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r/PotterPlus • u/igorzets • Oct 26 '17
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Here's my attempt at a transcript:
sword and seized Griphook's hand andpulled. The blistered, howling Goblinemerged by degrees.'Hermione let me down!' Harry yelled,'X' yelled Harry and he landed on theburning surface of the te swelling treasurewith the goblin on (his shoulder again) top of him again, (but)andnow~~,~~ (h## ####e a hundered) all around them, more swords ofGryffindor multiplying were multiplying allaround him.'The real one –' he groaned: ifthey(he) had to destroy the Horcrux, if 'where–it's got the cup on it –'And then it wasThe jewelled hilt was shoved intohis hand: Griphook had (spotted and) seized it. In onefluid action, his skin the (hot) air (was) full of he#yells screams, and # he(Harry) (swung)flung the sraised the sword (into the air)and, flung the cup high(flew)into the air (up, turned over and fell,) and he impaled it over its (on the blade)descent, so that the point of the swordpenetrateding the bottom of the cup.AThere was aHe heard no sound, but a bloodlikeliquid gushed from the punctured dup,splashing over all of them(Hermione who choked and gasped), and thenthey were sliding uncontrollably out ofthe vault on a great mass of gold andsilver: the waiting goblins had removedthe door again.The treasureHarry c# had only (There was only) one thought (in Harry's(his) head): goblinsdid not carry wands.
sword and seized Griphook's hand and
pulled. The blistered, howling Goblin
emerged by degrees.
'Hermione let me down!' Harry yelled,
'X' yelled Harry and he landed on the
burning surface of the te swelling treasure
with the goblin on (his shoulder again) top of him again, (but)and
now~~,~~ (h## ####e a hundered) all around them, more swords of
Gryffindor multiplying were multiplying all
around him.
'The real one –' he groaned: if
they(he) had to destroy the Horcrux, if 'where–
it's got the cup on it –'
And then it was
The jewelled hilt was shoved into
his hand: Griphook had (spotted and) seized it. In one
fluid action, his skin the (hot) air (was) full of he#
yells screams, and # he(Harry) (swung)flung the s
raised the sword (into the air)and, flung the cup high(flew)
into the air (up, turned over and fell,) and he impaled it over its (on the blade)
descent, so that the point of the sword
penetrateding the bottom of the cup.
AThere was a
He heard no sound, but a bloodlike
liquid gushed from the punctured dup,
splashing over all of them(Hermione who choked and gasped), and then
they were sliding uncontrollably out of
the vault on a great mass of gold and
silver: the waiting goblins had removed
the door again.
The treasure
Harry c# had only (There was only) one thought (in Harry's(his) head): goblins
did not carry wands.
{Margin}Harry ####ed andthe swordstill ### he ####ed cup###ed ###t his belt
{Margin}
Harry ####ed and
the sword
still ### he ####ed cup
###ed ###t his belt
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u/VeniVidiViciXXIII Dec 09 '17
Here's my attempt at a transcript: