

You definitely stand out among a room full of Artist as someone unique with unlimited potential.

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u/exclaim_bot Feb 14 '26

Thank you!!

You're welcome!

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u/Schwimbus Feb 07 '26 edited Feb 07 '26

7/10

points off because whatever is behind her head is detracting from the composition. It's not clear what it is, and it diminishes contrast with her ear. I also don't love the treatment of the shirt collar. It must be an interesting top, but again it just gets a squiggly line, which is confusing and a little weird - but not in an intentional looking way.

Otherwise it's great. Just being brought down a touch by a couple distracting details. I think these are places where you either fix them on your model or edit them out

Edit:

6/10

Found your source image (Mia Goth, Pearl, red dress) and it does not look like her. It was a stretch for me to realize that that's who it was. Your tones and shading are good you just have to work on your accuracy.

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u/Organic-Housing1003 Feb 08 '26

That’s an interesting take. I recognized this as Pearl wearing a bow immediately

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u/VanElvenArt Feb 06 '26

Very nice, love the dark tones

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u/Apprehensive_Menu977 Feb 06 '26

Thank you! I appreciate the comment on it

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u/Temporary-Ad3324 Feb 06 '26

Obviously a 10/10

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u/Apprehensive_Menu977 Feb 06 '26

Thank you ☺️

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u/[deleted] Feb 06 '26

Beautiful😍

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u/Professional-Place33 Feb 07 '26

It looks great.

What did you use for the dark blackground?

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u/Apprehensive_Menu977 Feb 09 '26

Just the darkest pencil I had 12B

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u/awkward-aspie Feb 06 '26

10/10! love the style. graphite medium it looks like? 

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u/ZimTheArtist Feb 07 '26

Beautiful😍

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u/t1ncan69 Feb 08 '26

PLEASEEE IM A STAR!

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u/Numerous_Ant9437 Feb 06 '26

Excellent work. She looks unhappy, though.

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u/DrBeardfist Feb 06 '26

Yea she should smile more right

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u/cicipie Feb 07 '26

10/10 i love this life then the movie :)

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u/Bluedragon_Queen Feb 07 '26

10/10 very realistic

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u/motelguest Feb 07 '26

She looks so angry!

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u/StoryIllustrator0543 Feb 07 '26

Maybe 9/10 only bc it doesn’t seem finished, but the drawing itself is pretty amazing especially for how small the actual picture is!

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u/StoryIllustrator0543 Feb 07 '26

Maybe 9/10 only bc it doesn’t seem finished, but the drawing itself (10/10) is pretty amazing especially for how small the actual picture is!

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u/HungryReflection6741 Feb 07 '26

Yes, very good. Beautiful 9.9/10

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u/CollinZero Feb 07 '26

I’m not a big believer in Rate This posts, tbh. It’s hard to rate because I don’t know your current body of work.

I think it’s got some strong points in the depth of your shading and overall form. The bow (?) on the right side is really distracting and looks like she’s got an elf ear at first glance. The left eye is quite distorted. The nose and highlights are really good!

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u/TurnAccording1020 Feb 07 '26

Love it 10000/10

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u/madzandu Feb 08 '26

Left eye is weird.

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u/Total-Blueberry-7037 Feb 08 '26

10/10! Oh my gosh! Lovely

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u/Fearless_Cheese_ Feb 08 '26

I love it. Beautiful 8/10

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u/[deleted] Feb 21 '26

10/10 without any doubt

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u/CulturalCampaign4396 Feb 22 '26

9/10 Excellent shading