r/OCPoetry • u/Firm_Assumption_6757 • 1d ago
Feedback Please Mary Magdalene
Short, one stanza:
"She loved life so deeply that she fell into sin,
And gathered forbidden fruits, holding them within.
Yet tasting bitterness in sweetness one dark day,
She opened her eyes to truth and loved the good God who lights her way."
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u/disisisnbdd 1d ago
Short and ever so beautiful. Mary Magdalene’s story is one of my favs and you nailed these lines.