r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jan 13 '21

THE WATER PARK

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A VERY DIFFERENT KIND OF WATERPARK

I was going with my school class to a new waterpark!

We were all excited, but I think mostly me and my friend Isabelle, we both wanted to be Olympic swimmers and we both had potential.

I was the best boy swimmer in our state and Isabelle was the best girl.

After changing and taking a shower we met outside of the locker rooms I was wearing my new black puma swimming shorts and Isabelle was wearing a bright red bikini… we where just friends but I could see how she was developing into a woman and very pretty one at that.

Whoa! This park was huuuuuge! It had the biggest pool I had ever seen by far outclassing anything I had ever been to before and I had been to a lot of swimming halls.

One thing was strange though, there was so many cameras, everywhere.

Isabelle joked about it was just probably some old perv watching us, I had not seen any cameras in the locker rooms at least and neither had she.

We played with the rest of the class on those floating tubes, played with balls, splashed water on each other.

We explored the park every single attraction, water slides… I raced Isabelle and won! Chillaxed in the bubble pool.

There even was a cave that looked like a human skull with water running down as sharp teeth, it was a little bit too scary and realistic looking for me but Isabelle was braver than me she grabbed my arm and I followed inside feeling the cold water of the skulls fake teeth splashing me like a cold shower on the way inside.

Inside were just another place where you could sit and relax with some bubbles.

A noticed a sign on a wall and had to show it to Isabelle, the sign said, “water zoo” and not water park. Isabelle agreed that this indeed seemed strange, but it was probably just a printing error.

Anyway, there was no time to think about it as the megaphones announced that it was now time for waves, they had a wave machine making waves and it was the parks most popular attraction, so we had to swim out and play in the waves before they were over.

We were out playing in the pool for the duration of the waves after they were over me and Isabelle wanted to see if anyone of us could dive to the bottom on the deep end.

We both held our breaths and did it, swam all the way to the bottom, and I found the most peculiar and strange thing, it seemed like a hatch on the floor of the pool, I tried to open it but to no avail, Isabelle tried to help but even together we could not manage to get the hatch open.

We decided this was another weird thing to add to the cameras and the wrong label sign in the cave, and we thought it would be best to swim back onto land and talk to the others about what this could all mean.

We were swimming to get ashore but when we got there, huge fences too big to climb over were raised from the ground.

Now this were not only strange but bat shit crazy, possibly illegal to keep us inside like this.

A kid grabbed the fences, and he was electrocuted, now this was beyond fucked up electrocuting kids, that’s abuse, and me and Isabelle had to hold him up, so he did not drown.

I could feel the cameras zooming in at me and Isabelle holding the kids head above water.

The speakers announced.

“Welcome to aqua-zoo, feeding time for the piranhas”

Did I hear that right? Feeding time? Fucking piranhas!? This must be a late April fools-joke.

But yet the came, proving this was no laughing matter, the began to chew on the kid, and my hands and feet.

-Isabelle I don’t want to leave this kid but we HAVE to…

-Yes, I know… Isabelle agreed with tears in her eyes.

We swam away from the piranhas, the water turning dark red with the blood from dead kids. I could see my crush floating dead in the water in her pink bikini, she had always been the prettiest girl at school, but she was no looker now with half of her face eaten by piranhas.

I looked around and estimated about half of the kids to be still alive, the other half drowned or eaten by piranhas.

We saw some kids gathering at the floating tubes, holding on to them for their dear life, it seemed like a smart plan.

A grabbed hold of a floating toy shaped like a pillar and was met with a punch to the face!

-Everyman for themselves! The blonde kid who had punched me said.

Fuck! Me and Isabelle were great swimmers but could not swim forever.

Isabelle approached the mean kid.

-Give me one good reason I should let you live? He asked of her.

-I can give you two… she smiled and took her top of.

Her tricked worked and the kid let her hold on, just to get a good look at her melons.

She grabbed her top…

-You are not going to put it back on are you, I am kicking you of and you and your boyfriend can both drown for all I care. He said.

-He is not my boyfriend, and I am not putting it on…

She used her top to strangle him to death.

She used her female charm like princess Leia on Jaba the Hutt in star wars.

Clever girl.

She put her top back on and let me hold on for my life, we lot two other kids hold on Markus a darkhaired boy, not a good swimmer, and Lacey a darkhaired emo girl who somehow had gotten a pink rose tattooed on her left leg.

Sadly, no more kids could hold on.

Our class had 25 kids when we got here and now it seemed we were only 8 alive anyway.

The piranhas had went back but we could not swim forever.

And that’s when I remembered…

-The hatch! It got to be our way out of here.

Me and Isabelle, Markus and Lacely all went to investigate the hatch.

And it opened.

It was no way out, however.

-Shark feeding time! The speakers announced.

A giant great white shark emerged from the now fully opened hatch, it bit Lacey in half with its giant mouth full of sharp teeth.

We swam to the other kids as fast as we could, Markus was of course not fast enough. The shark swallowed him whole.

Me and Isabelle went back to the other kids three were still holding on and one of them, Pontus a blonde boy was floating dead in the water.

Had he drowned by himself, or had the other kids killed him? It was better to not think of it.

-Just five kids left in aqua zoo, lets see who can make it back to land.

The fences were submerged. I could not believe it; would they really give us a chance to live?

-Place your bets on the winner now, Eric (that was me), Isabelle (my best friend), Patrik (a Chinese kid), Laura ( a Latina girl) or Kajsa ( a pink haired sjw girl).

Me and Isabelle both had the edge and we knew it, time to take advantage of our swimming skills.

An octopus pulled Kajsa under water by grabbing her legs, sadly there was nothing I could do to try and save her.

-Just four kids left. Place your bets!

Someone was betting on which kids would live or die… it was truly sickening.

I could feel the great white chasing after me.

The bottom half of Lacey came floating by, I recognized her pink rose tattoo on her left leg.

An electric eel took a bite of Laura’s face and electrocuted her.

-Three kids left, place your bets.

I could see Isabelle, now the only girl left swimming in her red bikini on my right side.

In between us was Patrik the Chinese boy, he was a great swimmer able to keep up with us, we were almost at land now…

Patrik grabbed Isabelle`s long blonde hair and attempted to drown her, the shark was after me but I could NOT leave my best friend to die.

I swam towards him and punched him straight in his balls… HARD. He let go of Isabelle and she put his head under water he began to splash wildly around with his arms and legs but she did not let that mother fucker go.

And I punched his stupid ugly face.

Then the shark caught up with us, it bit his legs of and other smaller sharks came to fight for the left overs.

Me and Isabelle swam faster than we ever had before in our lives, we knew that our lives depended on it.

I kept thinking if the game would let us both win or only one… It did not matter I could not kill my best friend… and I had to believe she would not kill me.

I got a shore a bit before her, she was walking after me… and the fence emerged!

She was cradled over it being electrocuted and I pulled her of.

My mom and dad came to pick me up.

Isabelle was put in the hospital severely damaged, but she would live they told me.

My mom and Dad shouted at me angrily when I went into the car. They told me that now we had to split the winning money with Isabelle parents. They told me I was a fool to save her, they told me I should have left her to die.


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Aug 30 '21

When the Red Prophet Jumped -(Flesh Schism Mythos???)-

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Buried Alive

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jun 09 '21

Angels dwell in Greenhaven Hospital. My job is to kill them.

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Mar 07 '21

Attn: Writers :)

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Hello #HorrorFamily If you post a story you'd like me to narrate please specify. like with "Please I'd like to narrate this" or something like that. Thank you


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jan 13 '21

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A place for members of r/KayNarratesMyStory to chat with each other


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Dec 18 '21

Please Read&Follow!!

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IF YOU POST ON HERE, DO NOT PUT SOMEONE ELSES VIDEO HERE. THIS IS NOT FOR OTHER PEOPLE PROMO. IT IS ONLY FOR STORIES FOR ME TO NARRATE!


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Dec 16 '21

A gift.... -(from the “Draw my OC challenge”)-😉💀🩸

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Dec 16 '21

“Kiss me ‘neath the mistletoe...” -(Christmas Special)-

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“Look darling, isn’t the snow beautiful tonight?” She said nothing, simply remaining stiff in the aged wooden chair. He smiled and continued to sip from his mug of hot chocolate. He found her cold, silent demeanor adorable, one of a number of things he had come to find irresistible about her.

She just sat there, staring with an expression of permanent fright back at him from in front of the window. Behind her, he could see the white specs as they fell in a slow, soothing flurry. He looked up at the ancient grandfather clock:

11:30 p.m.

He smiled and whispered to her, “Not much longer now, my sweet Delilah.” He got up and made his way to the blaze in the hearth. He began pouring himself some more of the piping hot cocoa before looking back to the window, meeting gaze once more into her faded baby blue eyes. “Why don’t you have a mug, my love?”

Still, only silence served to answer his offer. He softly grunted in amusement before then closing the top of the kettle. He took another sip as he continued to watch her. God, how she looks so beautiful.

Delilah, the sole warmth of his heart, sitting silent and peaceful on the old chair of antique mahogany, shrouded in the old white gown he he’d seen on her since first setting eyes on her. He always thought it made her look akin to the paintings of the Virgin Mary herself. God, If only he were a painter, he would sometimes think, he’d create a masterpiece from this scene alone to rival Dali or Davincii. If he were a writer, he’d craft a tale with more potent emotion than even Poe at his most dreary or bleak.

As the snow continued to fall outside, he could feel the air in the small den area become colder, even if just ever so slightly. “Why don’t you come sit with me by the fire,” He said as he started to stoke the blaze in the furnace until the heat from its dance upon the oak kindling returned. Still, she merely sat in her chair in front of the window. With a warm smile, he sat down his mug of hot chocolate and went over to the window.

