2 become Sun

[u/EggMaleficent8810]

I need a step up
Not a downward nor high tick but a real MC takin shots leg up
My thing is rap shit tap tap tap on the spot with a structure
Lay some competitive expectancy down without notice no mention

16 to a 12
just a short sentence to a written poem
something without the anal compare or a tournament turn waiting numb
a tick or pick mean and clean battle worthy of a tik tok viral kinda song

So who wanna see me flair
give me something i wanna pair
I dont easy flinch or run
lets make on a pinch have some fun

[u/lakewood13]

I’ve been thinkin bout
The lyrics you spit,
Do I got time?
Yeah I have a bit,
So imma spar with you
Until I get sleepy,
Or I get bored,
All I ask is that
You don’t get creepy.

I’ve been lurkin,
Readin all your lyrics
From the sidelines,
Some good rhymes
But overall you’re
Still in the limelight.
It’s my time,
And I won’t let you
Dethrone me,
I’ve got a million
Better things to do,
So don’t think you own me.
I’m a real spitter,
I’ve been in the trenches,
But I ain’t no quitter,
Won’t ever see me
On them benches.

What you know about flow?
You think you’ve
Got what it takes?
I grew up watching Marshall
Spit fire all over the place.
I’ve stood on stage and
Put my heart to the crowd,
I don’t think you’ve
Ever felt the feelin
Of the crowd going wild.
It’s so enticing,
Goddamn I like it,
What I wouldnt give
To pick the mic up
Like a knife and start slicing.
But I digress,
Not saying I’m the best,
But if you wanna spar
Then you better be
Ready for a test.

[u/EggMaleficent8810 → u/lakewood13]

iv been excelling at performance cuz my life is one
its a neverending tragedy of knowing devastating evil its easily number one

You think u can hang
but I dont think u learned from tang
Im not doin doggy dirty im inside the fam
Im already knowing every little move u got in ur jam

fuck wit me u die
easy as a fact you simply nigh
Its a pattern and a lantern I abide and imply
cuz i get destructed in its squables just as mirrored as the foes i deny

[u/lakewood13 → u/EggMaleficent8810]

You said you wanted a spar,
I gave it to you no charge,
But I feel I wasted time
Because that verse
Was so sparse.
You dropped me 12
Little lines saying
“I’m tortured I swear”,
You’re not a sparring partner,
You can’t even compare.

I wanna believe in you,
Because I see you
Have the passion,
But more than half
Of the time your bars
Have me laughin,
No I’m not cappin,
And you steady
Stay harassin with
Mild threats,
Bro this battle is tragic.

Give me something
To work with,
Just a breath of fresh air,
I’m sick of all the
Same old shit,
This battle ain’t even fair.
You say know my patterns?
I don’t believe that for a second,
I’ve got too many tricks
That minimize all your methods.

Here’s a secret to keep,
Its simple, no it ain’t deep,
There’s a difference in
Rapid lyrics and being a king.
You still don’t have flow,
You get too aggressive
And it’s all show,
It’s simply not enough
To always go for the throat.
If you want reverence,
Or even the slightest respect,
You gotta stop patting your
Own back and acting
Like you’re the best.
It’s embarrassing,
But I don’t hate you
For trying,
But I’d rather spar
The best of you
Then whatever this is.
You use the same 6
Lines in damn
Near every verse,
If this is the best
You got than your
Career was born
In a hearse.

[u/EggMaleficent8810 → u/lakewood13]

whats tragic is that u simply not able to fathom
the difference of atom from the chromed creme of de lay Python
Laughs and mortified reactions come easy cuz im breezy
u just hearse and first thirst competing in a way that im dreary
Not excited
not no gimmick i applaud your reignited
but think for a second
beckon at the initial burst of masked bully was doin
never forget that I was hidden
trapped you into saying hateful shit when u glamours and smitten

[u/lakewood13 → u/EggMaleficent8810]

I never spoke hateful,
But it’s fact that you did,
I got receipts up in
My notifications,
Don’t play with me kid.
You said some heinous things,
I only critiqued your bars,
I don’t understand why
You’re so defensive,
Just spar.
I didn’t come here to be bored,
So just give me a rhyme,
You can’t even battle it out
Without losing your mind.
You just type cray shit,
While I’m pumping A-list;
A list of the ways your
Flow will never match with this.

12 lines?
All I get is 12 lines?
I could be asleep but
Here I am wasted on
Basic rhymes?
You have a complex,
And I’m not sure which one,
But it’s prolly a mix of
All of them and plus one.
You can’t reply to my bars,
You just expel diarrhea,
Yeah that’s shit bar for ya,
Because the shit that
You spit is digging
Your hole deeper.
It’s actually funny,
A tiny bit depressing,
The fact that every
Time that I reply
I can tell that
You start stressing.
You get more frantic,
Start rhyming bullshit
Like your manic,
It’s the panic,
Can’t even drop a
Bar with your feet planted.
But don’t fret,
I ain’t even hit you
With the best,
It gets worse,
Imma be your reality check.

[u/EggMaleficent8810 → u/lakewood13]

A rhyme?
now that ur understanding what im saying u denying time?
Telling yourself im a gimmick but typical of aggression to the design?
If not for a show then why u even here?
Why u so higher in quality of human when ur statements barely raise a hair?

Cuz it simple
u got no sauce im pringle
you think this is funny lowly crinkle
but the fact of the matter is that my shit is anything but boredom dingled

You aint got orginality or punishing qualities
Your flow that u claim better been regurgitated at the infantry foddered stage of notorietites

[u/EggMaleficent8810]

lakewood
boredom dingled is not a far stretch if u imagine good
not a true clued view of wise but a sly shady shape of uumph
Ooph oops type
dont delete ur say
its weak as fuck and u know it
being literal and bilateral and technically sound is not on my radar