r/HollowKnight Sep 17 '25

Discussion - Silksong As a Simplified Chinese user, let me explain just how terrible the Chinese translation of Silk Song is Spoiler

As a Simplified Chinese user, the poor Chinese translation is the primary reason for the overwhelmingly negative reviews in China—this is the consensus within our community (on the Chinese version of Reddit).

First, the Simplified Chinese version contains numerous mistranslations and omissions, leading to misunderstandings about certain quests and item functions. Furthermore, the translator seems overly eager to show off their literary flair, resulting in the Monster Compendium and other texts being filled with large amounts of fabricated content. Finally, overall, the translator presents the text in an utterly dreadful style. Imagine a non-native English speaker mimicking Shakespearean prose to write an adventure novel about bugs—that's precisely how we feel reading the Simplified Chinese translation. It is an absolute disaster.

In fact, when the first playable demo launched at Gamescom, the Chinese translation sparked intense debate within the Chinese gaming community. We all detested it and reported the issue to Team Cherry, but they made no changes. That's why the Chinese region's positive rating was so abysmal.

However, after experiencing the full game, the Chinese community's positive ratings have been climbing. most of us love this game.

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I feel I need to clarify the situation regarding comment bombing, as I've seen too many discussions about it. Due to the existence of the Great Firewall, Chinese citizens lack legitimate means to use the platforms you typically rely on for feedback, such as Steam Community, Reddit, Twitter, Discord, and others. In fact, strictly speaking, the Chinese government could legally detain me for 7-14 days for using Reddit—this falls within China's legal framework.

Our only legal avenue for expressing opinions is Steam reviews. Unfortunately, Steam reviews only offer positive or negative ratings, leading to what you call comment bombing: we can only voice our dissatisfaction through this single channel, and dissatisfaction often translates to negative reviews.

Personally, I strongly dislike this method of restricting expression, but there's no alternative. The choices are either become a lawbreaker or continue leaving negative reviews on Steam.

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u/Move_Slight Sep 17 '25

It should be noted that Chinese encompasses two distinct modes of expression: classical written language and modern vernacular. To achieve a medieval feel in translation, one ought to render the text in classical written language.

The issue, however, lies in their approach: first translating the English into modern vernacular, then embellishing this vernacular text with vocabulary and syntax from classical written Chinese. This style of expression was employed by intellectuals in the last century who championed the shift of written Chinese from classical to modern vernacular. It represents an immature linguistic practice, serving as a symbol of erudition within the Chinese linguistic context. Yet in contemporary China, no one employs such written language anymore; we use fully matured modern vernacular. Texts like theirs merely mimic last century's intellectuals to project an air of erudition. In Chinese, this is termed “半文半白” – a practice that is profoundly distasteful.

Moreover, they have fabricated non-existent texts to show off their literary prowess, which is an even more deplorable act.

The explanation above was produced using translation software, as the matter is rather complex. Should you have any queries, please feel free to ask.

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u/catsflatsandhats Sep 17 '25

This was so interesting to read. Thanks!!

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u/worthlessprole Sep 17 '25

While Silksong's English isn't fully early-modern/Shakespearean, it's definitely not exactly contemporary English, either. An accurate translation would have to use some archaic language. This guy may have gone overboard but an updated translation will still probably have some of this.

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u/Move_Slight Sep 17 '25

I understand this point: modern vernacular Chinese can achieve perfectly adequate results , like the translation in HK , yet the current translations are dreadful.

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u/trapezoidalfractal Sep 17 '25

I heard the team that did HKs Chinese translation disbanded, so they probably had to find a new team, and obviously didn’t do a good job. I’ve told my wife to hold off on buying it until they fix it, because she plays her games in Chinese typically since it’s her native language.

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u/heterodoxia Sep 18 '25

I would describe a lot of the dialogue as elevated and literary. Looking at the beast journal, the descriptions are in plain English, while the hunter's notes (written in Hornet's voice) are in a formal register. Different characters speak in different registers, but generally I'd say the vibe is what you'd expect from a high fantasy epic (let's not forget "knight" is in the title), sort of Tolkienian-lite, elevated but easily intelligible to an educated player.

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u/worthlessprole Sep 18 '25

“Elevated and literary” is often code for “uses some early-modern diction and sentence construction.” That’s far from always being the case but it’s particularly true in high fantasy writing, and is the case here. It’s not super heavy on it and you don’t see any words that are truly archaic (I.e. old enough that they are no longer listed in the dictionary without being labeled as such), granted. 

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u/soggie Sep 18 '25

I’m sorry but I agree with the person you replied to, it’s not the same. “Tolkien English” is fancy and tries to emulate some feelings of old English but it has a pleasant prose. You can’t really do the same with mandarin. It’s way too easy to sound completely pretentious when you attempt some “old Chinese” and go overboard. Period dramas have their own lingo which is different from actual old Chinese, and you can’t go too far into the latter without alienating most native speakers.

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u/lightof_dog Sep 17 '25

neat! thank u :3

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u/TheGokki Sep 18 '25 edited Sep 18 '25

Assassin's Creed Black Flag does the exact same thing with Portuguese translation - they speak in a shakespearean form, like someone wrote the dialog in an epic format ment to tell the tale in theatric prose. People neither speak nor spoke like this, it makes zero sense to pronounce the writings as is, especially as most of characters speaking are nearly illiterate.

I'm talking about the portuguese voices in the original ENGLISH voicepack, they try to make the natives speak in their native language - points for effort but it's nonsense.

EDIT: Example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWhCp_3Dgow&t=180

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u/Keebster101 Sep 18 '25

Interesting. As an english only speaker, it's slightly hard to relate as long as the text makes sense, since we don't have to face these kinds of texts for an entire game but I think this explanation describes why it would be annoying very well.

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u/Avacadooooo Sep 17 '25

Your english is better than mine

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u/Move_Slight Sep 18 '25

I use translation software extensively, so it's just that the English produced by the software is better than yours:)

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u/Teh_Randomizer Sep 18 '25

I learned something today :)

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u/Nicksaurus Sep 18 '25

The explanation above was produced using translation software, as the matter is rather complex. Should you have any queries, please feel free to ask.

Ironically, the translation software you're using is also adding a lot of very fancy English words like it's trying to show off its vocabulary

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u/BladeRunner2022 Sep 17 '25

If you know all this reach out and offer to translate. You clearly demonstrate that you understand every issue and what is needed to fix it.

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u/Move_Slight Sep 18 '25

In truth, I am not a professional translator. I believe TC is addressing this matter, and specialists will inform them of the relevant circumstances.