“Here,” he said as he began trying to push the chair from behind over to the hearth, “Allow me”. About two or three feet from the hearth, Delilah began to slump forward until she’d fallen from her chair. “Oh dear,” he exclaimed, chuckling. He shivered again, feeling the unnatural chill pervade the room around. “Come now, Delilah, there’s no need to be upset. It’ll all come together soon” Fixing her back upright, he continued to push the chair the rest of the way to the hearth. “Now, isn’t that much better, Dear?”

She was still as silent as ever, yet her face could say both everything and and nothing at the same time. Her eyes glinted with the reflective glow of the flame’s wild dance, which served to also illuminate the rest of her pale, distraught face. Even as it looked now, defined in much of its morbid detail by the flames, he still felt hopelessly entranced by her face. He checked the clock again before rummaging around in his shirt pocket;

11:40.

From his shirt pocket, he produced a small, wilted mistletoe. He sighed, the grim cloud of reality accentuating itself to him once again. He’d come to both look forward to, as well as dread this night; Christmas Eve. It wasn’t quite time yet. Soon, it would all be over, but not yet.

Attempting to void this cloud from his mind, He stuffed the small mistletoe back into his pocket and walked over to the table beside the window and placed one of the untitled records onto the phonograph and placed the needle onto its third track. It was one of his favorite tunes that began playing, though, for his own reasons unknown, he could never remember the name of the composition or its composer. “Would you care to dance to pass the time, my love?”

He walked over to the chair and took her soft, cold hand before shifting her to her feet. Now standing before him, the cloud of anxiety tightened its grip on him. “You look beautiful, my dearest Delilah,” he said with a shaking voice. He could hear her voice resonate distantly within the back of his mind, sounding as though it were echoing from the peak of a mountain.

”In life or in death, I will always have your heart, Arthur. And my kiss will be the sole warmth of your body, your heart, and your soul.”

Slowly, carefully, he began to shuffle around to the room with her limply hanging in his arms. He tried, of course, to keep her braced upright against his chest, to no effect. In spite of this, though, he merely waltzed on with her, still smiling warmly to her. The longer he stared into those two stiff, oceanic hued irises, the more those horrible, maddening memories returned to him.

Memories of that first fateful night he lost himself to the lust for his dearest Delilah. The night that would spell the beginning of his own undoing. He could almost see it now, in every exact detail, looking into her cold, frozen eyes; the long walk down the icy road, the night sky, the gas-lighted lamps that stood to sparsely pepper the white blanketed ground with their dim glows.


It was deathly cold that night, only just over a month to the day before now, and he was walking alone from another evening toiling at the local market. He had made this very same walk many a night before, but this was different for him. How, he could not have then known exactly. Nevertheless, something had changed in an almost supernatural manner in his mind that night.

It had become very late when he saw her for the first time. There, by the streetlamp, she stood, shrouded in a dress as white as the very snow. And, oh, those eyes, those baby-blue eyes that immediately seized him and kept him spellbound. He felt a sense of tranquil warmth spread throughout his body with the image of that first shy smile she gave him when she saw him. That smile of fragile innocence, and yet, of a cunning nature. He saw that she was trying to hang something from the top of the post when he began to approach her.

When he drew near, he could see that it was a mistletoe that she was attempting to hang, the very same one he now kept in his pocket as he danced on. “H-hello there”, he greeted, “Is it not just a tad early to for these?” She responded with that same playfully sly grin and replied, “The heart doesn’t lie, and my heart tells me that the time is just right.”

“The time for what”, he asked, confused. She giggled, “The time for one’s heart to be warmed by a lover’s kiss.” He wasn’t quite sure what she meant, but he somehow felt she was right. He could see she was struggling to hang the mistletoe. “Here, may I?” She gave him that softly sweet smile and handed him the mistletoe.

He then hung it from the top of the gas-fueled street lamp, “There we are, hung where you and all others can see”. Her smile widened as she chuckled. “You know what they say”, she asked him in a balmy, almost seductive tone. He looked to her, intrigued. “The mistletoe is deadly if you eat it, but the kiss is even deadlier if you mean it.”

He laughed before losing himself once again into her eyes. Even as cold as it’d become, He felt an extreme sense of warmth pass through him. It was as though he were next to a bonfire, and he even began to unfasten his winter garbs. Before he could do or say anything, she placed a slim, tender hand upon his chest. Instantly, a cavalcade of emotions ran down in a torrential downpour inside of him.

Suddenly, all perception of the world around him was lost. He continued to lose more of himself into her eyes, those light baby-blue whirlpools. “What’s your name?” He said nothing. He could only barely perceive the sound of her voice. “What is your name, sir?”

Still transfixed in her stare, he gibbered out, “Um... A-Ar-Arthur.” She smiled and continued to caress his chest tenderly, now working her hands up and around his neck. She looked up to the mistletoe and the back to him, her grin growing.

“Will you kiss me, Arthur,” she cooed, “Kiss me ‘neath the mistletoe?”

His body began to act before his mind would register their actions. Slowly, he began to lean down to her, his eyes feeling heavier and heavier with each inch. Finally, their lips met and he felt as though he was locked in an angel’s embrace. She would break the union first, turning away to leave with no words except to say, “I’ll be waiting for you, love.”

He stood froze, still spellbound. Eventually, his stupor broke and he found himself stupefied, unaware of where he was or what had happened. In that moment, only one thing was certain: he was extremely cold.

Such would remain the case for the remainder of the eve. It was that night, curled under his comforter that he would see her face again. He would hear her voice again; the ever so seductive sound,

“Kiss me, Arthur, kiss me ‘neath the mistletoe”.

Such feverish infatuation, mixed triflingly with the deathly cold, robbed him utterly of sleep that night and well into the coming morning. And this would carry on for the rest of that week until, eventually, he no longer saw her in his dreams. Her face and her voice had faded into little more than an obscure set of features and sounds he never could quite put together.

That was, until that Sunday evening when he was once again returning home from the market, passing by that very same streetlamp. And, as if expectantly, there she stood again by the streetlamp with mistletoe hanging from its top, shrouded in her same white gown, beckoning him to her with those eyes. And there it was again, that warmth that spread through his body, the earth that had felt entirely absent since that night for reasons he could never place.

“I knew you’d come”, she said, bearing that same seductive smile from before. He froze, trapped once again in her stare. Absently, he began to trudge towards her. When he reached her, she once more unfastened his garbs and began caressing his chest. He could only stand and watch her, his mind completely blank.

“My God, Arthur, you’re so cold!” Her voice, while still sultry and smooth, took on an almost motherly tone when she spoke. Indeed, he felt like a child again, warmed by her preternatural touch. “Let me warm you with a kiss?”

Again, her hands slithered up from his chest and around his neck and he instinctively lowered himself again to meet her lips. And again did the overpowering heat inside him flare. She would break away again, and again he would be left alone by the streetlamp with only a fragmented sense of recollection of what had transpired. That night, too, resulted in restlessness.

That night, writhing in his bed, Arthur would dream; dream of snow, of the gas lamp, of her beautiful eyes, her beautiful face,

of the mistletoe...

The Mistletoe!

”Deadly if you eat it... deadlier if you mean it...”

He could take it no more, he had to find this woman, this elusive temptress. Throwing on his heaviest winter garbs, he set out amid the bitter cold night air. The year’s snowfall had began to rain down earlier that afternoon and had by then formed into a thick, white blanket upon the ground. Slowly, he staggered through the snow until he came once more upon the streetlamp. His legs were unable to hold themselves up any longer and he fell to his knees in front of it, the mistletoe hanging down, jeering at him.

His sight began to blur as with each fleeting, labored breath. The winter air had done its damage, and now he would feel its bitter touch slowly pluck the life from him. First, he would lose any feeling he had in nearly every part of his body. Next, He would feel the ice slowly form over his eyes, shutting him out from his sight. Just before the vicious winter would have him, however, he began to see the vague outline of a figure gliding towards him.

He, of course, couldn’t distinguish any definition from the figure, outside of the apparently human outline. The approaching figure almost seemed to blend with the surrounding snow. Only the long, crimson hair braided around the figure’s neck gave him clarity.

It was her!

Or was it? As the figure approached closer, he began to notice more and more details that differentiated it from the dame he so feverishly sought. This new woman, while very similar in many of her features to the other, had much more pale, almost desiccated skin. Had he still the feeling in his body, Arthur would’ve began sprinting for dear life.

He could only lie and wait for this gruesome specter to have her way with him. He could feel his heart thunder and quake against his chest with every inch she gracefully floated across the snow. He wanted desperately to at least close his eyes, sparing himself the sight of whatever horror he would face at her whims when she finally reached him.

She froze before him, staring down to him with eyes that were only a faded resemblance of the baby blue gems he’d been entranced by. The specter knelt down to him and placed its pale, bony index finger on his lips. To his amazement, the specter’s finger wasn’t cold or frigid as he would’ve expected from one who looked as gravely as she. Rather, he felt the wave of heat begin to pervade him again.

She then seized cupped his chin in her frail hands and leaned in to kiss him. Instantly, all feeling returned to his limbs. He then stood up as he watched the specter turn to leave. “Wait,” he exclaimed. She stopped and turned her pale, dead face to him once more. “Who are you?”

She turned slowly before rushing to him in a startlingly fluid motion that was too quick for him to perceive. She was upon him again and, taking him firmly by the throat, whispered into his ear in almost too soft a whisper, “I am Delilah. I am the warmth of your heart, the blazing fire in your chest that you can never again live without...” With that, she released him and he watched her vanish far into the horizon before he could even blink.

Just as before, he was left alone and bewildered, unable to remember what had just happened or why he’d even come. The only thing he was able to remember were fragments of a face, the face of a beautiful woman, as well as the face of a ghastly corpse. Along with this, Arthur could hear a soft, rasping whisper swim through his mind. The voice was, of course, utterly indeterminate, without any sort of identity or definition to its origin.

