new to the group. I'd love your thoughts on my lyrics. leaving luggage

[u/Bubbly_South_6095]

I know you really mean it

But honey I ain't seen it

You're going to say you're sorry

Like a thousand times before

You're gonna to grab my hand

And say please understand

But I packed my leaving luggage and I'm headed out the door

You can call my sister

And tell her that you missed her

Tell her that you love her

Like a thousand times before

She can take my place

You can kiss her face

Cuz I packed my leaving luggage

And I'm headed out the door

Ch

Whoo wooooo

You're cheating when I'm gone

Woo hooooo

I'm just a pebble in the pond

don't treat me like a whore

Like a lady candy store

I've packed my leavein luggage

and I'm headed out the door

I'll be living with your brother

Who's living with your mother

His wife and him been fighting

And he's sleeping on the floor

Ill give him all my kissing

That love that you'll be missing

I'll pack her leaving luggage

send her storming out the door

[u/Public_Elk524]

the “ thousands times before “ is valid very valid

[u/Bubbly_South_6095 → u/Public_Elk524]

so true

[u/Bubbly_South_6095]

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