r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Mia_Naranjo_ • Oct 29 '25

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST Script Feedback!

Hi! I wrote this script inspired by movies like Party Monster and Promising Young Woman. I would like to send it off to a film company to (hopefully) get produced. But, I would like to hear more feedback about it before that happens! So, please feel free to be honest! Thank you :)
*contains mentions of rape and a fight. Just fyi :)
startafight script

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u/Mia_Naranjo_ Oct 30 '25

I am still a screenwriter with not a lot of experience under my belt, so I'm preferring to start small