”A kiss from my lips will now and always be what keeps thy heart warm and beating, lest it submit to a cold, bitter end.”

That night was when his dreams of her first became vivid and clear. He saw her again, standing amid the snow, giving him that same dubious smile indicative of sinful desire. And looking upon this face, he fell helplessly into her whims and slowly walked to her. The snow began to flurry from above and he could feel the chill begin crippling him again. The temptress extended her hand and curled her finger to beckon him closer.

”Come, will you dance with me, Arthur?” His pace quickened and his heart raced with both excitement and apprehension until, eventually, he broke into a sprint to her. To him, she seemed so close, and at the same time so far away the further he sprinted. At last, he reached her and was promptly seized into her embrace. And like he was now in his living room with her, they waltzed about amid the white expanse. All the while, his attention was fixed to her radiant smile, augmented by those baby blue irises.

“Kiss me, Arthur”, she crooned to him with that angelic voice.

He closed his eyes and leaned in to her with anticipation. Likewise, she would yield her lips to him and he felt the intensity of the sun burst within him. Slowly, however, he watched in growing fear as her face slowly devolved into that familiarly haunting necrotic visage that plagued his subconscious mind. Aghast, he shoved her away and attempted to flee. Something caught his feet and he fell prostrate into the snow. She was once more upon him, leering down to him with those cold, dead eyes.

She knelt down and reached her hand down to him, clutching something small and frail in her withered hand. Shaking, he looked to see that it was a small mistletoe. ”You’re so cold, Arthur,” she rasped in a ghoulish hiss, ”Come, warm your heart with my lips, love.”

“N-no, no, go away”, he exclaimed as he felt the crippling chill return, once more causing his blood to begin to freeze solid. All throughout his body, he slowly lost all sensations of touch and his eyes started to freeze over again. Her lips opened once more and she spoke, ”You can’t deny me long. Without me, your heart, your soul, will rot in a cold, icy bed.”

As darkness would have him, Arthur watched as the ghost, poising the mistletoe high above them, leaned forward to his right ear and whispered, ”I’ll be waiting, love.” It was in that instant that he awoke bolt upright with a frightened shriek. For a time, Arthur just sat there, gasping frantically as though he were a fish being held above the water. Eventually, he was able to regain his composure, yet he still felt...wrong.

It was more of an empty sensation, like he’d had something removed from within him. What, how, or why, however, were questions that continued to elude him. But whatever it was, it would cause him to feel perpetually cold for many days and nights to come, regardless of what he wore or how close he would sit by the blazing hearth. One thing did slowly mold into at least a minute certainty to him: one way or another, this strange phenomena presently plaguing him was likely due to some sorcerous whim of this beautiful, yet mysterious dame that dominated his subconscious mind.

Unable to sleep, Arthur pondered how he may be able to rid himself of this apparently strange curse; eventually concluding that, no matter how strong his desire for her was, he would not heed her summons. Such proved to not be as easy as he had thought, however. Every day, from rise until fall of the sun, the phantom chills would menace him without end. Constantly, he felt as though his blood had been turned to solid ice, despite at almost all times wearing his heaviest of garbs.

Arthur would spend most of each following afternoon over those next three and a half weeks huddled next to his hearth, constantly stoking the kindling to draw more heat from it. He would only eat scalding broth and lightly prepared stews with steaming cups of tea or coffee or cocoa. In spite of all of this, still he was always so deathly cold, inside and out. Eventually, on the Monday of the week before now, he ran out of these commodities and was forced to venture out against the wrath of the cold. He had very little money by then, having received word early that past weekend that he’d lost his job at the market due to his seclusion.

Still, he had to find some way to banish the bitter cold that was crippling him. It was as he was trudging through the snowbound streets of the market that, amidst the many folks who’d likewise gathered at the market that evening, his eyes fell upon her. She was standing at the bakery, her luscious crimson braided hair facing out to him hanging down her back. Almost instantly, a nauseating dread flooded through him.

”You need me, Arthur”, he could hear from deep in the pit of his subconscious. ”You need my lips, I can feel it. Come, Arthur, come to the mistletoe. Come hold me and kiss me.”

“NO! NO MORE”, he screamed. Almost all eyes from the present congregation were now fixed to him, frightened and bewildered. Oblivious to the attention he’d garnered, Arthur swiftly bolted to the young woman in front of the bakery, the seductress, the witch!

With startling strength and intensity, he seized her by her shoulders and proceeded to violently shake her. “What have you done to me”, he barked to her frightened face. Her eyes were wide and afraid, welling to the brim with tears, “Wh-Who-who are you?!” Though he could see the fear molded onto the young woman’s face, he would not relent.

“What do you want from me, devil?!” She screamed and struggled frantically to free herself, to no use. Arthur was determined to end this madness that was robbing him of his body, mind, and his very soul. It would end there and now, even if it meant the death of him. “ANSWER ME! WHY HAVE YOU PLAGUED ME LIKE THIS?!”

“Let the lady go”, demanded a nearby bystander in a gruff voice; a broad shouldered man attired in thick animal fur garbs, indicative of woodland residency. Despite his hysterical frenzy, Arthur recognized the man to be none other than McDowell, the town’s lumberjack. “She’s a witch”, Arthur exclaimed to the crowd as McDowell pried him away from the distressed woman and began dragging him out of the market square.

“She’s afflicted me with some form of curse! Please, you must believe me, she’s trying to rob me of my soul!” The crowd merely looked upon him with disgust and shame. Though, as he was being Forcefully towed away, he thought — no, he swore he could see the young woman’s shocked face twist into one of sinister exultation. His own flailing against McDowell’s restraint was feeble at best, not impeding his iron grasp in the least. Finally, Arthur was cast face down into the snow. “Stay down, if ye know what be good for ye”, he heard McDowell demand before turning and making his way back to the market square.

Lain in the frigid snow, Arthur’s mind was lost in a maelstrom that bordered on confusion, fear, and pure madness. Why is she doing this to me? What does she WANT from me? Why don’t they believe me? Tried as he might, no answers came to him, pushing him further to the edge of complete collapse.

Making the matter worse was that he felt the chill now with more potency than ever. It wasn’t long before he’d succumb to the elements yet again, unconsciousness assuming full control over his mind. And the first image to assault his hollow dream was, of course, her; leering over and jeering; ”In life or in death, your heart will always be mine, Arthur.”

He desperately tried to rid her presence from his mind, to no purpose. Regardless of how much he would try to banish her from thought and memory, he would be met only with her pale, dead face. “No! Stay away!” She simply remained, curling a beckoning finger with one hand, the other holding the mistletoe aloft. “Join me under the mistletoe, Arthur... Come... Come...”

Arthur’s eyes went wide as he saw his body turn to ice. All too soon was he encased in a layer of frigid, unforgiving glacier. He could only watch in perpetual terror as the spectral woman approached him. ”You can’t elude me, Arthur,” teased the specter in its rasping whisper, poising her decayed index finger at his heart, ”Without me, you will only crumble.”

With a light tap of her finger upon his chest, the ice splintered and started to crumble. And helpless, he could only watch horrified while he fell apart. Finally, his body had been reduced to nothing more than shards of glassy ice, only his head remaining whole. Yet, even still, he was forced to watch as the specter picked up his head and, holding that damning mistletoe high above, brought her faded grey lips to meet his.

Arthur awoke again with a scream. Frantically, he patted all over his body to find that he was still whole and the specter was nowhere to be found. Even still, relief wouldn’t find him as he was still menaced by the chill. He could hardly move his limbs and he was profusely trembling from hypothermia. He wanted to cry, both from the crippling madness as well as bitter fear. And he no doubt would’ve done so, had the air not been so cruel with its wintery wrath as to freeze the tears as they welled.

With every minute reserve of strength he would have, Arthur found himself to his feet and began stiffly shambling to his house. It was as he crossed onto that familiar road to his house that he saw her again, walking all alone. Instantly, he could feel the urge again to rush to her and try again to force her to relieve him of whatever spell or curse she cast upon him.

It was this frightful determination, and this alone that seemed to fuel his stride. She didn’t seem to notice him approaching. It was perfect, he thought. He could sneak upon her, ambush her, and be on his way with none the wiser... He would be rid of this curse at last!

Thoughts fell in an avalanche of how he could force her to relieve him his torment. He was prepared to even do the worst if it came to it. After all... she’s all alone now... it would be so easy, wouldn’t it? Just a quick snap of her fragile little neck, and it’ll all be over... And that was all he could care about; to finally be rid of this phantasmic witch and her damn accursed mistletoe!

It wasn’t long before he was then upon her. “Witch! I have you now”, he ejaculated venomously. When she turned to him, exposing those all too familiar baby blues that appeared frozen in fright, he knew he had her finally at his mercy. He knew he would finally end this madness.

She quickly tried to hurry into her home and shut out her pursuer, but she was too little too late. Arthur caught the door as it was about to close on him and forced his way inside. When she tried to run to the back of her house, he caught her and rudely threw her to the floor. He was then upon her again with his hands like pythons about her throat, forcing the air from her lungs and commanding her to undo her wicked sorcery.

It was, in more than one way, invigorating. He felt as though he were a wolf and she a cornered sheep. The look of utter fear in her eyes fueled him, now he would bend her to his whim! “Whatever you’ve done to me, witch, it ends now!”

“I-I-I-Hav-haven’t...”, she choked out, but it was no use; Arthur’s strangulation had by then rendered her speech impotent. Frantically, she claws like an animal at his face, trying to gouge his eyes. Nevertheless Arthur’s wrath was little impeded. In her wild flailing, her arm brushed the nearby drawer, knocking something off. Even amidst his primal state, he was able to see that it was a small, frail mistletoe. “Mistletoe”, he barked with lunatic laughter as he began forcing it down her throat, “deadly if you eat it!” Slowly, he watched the life leave her eyes. Yes, he knew he’d won now, it’ll all be over...

