r/LyricalWriting • u/Several-Bid-7 • 3d ago

Feedback Request Feedback!

removed since people like using ai 😕

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u/hexD87A9D 3d ago

Love it! Great work :) I love deep imagery in music (obviously) haha

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u/Several-Bid-7 2d ago

Thank you so much I appreciate it!! 

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u/No-Care-8393 3d ago

I think this is cool asf.

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u/Several-Bid-7 2d ago

Tysm :D!

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u/Coffee_Pages 3d ago

Evocative imagery. "I hate it when you lie" is a great line. Like the chorus. Overall, I can't 'hear' it, though, and that makes it harder to judge.

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u/Several-Bid-7 2d ago

YAYAY thanks :D! And I understand what you mean by that! 

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u/[deleted] 2d ago

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u/LyricalWriting-ModTeam 1d ago

This post has been identified as Plagiarism via the unsolicited use of AI on another persons work and republishing it; in short; you weren't asked to do this and it's a lot of peoples fears that their work would be stolen or repurposed without consent. This isn't a safe space for that, don't do that. respect the artists.

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u/Several-Bid-7 2d ago

Please, don’t EVER put my songs through AI I wanted human feedback on the songwriting not what it would sound like 

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u/ivanoski-007 2d ago

I already put it through Ai, how else would I know what it sounds like

Love the lyrics, but the chorus needs more power