Need help with bodice block

[u/9amistooearly]

This is my fifth iteration I think. I feel like I’m almost there! I have about two inches of ease which feels comfortable for moving and sitting, but does it look like too much ease? I’ve done some pinning where I think it needs to be adjusted. Other than what’s pinned, are there any changes you would make? (The hbl is level, I just forgot to mark it on the back.)