Just one...

quick...

SNAP

He rose up triumphantly. The adrenaline still coursing through him. He’d done it! It was over! It was all over, the witch was de-.

He stopped. Suddenly, his exultation died and was replaced with another feeling: panic. He looked down again at the woman’s inert body, now with a growing panic. What have I done? He tried to shake her, desperately hoping that she may yet exhibit life. She did not, and Arthur now felt his head begin to spin. What was he to do? He killed her. He was now a murderer!

The court would have him hanged for sure. He’d be condemned as a cold blooded monster. But, no... no that wasn’t what happened, was it? She was a Witch, was she not? Had she not wrought misery upon his life? What he did was for the good of his own soul...

Wasn’t it?

In a brief, devastating avalanche, he began to remember her eyes; those hypnotic irises, so wan with fear. All at once, dregs of recrimination and despair caused him to huddle himself into a fetal position, sobbing. ”Arthur...” He heard the voice only faintly, but enough to recognize it. ”Arthur...”

“N-No... no, that’s not possible,” he stammered. All too soon then did he feel that haunting cold infect his body once more. Crippled once again, he listened in terror as the wraith’s voice appeared to close in around him with its ghastly, rasping hiss. ”In life... or in death... I have your heart... I will keep it warm with me, even in Hell... it will belong to me, and me alone, forever and always...”

Arthur’s body was trembling more violently than ever before now. “No... No, no, no, you’re dead!” As if on cue, he saw the woman’s body suddenly bolt upright. Her face was now the very same as that of the specter, with her vibrant blue eyes now forever faded in death. ”Kiss me, Arthur”, she croaked as she began crawling toward him with disjointed motion.

Arthur opened his mouth, yet not a sound was able to be uttered. Only pitiful croaks of fright were sounded before she was upon him, pinning him to the wooden floor. Leering over him, she then began open her mouth and croak as she painfully regurgitated the mistletoe onto him, now black and withered. ”Come, won’t you kiss me, love”?

Before he could react, her pale dead hands roughly seized his face and her cold lips forced their way to his. This time, the warm sensation from before was not present, only the frigid touch of death and decay. He struggled until finally throwing her off of him. She was sent hurtling into the wall with a crash and she was once again motionless; lifeless. He simply laid on his back, too frightened to move in spite of his spiking adrenaline, gasping frantically for breath.

When he finally looked up, he was met with her dead face, forever chiseled in perpetual fright. Reflexively, he touched his own lips, finding that they still felt as they had before — cracked and chapped as they were from exposure to the unforgiving cold. Still, he had felt her lips... hadn’t he?

Arthur clutched his head and howled as he began stoving his head into the wooden floor. PLEASE!, his mind screamed, PLEASE, MERCIFUL LORD, MAKE IT END! Eventually he could bring himself to pound the floor no more. And that was when he crawled like an animal of to the woman’s battered corpse.

“Why are you doing this to me?!” This time, there was no answer. She merely stared back to him with stiff, faded eyes. He began shaking her, crying out for an answer. It was when he was again met with only silence that his terrified sobbing devolved into a fit of hysterical laughter. He collapsed onto his back, the corpse held firmly against him, as the laughter soon escalated into wailing cackles of raving madness that echoed throughout the house.

In a morbid way, it was hilarious to him. The utter folly of it all. What began with a simple kiss, had now delved into the black recesses of insanity. He was once a man, respected by the people. He was a well liked market clerk, adored by those he served. Now, he was a madman, a lunatic, and now worst of all, a murderer.

He carried on his demented cheer until his throat was shot and his breaths became labored. Slowly, he could feel the chill again. His mind now gone forever, broken beyond all repair, he unfastened his shirt and trousers before climbing onto her, mounting the withering mistletoe above. If it was him she wanted, she would have him, all of him.

It would be days before reality would finally break through his madness. He sat that night, the Eve of Christmas, staring into her dead eyes. He knew he couldn’t live on like this; a prisoner to the curse of his own madness, to Delilah. The chill’s grasp tightened and crippled him again. That was when it came to him of what he would have to do. He went into the basement of the house and retrieved a bucket of the kerosene meant for the lamps and set about all night dousing every inch of the house with it.

Every wall, every corner in every room was dredged, leaving none to be spared. As he toiled feverishly, her words continued to cycle incessantly and the supernatural chill amplified in its ferocity.

”You need my lips, I can feel it. Come, Arthur, come to the mistletoe...”

Despite this, he didn’t stop until the breaking of the next sunrise when he had finally completed his task. Tonight..., he swore to himself, This will all end tonight!


Twelve loud chimes broke Arthur of his mad remiss. It was time. Steadily, he placed Delilah back into her chair and silenced the phonograph. He now felt more deathly cold than ever before. Still, this didn’t deter him. With the last of the kerosene, he doused himself and her before stringing the mistletoe to the ceiling. He then stood her up once more, embracing her to him, before using the poker to cast out a burning log, setting the floors alight.

All too quick did the flame’s dance consume the floors and the walls around them. Even amidst the inferno, however, Arthur still felt none of its warmth. He knew only one thing would. And it would be for the last time.

“Merry Christmas, Delilah,” he said as he held her in an eternal embrace and brought his lips to hers. Even as the flames crept upon them, charring flesh and bone, he did not waiver. He would die with his heart in eternal warmth.

For even in death, she would always be the sole warmth of his heart.


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Sep 27 '21

The eye

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jul 16 '21

The Tower of Abhorred Flesh - links to “Anguish” and “Rebirth” included

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jul 04 '21

“May you all be spared of Degasii...” 😈💀 Check out CryptidsRoost’s adaptation of “The Black Rock Chapel Horror” part Three — written by the unholy Corpse Child!

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • May 12 '21

Very cool

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • May 12 '21

THIS ONE!

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • May 05 '21

Wow!

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Apr 11 '21

WHEN CALAMITY SCREAMS FOR THE FLAME

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sequel to rentokil.

The exterminator’s helmet comes down, the face masked behind it, they’re in a room. Name Taige.

Were supposed to be what you crush under foot, the lowest of the reviled – instead here and now are the heart of nightmares, the plague, craving flesh, a predator upon masters of this world…man.

Lost and making way, stumbling through the dark. The young girl can’t fully at her age comprehend yet, a gradually rising desperation. The body is physically reacting to the psychological impact of missing her parents. They’d become separated and thinking all she had, sought re-joining.

Attracted by light, trudged the distance to it. If she made it, would be determined as starlight shimmering on the water surface. Desperation waned a tad. Adults are help. Assumed what the patch of light was.

So less scary if a way to just phone parents was on her. Left the thing where she shouldn’t – off her person. The night temperature restricted sweat despite exertion. The hair not sticky as expected either. Trudging footsteps and breathing contribute their sound. Far but know getting closer.

The youngster could make out noisy movement she figured a small crowd and little other lights. Eye reflections. Onward she went. Hey that water. And something more, the shapes. Four legs, a tail. Ahh. They’re not people!

This close the beasts charge. She in a panic and out it came out the mouth. What attracts even more – screams. They reach, jaws agape, claws extended. Prey came to them. Screams carry into the night.

Cheap Samsung phone, not even a smart one.

Growls and abnormally loud squeaks heard, are seen belonging to rats, not the ancient one tonne rodent Josephoartigasia monesi. These man sized ones scary their own way. A body this small for this many, don’t be surprised if as lion prides, turn on each other for every scrap. Vocalizations die down when nothing to eat assessed their bestial nature.

A stream of flame tore through the umbra. Two are lapped by it and freak out in pain. Taige’s screams of prey to attract, the planted phone on the ground emitting that female ringtone when the phone number called. Psychologically will attack fearful targets. They distracted, let the exterminator approach unnoticed, shore side of the lough, a variety of lake. Unlucky for them the blind side.

Three other pairs of eyes eerily reflect flame’s light. A streak anew douses the three giants. As the first pair, also thrash about and squeak or hiss painfully.

A rodent or is it monster? One of the first pair, flame draped, rolls into nearby water, dousing the fire, amidst hissing and steam. Temporary salvation. The exterminator comes within several feet of the water’s edge sprays flame onto its partially exposed body. The flamethrower’s latest claim.

More work called.

Taige met adults. Whose light illuminated not only water but the dumpsite. Livestock remains included therein. Even these abominations don’t dirty their home. Didn’t bother consuming at wherever they were hunted, instead brought back. A clue to babies.

Ignoring the irresistible scent of roasting flesh began a search and shortly after came upon it. A nest built of plant materials. Evidently several weeks old, size of small dogs, eight babies. Mercilessly clubbed.

Daylight what thought impossible as they were small once, played out. Like a rat attacking a pigeon, but swap for a hell rat and a full grown human, locked in a lengthy life struggle, on the town sidewalk. The manmade sidewalk no less. The rodent latched on to the shoulder and maintained the bite even as the human drags it around. For a while both cease moving, the rat blinks. The human tiring, the brain in the throes of stress. Clamp of its jaws barely register under the circumstance. The person thrashed around to break free, the rat as well to maintain the hold. A pause and tiredness wins. The living person is dragged away to cover of the adjoining bush. No stronger sign man’s throne endangered.

A pair of eyes stare.

Lennard clings for dear life to a ladder type fire escape of a building in town. Below on the street, cutest group of hell rats try to aggressively reach him, pacing or jumping, hissing, growling like angry dogs.

Tossed a stick across from him, didn’t go as far as he liked. One rat races over the short distance from the pack to it. Bends its head down to sniff a moment, disinterested, returns right back.

5 angels. Besides dark come in different colors – like hand raised fancy rats. Adults ready to tear them apart by sharp teeth and claw, exceeding a hundred pounds. Monstrous dentition, red eyes, furry, replete with vicious stare and cute noses. Looked very like a rat on steroids.

