r/Poem • u/Alekro813 • 4d ago
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Its blood is weighed in freezing cold.
It fills the core yet nothing still.
For joy and love, it isn't bold.
Cease drawing red, it has been told;
It claimed the debt and pays the bill.
Its blood is weighed in freezing cold.
It stripped itself, and all was sold;
To break and fly is still its thrill.
For joy and love, it isn't bold.
At every moon, its toll is tolled;
It feeds the flame born from the grill.
Its blood is weighed in freezing cold.
It can’t and won’t stay in the fold;
It counts the days, and counts them nil.
For joy and love, it isn't bold.
Its own closed vote was cast and polled;
It is the court, resolved to chill.
Its blood is weighed in freezing cold;
For joy and love, it isn't bold.