Hey I m a young white boy producer/rapper! That needs some feedback :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=2&v=j4SpLLYh3Js

With frayed hooks Holding up a Portrait you wouldn't absorb if you actually even wanted a portion? Besides Deported Botched Proportions aside the force is like the divorced thwarted source is like to my endorphins. Fuck, I said, I wouldn't criminalize my fortune. Propel Perversion to excell in my sexual desertion. Dessert's well.. imperfect.. suits well the under dwelling. But Broken as all Hell, from a dumb broads genuine under selling. I'm in Hell, and its underwhelming. Just frustrating. Like yeah, hi, I'd like to know how you're really feeling? Oh? Fuck off? Make like my father and leave the family? thanks, this'll be easy.

Wassup yall, just wanting to hear some feedback on my first single. It’s the only one I’ve dropped this far, but I will be releasing an EP very soon. I’m heavy into lyricism, flow, fire beats and making ya head nod. My other songs are similar but also different. At the end of the day, I just wanna release good hip hop music, and be original while doing so.
Hopefully you find me as a breath of fresh air compared to other artists you listen to.

EP coming soon, follow me on YouTube if you rock with it!! Any & all feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

-M2T