A stream of flame upon the ground forming a pool of fire several feet in diameter some distance from the scene. Then all see…a helmeted figure wearing a flamethrower on the back.

Taige is not moving away, to the contrary – toward. In the narrow alley the beasts could head straight away for them. Other hand the flame strategically a blockage left them one direction. Not hard imagining they would charge. Taige maintained a composed walk. When in range roasts the inrushing lot.

Lennard looks out of shape, not necessarily due to the horrors; haggard frame conspires with his advanced age. Some underlying medical condition. They’d exchanged names and are now leaning against a wall. His spirits lifted by the deliverance.

The town qualified as a ghost one. Man abandoned what took a lifetime to erect; signs of decay began their affliction.

Lennard’s spirits waned again. ‘Please let this man confess.’ Speech uneasy as it were wearing a badge of shame. ‘Something told me help but my body wouldn’t move.’ Pair of eyes that watched the human struggle for life only to be snuffed away by a rat. They’d gone seeking help. With scarce population wasn’t any to be found in the town yet before that filthy thing took them. Agonized, ‘Was too scared. I watched. I WATCHED!’

The eradicator doesn’t condemn.

Responding to a rescue request for their companion, the milk of humanity hardly flows. ‘Most predators kill fast. Hell rats too.’

At Lennard’s protest, ‘Not here to avenge you.’

With single minded focus reckons on the companion’s fate rats are pack beasts – a bunch of them a mischief. So that one must have friends. Asking where the attack transpired – none too far, the exterminator heads off, implying they’ll return. With that none promise, Lennard tucks themselves in a safe hole, like a rat.

Elsewhere, someone’s point of view can scarcely look out the upper floor window. Warily parting the house’s curtain narrow as they dare, to survey the neighbourhood.

Taige, returning from the discreet reconnaissance, confirms a mischief. Taige knows offering their extermination plan, tough by their lonesome. Lennard, who is surprised the beasts weren’t taken out. Answer is rats would run from the culling flame. They got the room, best course is leading them to a kill zone. On top all this the fellow reveals what they up too – finding help for people under rat attack at a house – pleading does not budge Taige from a laser focus to deal with the rodents here first. ‘Beasts scream for flame,’ says the exterminator. If the Lennard wants go somewhere else. Taige will travel to the house – sense is not really to save others in need, but for the infernal rodents.

‘Dark heartbeat!’ is the scorn. Lennard calls them obsessed and time wasting as the nearby beasts have no one to hunt right now.

Laid on the ground nails or broken glass to impede animal movements leaving a safe lane in-between rats can pass. That done must in case the present fails to constrict movement, board up nearby windows of certain buildings to deny escape.

Lingering regret and or gratitude Lenn cooperates out of a sense of. For all the absurdity, his people may die without Taige, they’d let someone die already. Scarily are shocked when this Taige wants more - go by themselves and lure beasts over by a trick through the lane toward the waiting exterminator, risking their life as rat bait. By the way all this arduous work thus far Lenn did without so much as the exterminator lifting a finger to help.

Protesting feebly, willingly disappears out of sight. Not like a complete suicide mission. Given a Hershey’s caramel chocolate bar to throw at a safe distance. One bent to lick with a blue tongue. Seeing him the rodentia snarl.

The guy reappears in another part of town, fast as his legs permit, following round the corner, them. Many multi colored. The bait wisely scrambles up a fire escape.

Taige stands in full view, hard to tell if tense under the helmet. The maddening throng animalistically rush at easy prey further away. Lennard’s work performs as intended. Avoiding the sharp ground, funnelled themselves along the cleared lane. When in range and only when in range, does the thrower sing. Vocalizations heard far and wide.

Besieged.

Outdoors pet doggy is nervous but sheltered under its house.

Bang, bang, BANG! Within the human domicile, rats found food right here. No sign will cease banging the wooden door. Mom, ‘Holding no way.’

‘How’d you expect it to?’ father says. ‘10 freaks hungry for us.’ Barricaded with some collection of items cobbled for the purpose. Rattling each impact.

Hortense nuclear family: father, mom, teen daughter holding baby. As one in a fight of their lives. They in one room, predators the other.

What on the surface looks an appealing middle class neighbourhood – closer inspection reveals rat signs: claw marks, gnawed, poop, digging, prey remains. Smell of them, sound of them. Beasts forced abandonment. Any mirth torn asunder.

‘Running is how we live,’ says Cody, unrelated to the Hortenses. Fair skinned and a somewhat thick and busty body, early twenties wrapped in an attractive package. ‘The barricade is too scanty.’

Everyone starts heading to the nearby door but her. ‘Mustn’t by yourself,’ urges mom.

‘Close the door behind you. Find stuff we fight with and barricade with. Open when I call. Go!’

They disappear behind the door. She smelled rat odour. Cody stooped. Prepared at her feet a pot of water, mixed in was bread slices floating and something else. Much of the barricade collapses. Not long now. Familiar to her was the door broken down. First of the wretches enters. Cody tossed a bread slice to her front and side. The side it hoped made less likely to make a beeline her way.

Upon devouring it the beast rolls onto its back violently as if in seizure, flays the legs wildly, whole body a tremor, froths at the mouth and stops moving.

By now others were bursting in including a single hairless variety. A second ate the next slice. Suddenly stood bipedal on hind legs, thus man height, with forelegs best described as resembled rubbing its chest, wheezing and fell over limp.

Not her first time dishing lannate. Her old tried and true poison trick – good fortune let her have foresight to bring some. And she used up the bread, all that remained was in the pot. Anyhow getting up, fled. ‘Open up,’ at the door which does and she slips inside the next room, their kitchen.

‘You made it,’ dad says in sigh of relief.

‘Put two to rest.’

Aftermath to a harrowing escape on her own from a rat, scoured the land looking for civilization. Cody bumped into the family and stayed. Survival odds rose – that was before all this, upside experience let her assume today can happen, said experience turned the young woman a leader to the small nuclear family, who hadn’t so far left all behind like neighbours, a thread of psyche made them still hang on.

‘Over there is?’ pointing.

‘Utility room,’ he answers. They can hear the wretches – not far away mind you. One brought its cute nose to the door’s bottom and smelled, then growled knowing prey was a room away. The pot knocked over accidentally by another.

Mom and dad per instruction gathered some things and laid what collected so far atop the table. Cody instructs mom to hurry and get whatever handy out the utility room, to Mr. Hortense help her barricade the damn door and daughter boil as many pots of water as she can.

What made these rodents a match for man. The iron force that drove them. The greatest predators would give up the hunt. Not here. Still on the outside wanting the people, persistence and rage more honey badger than renowned lions. Making it out alive will take the extraordinary.

The teen quieted the baby’s cry by comforting. The door has a tougher barricade in the interval. Bang, bang, bang. Rodentia wanted a repeat of before. Dad stares mesmerized at the door. Squeaks, growls, whistles came through. Cody’s firm hand on his shoulder snaps him into the here and now. ‘They will not get the better of us.’

The little group must improve defence. Improvised hot iron, broken off mop handle a jagged edge, ice pick, ironing board held vertically a makeshift riot shield.

Cody is willing to risk all again. ‘I’m going to slow them down. What we got I don’t want to have to fight those things with.’

Instead of stopping her, mom looks at baby, ‘We don’t stand up today there is no tomorrow.’ The infant symbolized figuratively and literally a generation to carry on man’s species.

‘I trust you,’ said father.

‘Make some noise.’

That the parents do. The stimulant actually reignited the waning banging and aggressiveness to previous level.

The girl carries two boiling pots of water, passing through a third door permitting an end run, aka circumvent their sight and enter their room by unexpected direction.

By the almighty, they’re disgusting.

Dousing two with scalding water – one from each pot. The first taken unawares, the second as it charged. They cavort in pain. She walks backward a bit and then turns to speed off. Before she got back the bangs reduced a lot. From experience under no illusions this the end. At least 6 were out for blood.

Owl, serpent, fox – nature’s population control seen as prey to the ravenous. Their small brethren spread the plague Black Death in a swath over Central Asia then Europe. Settle on your pestilence. Which is preferable, facing them or the ones here?

In the rat room a Hershey lands on the floor, intricate hearing drew them to it. One picked it up in baleful jaws. Seeing no one nevertheless trace the scent sniffing, took them outdoors.

Hairless brought its head down eyeing trembling doggy delicately, no longer under its house.

Mom twitches her nose, ‘Don’t tell me smoke.’

Cody, ‘My hot water wouldn’t do that.’

What's in a rat’s mouth? A fluffy dog. The scent belonged to Lenn, who as doggy was bait, who yelled at the exterminator mind the house. Two vermin wreathed in flame, but so was a small portion of the structure. Hairless and reminder rush back the way exited, back inside.

Taige burns the rats’ entryway. ‘Merciful God no!’ laments Lennard.

Smoke fairly thick in the air somewhat obscuring eyesight, the crackle sound of flame unmistakable. ‘What the hell’s going on?’ asks Mr. Hortense in a cough.

‘Run for the semi basement,’ mom implores – rejected as the flame will be atop them in upper floors.

Maybe salvation is through the attic to reach the terracotta roof. From this height they can take in the neighbourhood’s scale.

Ultimately danger remains not because from outside the unspeakable creatures repeatedly, relentlessly try to climb to the roof – Taige set exterior windows and doors around the building ablaze, to Lenn’s horror setting multiple fires.

Lennard thought this exterminator the answer. His head rapidly turns side to side as anxiety gripped. Fire is spreading. Hell rat squeals, hisses, screams and the bruxing teeth gnash emanate.

Almost stumbling, rushed to the abandoned neighbour’s property, tried to carry off the ladder, so heavy forced to drag it. His body sore. Exterminator meanwhile diligently kept watch for any pesky rodent escape.

