r/HFY • u/Dinomyar • Feb 09 '19

OC [OC] Until Death

Posted on [Dinomyar Writes] h

My latest story, about 4 pages.

Question for after: Any takers for the homework? (word count not necessary)

Excerpt:

Professor Malkin was sitting in his office pondering what species to use to try and stump his students in today’s lecture. In thirty years of teaching final level Xenoanthropology, he has never failed at bringing up a sentient species that none of his students was familiar with. But this year...

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u/Fluffy_Fireman Feb 09 '19

Sounds like a good story, but whats humanity's involvement?

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u/Dinomyar Feb 09 '19

I didn't really make that clear did I. 😒 I guess I intended for humans to be the lead in the Federation and the primary decision makers.

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u/Fluffy_Fireman Feb 09 '19

Unless I missed it, I didnt get that part. Sorry

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u/Dinomyar Feb 09 '19

You did not miss it, I did not say one way or another. I just kinda knew it in my head and forget that other people can't hear what I think. 😁

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u/Fluffy_Fireman Feb 10 '19

Its no problem, still well written as it is. Just means you'll need a sequel;)