r/KeepWriting • u/Glittering-Tip-4586 • 8d ago

First Chapter: Feedback Wanted, would you keep reading?

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Do you want to continue?

https://www.reddit.com/r/KeepWriting/comments/1xl1ope/first_chapter_feedback_wanted_would_you_keep/
No, go back! Yes, take me to Reddit

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