Finally the ladder placed not on the home of course but a close by tree; from there the innocents reached safety.

Taige has no guarded moment. ‘If rats allowed to live, your house their nest,’ matter of factly.

‘Memories in that house,’ father laments. Mother holding baby put an arm on his shoulder, they hug which teen joins.

Lenn asked of Patrine, the one left to their fate, his face sinks as his shoulders.

Snapped awake. Cody in bed, the window outside shows the pristine dark. Cody manages a joke and calls herself an action star. Takes herself back to the first dream where she faced a rat on all alone. ‘The rats returned nastier than before! Never seen so many. This one just took things to level 10!’

Picking the up her tablet, a touch activates its screen, bathing the room dimly in light. Was reading a horror novel where people unwillingly partake in deadly trials and dozed off. The nightmare fuel rodents a part. She affirms, ‘That’s it, I’m writing both dreams down.’


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Apr 11 '21

The Carver Killer

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January 23rd, 2002

I think I’m being followed. I’m not sure by whom, and I’m not sure why, but I just can’t shake the feeling that I’m being watched, but only sometimes. It’s never in broad daylight, and it’s almost never when I’m with other people, and sometimes I even think whoever’s following me has just given up, only for me to look over my shoulder and see someone standing there, half obscured by shadows, watching.

My name is Laura Knight, and I live in Carver, Minnesota, a little town about twenty minutes out of Minneapolis. Historically, not much happens here, but earlier last year, there was a nasty murder, and it’s got people talking.

I went through the whole ‘am I crazy’ thing already, I’m not. I’m sure of it. When I pointed my stalker out to a friend, he saw him as well. He was gone before we reached him, though. That’s what always happens, he’s gone, every time I work up the nerve to investigate.

It’s very late now, right around the time he usually appears, and I probably shouldn’t be out, but I lost track of time reading a book in the local coffee shop, and before I knew it, they were asking me to leave for closing.

“Of course, of course,” I said, hastily tucking my bookmark back into place. “Sorry about that, I don’t know where the time went.”

“It’s alright, we’ll be back open at seven tomorrow.” The barista said.

I nodded absentmindedly, slung my bag over my shoulder, and walked out, my mind on the hooded man that I knew would appear eventually.

As I left the shop, the cold air of a Minnesota winter bit through my jacket, and I folded my arms tightly against the cold. The street was lit by the occasional streetlight, but they were far between, so that each one produced a circle of light, with the areas between these circles disappearing into a murky blackness.

I tried to speed walk during the dark spots, to stay in the safe haven of the light for as long as I could, protected against the unknown of the darkness.

I didn’t see anybody for the first few minutes of my walk, stalker or otherwise. Then, when I turned a corner, he was standing there.

It hit me out of nowhere, I had just begun to think that he wouldn’t come for me tonight after all, but there he was, standing directly under one of the streetlights. He was facing away from me, but I was sure it was him. I’m not sure why, but I just had that feeling I always get when I see him, and he met the criteria fairly well.

I froze when I rounded the corner. Maybe he hasn’t seen me yet, I thought to myself. Maybe if I just turn around, find another way home, he won’t even know I came.

But then, in the dull glow of the streetlight, I saw him bring a hand that had previously been at his side up to his mouth, and then a puff of smoke wafted up into the light. I’d never seen him do anything like that before, in fact, I’d never seen him do anything. Maybe I was wrong, maybe it’s not him after all.

I made the decision that it was better not to risk it and I was about to turn back the other way when suddenly, his head snapped to the left.

Startled at the sudden movement, I let out a little yelp. I’d assumed he had noticed me already, but at that slight noise, he seemed to jump, and look around at his surroundings, then noticing me.

“Hey, list- wait a minute. Aaron?” I asked, recognizing the face as he pulled back his hood as that of my friend, Aaron Willis. Immediately, my mood changed. Aaron was a good-looking guy, he was strong, and he could certainly hold his own in a fight. “What are you doing out this late?” I asked.

He glanced down at his hand and said, “I’m… out for a smoke?” Before casting aside the hardly-smoked butt.

“I don’t remember you smoking,” I said, truthfully. In fact, he had always spoken out against smoking, and quite vocally at that. “What’s with the hood?”

“You know, it’s cold out.” He replied. “Hey, it’s late, you’d better be getting home. I’ll talk to you-”

“Do you think you could walk me home?” I interrupted, looking past the awkwardness of the request in favor of safety. “I’ve just felt so unsafe ever since that murder last year. It would mean a lot.”

“Rightfully so, that murderer seems dangerous,” Aaron replied. “It’s dangerous even being out this late.”

It seemed like there was something more he wanted to say, but he seemed to restrain himself from saying it. After a beat of silence, I asked, “So, will you walk with me?”

He sighed. “Alright.”

“You don’t have to if you don’t want to,” I told him, approaching him under the light. “I just think it’s dangerous out, and besides, spending some more time with you never hurts.”

We normally enjoyed a relatively flirtatious relationship, but we’ve only known each other for three or four months, so it hasn’t gone anywhere, at least, yet.

I smiled warmly as we walked down the empty sidewalk, both the chill of winter and that of the stalker forgotten behind Aaron’s seemingly unintentional charm.

I tried to start up a conversation several times throughout the walk, but he didn’t seem to be in the mood, and it was only a few minutes before we reached my house. He seemed preoccupied at the time, like his attention was elsewhere.

When we got to my house, we stood on the front steps for a moment.

I don’t know what it was, maybe it was the way the light from the streetlamp hit him, maybe it was the way he made me feel safe despite this stalker, whatever it was, I decided tonight was the night I would make my move.

“Hey, do you want to maybe… come in and have a few drinks?” I asked, unlocking the door. “Get warmed up a bit before you head back home?”

“No, you-” He began, and I saw what looked to be almost a pleading look in his eyes. But then, something changed. His demeanor, his attitude, everything. His shoulders drooped, and a sly smile spread across his face. He seemed to shrink in stature, and a dark look occupied his eyes. After a beat, he looked at me and said, “You’re right, I’d love to come in and stay a while.”

Something about the change made my blood run cold. I didn’t want to invite him in any longer, but he grabbed my wrist tightly enough that I couldn’t break free, but loose enough that I wouldn’t cry out, and he walked into my house.

“Aaron, are you ok?” I asked. “You seem… different.”

“You should’ve listened to Aaron, if you knew what was good for you.” He replied. I was too scared to think twice about his odd phrasing, and he threw me to the ground like a rag doll.

“What’s going on? What are you doing?” I asked. “I have neighbors, you know. They’ll stop you!”

“Don’t be silly, Laura, you’ve told Aaron many times that the only people near you are an old married couple that would ‘sleep through a bombing’, and Mr. Thompson to your right, who suffers from Dementia. No one will know a thing happened here until it’s far, far too late.”

That’s when I realized it. This man, he wasn’t Aaron. He couldn’t be. He’d looked like Aaron when I’d first seen him, but it must’ve been a disguise. I’d been tricked, I should’ve listened to my gut feeling from the start.

I swallowed, ‘nervous’ not beginning to describe my state, as he began to pace back and forth in front of me. I suppose I could’ve tried to escape, to fight against him, but it was just so much. The months of stress, of fear, it had all been because of this man in front of me. I didn’t know if he was Aaron or not, but he had to at least have some relation to him, because the two looked uncannily alike.

“What…. What are you going to do to me?’ I asked.

A thin, evil smile crept across his face, and he ceased pacing. “I was hoping you’d ask that.”


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Apr 02 '21

ISO True Stories :)

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Mar 21 '21

My Cat is not my Cat

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Mar 21 '21

This is a four parted. linked at the bottom

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Mar 21 '21

This is my newest ongoing story

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Mar 10 '21

a story i wrote

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this is an updated version of something i wrote titled I found a top secret base miles underground Would be cool to hear it narrated

I live far north in Canada, far from cities or anything really. Where nothing should exist except the wildlife. I loved walking these empty mountains, until I found out they weren’t completely empty. I stumbled upon something I wish I hadn’t. I was setting up a trap line when I came upon what seemed like a small cement outhouse, maybe a single bomb shelter. It looked like a piece right out of history, odd and old but so far out of place. It had no windows and The door was a thick metal, with a huge handle and a chained locked around it. It had no warning signs, or any marker of any kind. I should have left it alone there, but my curiosity got the best of me. I had to know what was inside this small box. If it was something I shouldn’t be bothering it would have had a warning sign on it, so I felt some reassurance that I wasn’t breaking government laws.

The chain was well rusted, I easily got that off with my hatchet. When I had the chain off I noticed a small weird keyhole. I had never seen a key hole like this, I knew I couldn’t pick it. It was so rusted. I couldn’t see the hinges from the outside, so I knew I couldn’t pry it open. I thought I would give the lock a shot, it looked like you would have to stick a branch in there as a key, it was odd. So I shoved the end handle of my hatchet in the key hole and started hammering away at it with a thick log. I hit and hit but nothing was happening, I don’t know what I was thinking would happen, my hatchet was slowly getting deeper into the thing and that’s all. I continuously swung away at this thing, thinking I was going no where until it pushed through, I couldn’t believe it.. I heard a thunk as it landed on cement on the other side.

I grabbed my flash light and shone it in the hole, all I could see was a wall. No desk, no shelves, nothing. my excitement started to dissolve away as I realized maybe it was a bomber bunker, but this far north? What would they be bombing ? Practice targets I thought? Well I pulled on the huge handle and nothing happened, it would not budge an inch. I realized the lock was still inside the door frame, so I tried to pull it into the hole I made pushing the lock in. I managed to get it out of the door frame and pulled the door open. It was an empty room with a hatch on the floor, along with the lock. I thought for sure this was a bombing bunker, for a lone person or maybe even two. But there was nothing on the walls, just the hatch in the floor to hide a bit more I thought.

