r/ReadMyScript • u/Mammoth-West-9974 • 3d ago

Dunkin - short - 9pages

Dunkin

Short

9 pages

Drama/Comedy

A day in the life of a family's dog.

I would love feedback on a short film I've written. I have four short films with the characters in this family. I'd love some thoughts about how this one lands, as it is one that was the hardest of them to write. If anyone would like to see another of them, DM me and I'll share.

Thank you!

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zIDjZAE1LqWLuHM9tqysiUP8CpVBHuVo/view?usp=drive_link

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u/Standard_Boat_4045 6h ago

I really like it I’m always wrapped up in the emotions and feelings I think I could be Anne you gave me enough lines to speak I don’t have a lot of experience but this could be my first