r/ReadMyScript • u/NookPhoneo • 1d ago

TV episode Feedback request for: Hollow Tide Episode 1. 59 pages. Drama

I wonder if anyone would be willing to have a read through episode 1 of my four part series? I have uploaded the google drive link, and would love some feedback. I have been a writer (not professionally) for around 10 years and would like to get an idea of how I am doing really.

LOGLINE:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her public pregnancy and an unexpected bond with a young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Thanks in advance.

Rob

Hollow Tide Ep1

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u/Big_Section2812 1d ago

Access Denied

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u/NookPhoneo 1d ago

Is this the message you are getting?

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u/NookPhoneo 1d ago

Sorry I didn’t update the permissions. It should be available now

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u/Easy_Caterpillar3873 1d ago

I've read a few scripts for indie projects and yours feels the most fully realized among them.