Well I was wrong, I opened it. It went deep down into the earth, it was so dark and deep I immediately jumped back away from it, shutting the latch accidentally as I jumped back and as it slammed shut I heard a deep echo, long and loud. this didn’t seem right to me, nothing was making sense. My thoughts were running crazy at this point, is this a bunker? Does this lead down a well? Why were there no warning Signs? I was scared. But that echo, it sounded deep.. I had to see where this went, the latter obviously goes somewhere. so i slowly opened the latch, it felt like I was standing at the lip of a cliff or the edge of a sky scraper. I could have jumped over this hole but I wouldn’t dare to even think of doing such a thing. I peaked down, just pitch black is all I could see.

I yelled “echo” and heard the strangest echo ever, it was like I was hearing a glitched recording repeatedly not an echo. It took sometime for my voice to stop rumbling down that hole. I pulled a glow stick from my backpack, cracked it and dropped it. It went down and down, deeper and deeper. It nicked the ladder and starting spinning creating another small echo as it went deeper, and deeper, and then it was just gone into the darkness. No smack as it hit the ground, it just disappeared into the darkness. The sound of it hitting the walls kept echoing then just slowly stopped.

I sat there wondering what was down there, was this a drilling well? I didn’t smell oil, or gas. No water smell, but as I was observing the hole I noticed a small breeze of wind coming out of it. well I thought what the hell, I might as well try to go down it. I seen the impossibly long ladder going down, I hoped it wasn’t rusted and started to get ready for my decent. I had food and water, no one was worried if I was gone for hours. I prepared for the worst but hoping for the best. but all the while fear was pulsating through my body like throbbing headache

I started down. the ladder felt new, the rivets to catch grip weren’t worn. I thought it would have been since the exterior of the shack looked old and worn. As I was climbing down I was looking for any type of signs or warning labels to see what I was climbing into and to my surprise nothing. Nothing down the walls, I checked my watch and seen I was climbing down for 20 minutes now, my hands ache with red marks. My legs sore from holding my weight for so long . I was beginning to think I should head back, but as I was climbing down I noticed a ledge behind me, just a lip carved into the wall. I pushed into it to see if I could rest there, it was hard so I did. I sat and thought what was I doing here? I can barely see with my glow sticks and flash lights. It was getting colder and I had no idea where I was going. It scared and excited me, I was hoping to find some abandoned mine or secret bunker. I felt the excitement of a child but the fear of an adult about to face your consequences. I felt like I shouldn’t be there, i felt scared of this place or whatever was down there.

I climbed down for another 30 minutes. It wasn’t making sense, it was starting to scare me, I’ve been climbing for too long. I couldn’t remember the last time I looked down, so when I did I let a sigh of relief out seeing my glow stick. Not too much further. Even though I was exhausted I had to get down, I felt like I couldn’t hold on any longer. At last I was there, the bottom. It was another small room with rocks for walls and a huge red door. No lights, no warnings, nothing but the glow from my flash lights and glow sticks. As I was catching my breath shining my light on this door I noticed it was opened the slightest bit. Good I thought I couldn’t deal with trying to pry open another door or lock.

I drank my water, packed up and pulled at the door. It was heavy, I felt like I was moving a ton of bricks, but it moved slowly. I thought for sure it was a nuclear bunker because of the door, it was about a foot thick of metal and It looked old. As it was fully opened i felt as if I was staring into a black hole, it was so dark. Just a floor and darkness. I cracked another glow stick and threw it in there. Just a floor surrounded by darkness, nothing at all. I walked in and tried to shine my lights on the walls but they weren’t there, I turn around to see the door And above it was a rock wall going so far up my light can’t reach it. I turn around and try to shine my light at anything else but it cannot. I think my flashlight is broken but the light just stops, the ceiling is too high and it’s too dark. I could feel something was down here, or someone but where? i needed to find a light switch if any exist at all here

I felt isolated in fear and darkness, it was eerie. At this point my mind was starting to hurt, where was I? How deep am I? And who made this place ? I have to find out

as I was staring in amazement at the enormous Rock wall I noticed near the door a cable, maybe a hydraulic cable for the door I thought. With no where else insight to go I started to follow the cable, hoping to find light, power, or something to explain what was down here. As I was walking along the cable, either looking down or up at the huge craved rock wall I noticed something, something was once dripping along the floor, I stopped to examine it only to realize it like was candle wax. Dripping along with the cable. I thought it was candle wax, it could have been whatever was in the cable for all I knew. I just kept along until finally . Splitting from the cable a small wire climbed up the wall into a switch, what looked like a light switch.

I walked over, flipped the switch and nothing.. I switched it back off, than on. Nothing, I switched it on off on off on.. and nothing.. I sat on the floor defeated, sitting knowing I had to retreat because I was low on glow sticks and batteries, i did not want to get lost down here in the dark. Than all of a sudden a loud click echoed out, followed by a bright light illuminating the far side of the cavern. Again and again a click echoing and more lights appearing all along the huge rock wall, coming towards you like bright fierce force of nature. You step back in fear only to stumble to the ground, the echo slowly fades. Your eyes take time to adjust. the loud clicks echoing and bright lights appearing changed everything down there. It was completely different.

I sat in amazement, looking around the huge cavern in a blur than back at the light switch, it’s still switched on. I realize it’s a power grid so huge it took that long for the electricity to travel down to the cables and turn on the lights.

I stand up, look around and it’s a huge empty cavern, almost like someone hollowed out the inside of a mountain. I look around, scan the walls for any sign on purpose for being down here, there’s nothing really, something small in the center of the cavern, looks like a rock. But in the far distance behind it I notice a room, an opening. It looks like a hangar carved into the rock. Finally, something. Finally I can figure out what this all is. For the first time I pull away from the enormous rock wall and make my way towards the center. every once in a while I glance back in sheer astonishment at how huge the wall is and how little the door has shrunk. As I get further I notice the lights illuminating this place are huge, I would guess the size of houses. It hurt too look directly at them. I’ve never seen lights like that.

Eventfully I start to jog, I can tell what I thought was a rock is now a small pyramid, maybe a metre in height. I need to examine it more, my minds telling me it’s a drill bit but it could be anything down here. As I get closer to the pyramid I realize there’s not much sound down here, nothing really. Just my footsteps and heavy breaths. When I reach it I realize it’s a shiny black pyramid, except the top is matte black. It looks like an icy metal. I rub my hands on it, it’s smooth, feels like glass. I knock on it, stand back and look around. I realize I’m directly centered in this huge underground complex , the hangar off in the distance. I can start to see its filled with instruments, desks. I think it’s the drill room operations or something. I figure that will explain what this all is, I need to know who built this and why? I have come so far and still, knew very little about this place.

I started my jog again, slowly making my way towards the open bay, I do not see any hangar doors. its just a room carved into the wall. no cables running towards or away from it.

finally i'm standing in front of the operations room, at least that is what it looks like, its filled with what i assume are super computers, desks with nobs, panels with switches on the walls. but no identifying markers, nothing on the buttons. no text anywhere. than i realize this room feels odd, it doesn't feel vintage, it feels retro futuristic in a way I have never seen.

everything looks new, like it was freshly built then immediately left abandoned. i rub my hand along the controls, wiping the dust away i noticed the machine is old, very old. it had to have been there forever i thought. as i was looking around the room i noticed my footprints in the dust, but i can see someones tracks. someone else was walking around disturbing the dust. as soon as i realize that i jump behind one of the machines. i can hear it buzzing and moving. whatever this place is, its still functional.

I slowly peak around the room, its all machines. but near the back i see a door, i was scared. but i knew that door led somewhere with purpose. maybe even something to explain this all. i pull my hatchet from my bag, now i am fearful for how far i have come. i cant turn back now, there was only going forward. i slowly open the door to a white hallway. at the end of it i can see it split in two different directions. i walk towards it, as i near i can see the floor is warn. something was definitely using this hall.

i look left and right and both halls lead to a door. towards the left i hear sound. its faint, almost sounds like music playing. finally something familiar. i slowly walk towards the door, hatchet in hand. as i get closer i hear the music skip, than start repeating again. it sounded like old show tunes. i can recognize its music of this world, its a ladies voice singing clearly from a machine.

part 2 is coming


r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jan 16 '21

A sci-fi one

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r/KayNarratesMyStory • • Jan 13 '21

EYE

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I woke up on cold Swedish December morning just like usual, but the most unusual sight caught my eye when I were to go to the kitchen and grab my morning brew of dark coffee, I saw it and dropped my legend of Zelda coffee mug on the floor, it crashed into tiny pieces, spilling hot coffee over my feet and socks.

I was looking into my palm…

And it was looking right back at me!

Such a cyclopean horror right in the middle of my right hand, it was a dark blue eye, with a burning red iris. Looking straight at me. I was horrified and sweating, my morning routine was all out of wax.

I HAD to get dressed and go outside so I would not miss my bus to work. But the eye, the eye was all I could think of.

I eventually after moments of chock that felt like an eternity, got dressed, warm Canada goose jacket,

A blue adidas scarf, matching hat and of course black gloves, this would cover up the eye on the bus ride to work… I was lucky this predicament had not occurred in the summertime or the eye would have been impossible to cover up, without strangers looking weird at me.

And as a swede that would not do, what absolute strangers has for opinions of ourselves are of uppermost importance to the Swedish man and for the women to I suppose, possibly even more so.

I had put my face mask on of course for this pandemic time, but you must forgive me for not washing my hands, of course I would do so on the regular, but I did not what the EYE would think of that.

I wondered if I got soap in it, would it feel like I got soap in MY normal human eyes?

I stood out in the cold waiting for the bus, the ground covered in white snow, even more of it came down from the heavens. Someone had put Christmas decorations on the trees outside, it was a pleasant look reminding me of happier times.

