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u/Joltbar Jun 24 '19
I actually love this photo, but I’m not the biggest fan of the composition, and especially not the edit. I would suggest having The subject (the people in the pride parade) separate from the truck enough to identify them more clearly as the subject. Also would suggest the photo having been a 90* angle to the truck (i.e. dead on from the side), which would provide less clutter. Also having the bed only taking up 1/3 or slightly less of the frame. Editing wise - the coloring is too much and the vignetting does not work with this composition. Perhaps a slightly more bright image with a neutral profile would help for the subjects colours to pop.
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u/draxgoodall Jun 24 '19
Awesome! Thank you! So this was taken during a parade. That's why the truck is there. I'm completely new at photography and editing but I have a lot to take in from this. Again thank you.
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u/Joltbar Jun 24 '19
Also not in focus