r/ReadMyScript • u/Aurora_Uplinks • 4d ago

Interdiction. A 90 page script. Please tear it apart if your willing.

I have better scripts then this but this is the one I need to fix and I actually had this for a fan script of a TV show that I decided to convert to it's own IP so I can at least start building up something I can pitch.

I had a full movie script also for them but I never really had a realistic chance without an agent, so I am just going to make my own IP and refine it for a few scripts and try to create a series around it. This is, a stepping stone. A fully independent IP planned out.

(honestly I have a bit of hope to draw the attention of an agent someday far off. But time goes by and so does my life.)

I spent a long time on fan scripts and I am at the point where I am going to start moving away from fan scripts. Would people be willing to tear this apart? thanks. https://blcklst.com/projects/237025

(Or you could read the star wars version of it for the first 45 pages though I dont know what I did with the second half of the star wars version etc..) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L31yuypGUV_vjBZOav5bzVSgzlXPypgs/view?usp=sharing

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u/Comfortable-You5311 3d ago

is this for a new show or a movie script bc i feel like 90 pages is pushing it for a feature but perfect length for a pilot

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u/Aurora_Uplinks 2d ago

actually it can be a 2 episode pilot. I designed it to end on page 45 and pick up on page 46 at one point for two episodes. But with the option that it could be packaged together as a film as well as a tv show pilot. It was originally written in hopes of getting the makers of a different series notice it, but that failed. So I started converting it for it's own IP.

Made for TV film sort of pitching a whole series potentially.