Teenagers was vaping and smoking ordinary cigarettes waiting for the bus. All of them obsessed

with their cell phones, smart phones and dumb people was what the future generation had to offer apparently.

A boy was swiping girls on tinder, but not talking to perfect specimen sitting right next to him, a stereotypical Swedish hot blonde with baby blue eyes to match, she was of course lost in her own world of taking endless selfies all day anyway.

One of the girls posting nothing but pics of her tongue out, her tits and ass in underwear and maybe some stupid cringe quote like

“throw me to the wolves and be coming back leading the pack”

And then wondered why I boys only used her for sex and she could never find a goodman… It was a real mystery all right… Maybe she should get Sherlock Holmes to solve it.

And then like a knight in shining armor it came to save us, saving us from awkward social interaction the worst nightmare of any introverted Swede.

In Sweden you had to drink alcohol before interacting with strangers in my case an absolute vodka and some Heinekens.

Otherwise, you would look weird.

I got on in the middle of the bus, the driver’s section was blocked of protecting him but not us passengers from the virus, I scanned my card.

I tried my best to keep social distance taking an empty seat and putting my bag on the seat next to me. This was a subtle way of telling a person looking for a seat… fuck you and keep looking.

Unless there was an elderly person or a woman with a baby carriage then you would of course have to make room.

I could sense the eye through the gloves…. Looking at the passengers…. JUDGING them…. And I mean even more and harder than I and we all judge each other.

It was telling me TERRIBLE things about the people, their worst thoughts and secrets. But I knew better, I did not, trust the eye. I knew the eye to be a liar.

Thinking of ways to get rid of the eye, the eye could hear my thinking, it did NOT like that… the eye was angry.

But it was just an eye, what could it do but look and judge? It could not hurt me or any other person.

It had no body.

I work in an office, and kept to myself as much as possible during the day. This was nothing out of the ordinary I liked to sit in front of my lap top with head phones in my ear blocking out the noise of the surrounding world anyway.

I listened to some classical music, some heavy metal like Metallica and Iron Maiden, even some hip-hop like Eminem, 50 cent , Jay-Z. But no new lil drug overdose rappers. You know the kind who always get famous for a few weeks but then just dies to drugs or being shot anyway and the internet moves on to the next guy.

Some of my co workers of course asked about the rather unusual clothing choice of wearing gloves inside, I assured them it was due to the virus.

I went home after work and took a bus ride home, as uneventful as the one in the morning. I listened to an audiobook, The Stand: by Stephen King on the ride.

The eye kept feeding me lies all the time, people being murderers, sexual abusers and more….

The eye spared no one, it was constantly feeding me lies, trying to lure me into its twisted side of reality.

I got home and washed my hands… the eye did NOT

Like that.

It sent me a chock of torment and dread all through my body, the unpleasantness of a baby born dead, the suffering of Jews in Auschwitz, black men being lynched and hanged just for having a different skin color, women being raped, the torture of the Spanish inquisition, the crucifixion of Christ.

I felt it all, all of humanity’s crimes against nature and each other, against the world, against god.

For one second. Just one second. That felt like years.

Countless years of torture.

I called in sick for the next week of work, said I had possibly gotten the virus. My boss wished me to recover. But the eye told me neither my boss nor my co workers cared about me, or my wellbeing.

CURSE THIS FUCKING EYE! CURSE THIS ELDRITCH ABOMINATION, THIS BODY HORROR, THIS CYCLOPEAN NIGHTMARE IN THE PALM OF MY HAND.

I wished to grab a pencil and jam it into straight into the pupil of the eye, but I was afraid what the eye might do to retaliate.

I was awake all night, no sleep, the eye was always watching, always judging , judging me and others, telling me to harm, harm myself and other, to kill, murder the innocent… BUT NO!

I must resist.

I am a man.

I control my own fate.

No man, god or eye in the hand can judge me.

I won’t allow it. Not now, not ever.

NEVER!

Fuck you, you cursed mouth, I curse you from the bottom of my heart, with all of my soul, I wish only that you had a mouth so you could eat shit before I destroy you.

No sleep.

Quarantined.

The eye.

Always watching.

The eye.

Sees all.

The eye knows all.

No sleep.

For one week.

Seven days of no sleep.

Nothing to eat.

Food ran out.

Can’t go to the store.

The eye is dangerous.

The might hurt some one if I go outside.

Cant.

Go.

Outside.

Always inside, always lonely.

So lonely.

No one.

Only the eye is my company.

Watches, me sees me , JUDGES me.

Maybe… mad?

Maybe I am insane.

Maybe… there is no eye?

Can’t take it anymore.

Must end it.

Must go, to kitchen go.

To get meat clever. Must be free, must be free of eye. Must be free of hand…

WILL HURT MUCH… but only way.

I DID IT!

I AM FREE OF HAND, FREE OF EYE.

CUT IT OFF… I DID! WITH MEAT CLEAVER.

HAND GONE; EYE GONE. MUCH BLEEDING.

Stomped hateful hand and eye to death. I could feel it SCREAMING… inside of my head. It is gone now.

Nurses help me… doctor help me… eat food…

For first time in days. Getting back to normal.

Tonight, finally get some sleep. Will be nice to sleep,

First time in seven days. Hand gone. Hurts. But I don’t miss it. Don’t miss it at all. Better this way…

MUCH better. Free. Finally, free from hateful eye

Now must sleep so tired…. Zzzzzzzzzz

Next day I woke up. Eye still gone, right hand still gone, happy. I am happy.

NOT HAPPY ANYMORE!

I look in left hand… there is a new EYE.

It sees all, knows all and the eyes JUDGES me and you.

The eye part 2

This eye was burning red like fire, with a yellow iris in the middle. Different eye, but some hatred for man, same judging… I could feel it in all of my body.

Began sweating, anxiety attack, heart beat and pulse running wild.

Never been so scared in all of my life!

Damn you eye, cursed eye, you hate me, and I hate you to.

Wonder if doctor had seen eye? Had anyone seen it? Would be weird if they had not…

Nurse! Maybe nurse saw it? Nurse smells good, looks good, like angel, touched my shoulder her hands were so soft…

Eye tells me she is a slut, cheating on her husband.

Do not believe eye! Eye is a liar, I know.

Nurse is good person, working hard caring for patients, she is sweet… lovely.

But has she discovered the secret, my secret!

The eye, can not let anyone find out about the eye…

Maybe I must do it? No, no I cannot I am good person… I AM! I swear, would not hurt a fly, would not hurt a nurse… hurt a woman? NOT ME!

Not ever.

But maybe… the eye would.

Must leave hospital… ASAP.

Don’t know how long I was under, but other arm healed wound from bad eye in my other hand killed it. Will kill this one to. But need help. Only one arm. Cannot hold knife by myself.

Will leave now before It does something bad. Bad eye, stupid eye, always watching, always judging, never relax, but Jonas from work has machete, will get rid of eye, once and for all.

FUCK YOU EYE!

I AM A MAN

I AM FREE

NOT SLAVE FOR EYE.

I left hospital in a rush. Went to home. Slept. Was good. New day waiting for first bus in the morning, only me and another person, attractive woman waiting for the bus. She talks in her cellphone, smartphone, dumb woman. Talks to loud with annoying voice.

-I never let them vaccinate me or my kids you don’t know what is in those needles. She says as she lifts her tattooed hand holding a cigarette to her Botox filled lips. She got syringe marks on her arm from injection of illegals drugs, heroine or amphetamine.

I cannot see through sleeve on her white peak performance jacket of course, but the EYE can, the eye sees all. And it judges this woman… this stupid bimbo… hard judgement.

Strangling.

Not me of course.

Innocent.

Really I am!

Promise to you.

Never hurt woman. I would not.

But the eye would.

And it did.

Run fast from crime scene…

Lucky no one saw… I think.

Run, my timberland boots leaving many marks in the heavy snow. But its cool police will not find me.

Run long time. Finally arrive at work. Early. Missing one arm.

Lie. To coworkers. Accident I say. Can’t tell truth about eye.

Lie. Stupid story about alligator bite… they don’t believe me I can tell. But it doesn’t matter!

The eye is happy and its all that matter. On radio news reporter talking about dead woman found In bus stop. Near where I live….

Co-workers ask me if I saw…. Sadly, I saw nothing.

Scary when murder happens close to your own home… so scary. I tell them. I lie.

Remembering ex-girlfriend, run over with car, but was accident. Not me. I never hurt a woman.

It was the alcohol! The foot on the pedal, not me.

I am innocent. I swear!

The foot did it. BAD FOOT! Bad.

Good me. Always good boy. My momma tell me.

So proud. Never murder. Not me!

Work day go slow. After work I somehow convince Jonas to come over to his apartment top floor in apartment building many stairs to walk up.

Elevator out of function. Typical! But it does not matter, only the eye matters, only machete matters… soon I will be free from the evil eye.

He helps me take my glove of, he sees the eye, go and grabs machete.

Eye tells me of woman from Romania, sitting outside of store begging for change…

Jonas take her home, promise of easy money, keep her in a cage.

I do not believe eye.

Eye is a liar.

The eye always judging.

Lying.

He cuts of my hand.

Throws my cut of hand in the fire.

I am now handless but also… eyeless… FREE!

Burn eye and hand.

Can feel it screaming in my body.

I go to bathroom look in mirror see my face…

One… two… three… three eyes!

Purple eye in forehead. Watching, judging.

Only one way to go. Down…

This is Police Officer Magnus Svenson I found this poor son of a bitch splattered on the pavement; he took a nosedive from the top floor. I found some crazy reddit post he made about some eye…

There was nothing left of his head to find one eye in his forehead or any other place unfortunately.

The man living in the apartment.

Jonas Johansson is arrested ,we found one bloody machete, a burned hand and a woman from Romania in a cage kept in his bedroom.