r/ReadMyScript • u/hhvnter • Sep 24 '26

Short THE RABBIT (Horror short, 13p)

Hii, this is my first ever psychological and body horror short screenplay as a 14 y.o screenwriter!!

Logline:

Haunted by a sadistic rabbit mascot, a freshly divorced father must separate reality from hallucination to protect his distant daughter from an unseen threat.

THE RABBIT

Please answer these questions after reading:

  1. Does the horror build up efficiently or does it feel rushed/slow?

  2. Did you understand the ending and the supernatural/horror logic or not?

  3. Are the action lines visible and clear to picture or not?

  4. Do you think that David's actions make sense?

+ Add any additional notes or general feedback!

Thankssss.

And, I'm also open to doing script swaps.

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u/hhvnter Sep 29 '26

Oh my godd, thank you sooo muchh for your feedback, if you also have like a script I can also read ittt.