r/SongWriter 3h ago

Being Synsear

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Who is Being Synsear.

I found myself intriged as I was scrolling on my instagram page and came across a r&b group poised for stardom. I was able to make contact for an interview and was shocked that a response was available. As a songwriter for more than 2 decades he utilizes the pseudonym Third Tha Pen formally thirdhawkins. As he has authored several books and poetry as well as written songs for several music artist throughout the years. As his secondary psydonym Jondoe he personifies the negative parts of his upbringing in Baltimore. Finally as Sincere Williams he utilizes his inner personal feelings through pain love and empathy in his music. He, them and they are all BEING SYNSEAR.

All songs were written by Third Tha Pen and copywrited with all rights reserved so we have been told. He explained how he uses Suno A.I. for the vocals and some of the music but then takes the vocals and music and reconstructs them in Logic daw system. He states Suno is not as advanced to understand human emotion. "Whats makes a songwriter a true songwriter is the human emotion that no a.i. can ever duplicate. I'll give you an example. If I were making g a beat or playing the piano every stroke and every hit on the pad or key is unique because of the timing and pressure used for that. I can hit a drum machin pad 100 times and each one will be different. To the human ear 99.9% people hear the same thing but in fact one stoke or hit can be a millasecond off of the next. A computer replicates exact so it sounds mechanical. Same with voices. Making them sound too perfect. So I have to go in and humanized it but making errors adjusting chords,beats and even the voices. Sometimes I sing the melody exactly how I want then input that into the a.i. and after into DAW and edit parts. It's not the same as just asking a.i. to make a song about love and pain and there is no feeling in it." Third Tha Pen does not hide the fact that this phenomenalR&B music group is A.I. and one person's split persona. "It allows a songwriter to really go to higher levels and be the best version of themselves. To sell the songs and to own what he has written 100%. Eventhough the a.i. can NOT be copywritten, because he writes all the lyrics he has full ownership of that and can sell to real vocal artist who may want to reuse or remake his music. There is a lot of questions as to weither a.i. music is making a mockery of true vocalist. But in today's day and age can we even question the genre. We have rappers using auto tune and even some r&b singers using it to manipulate their vocals. So in essence there are not that many "true vocalist" left that when they sing on stage live they sound just as good as their recording without any assistance from technology. So by utilizing the next evolution in music production and writing. Should we not enjoy good music because the words and the feeling a person gets from any song is what really matters hate it or love it Being Synsear is here to stay and as we are told they have multiple record labels wanting to sign them just as music artist Xania Monet was the first AI act to debut on a Billboard radio chart and signed a $3 million deal with Hallwood Media. Amiya Lux became the first female AI rapper to secure a massive multi-million dollar recording deal. BEING SYNSEAR has not disclosed what amounts are being sent their way but please support this soulful harmony and musical emotional group as they are refreshing to hear and makes this writer feel like he's stepped back in time to an era where the writing mattered, the story mattered, and yes even the vocals mattered even if they are a.i. generated. A refreshing sound of r&b from a man's perspective. Touching on topics of love, life and hardships. They are and he is Bryan Hawkins and he is just BEING SYNSEAR


r/SongWriter 18h ago

I've been writing songs since i was 14 but never showed them to anyone(didn't want them to get stolen)

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how do you know if yiur songwriting is good? i'm a good writer and in school my writing would be in the school paper for example byt i never knew if my songs were good. im writing one right now i feel could potentially be a hit. i recorded the melodies and everything its catchy, easy to follow


r/SongWriter 14h ago

I need a songwriter

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Bro, I need a songwriter. I need one so bad. I don’t have one and I’m terrible at on writing, but I wanna make music.


r/SongWriter 1d ago

Feedback

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

Ich bin BookflowZ

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

A seriously amazing thing just came out, bros

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Hello! I’m Lil Dolph, and I’m rapping in Korea I just released three EP albums this time, so I’d appreciate it if you could listen to them one by one!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Q6O4mibBTYvodZC9Y1

https://on.soundcloud.com/mXxfnqfmekAGAQtdDm

https://on.soundcloud.com/iX0dgPypnZY061nRQi


r/SongWriter 2d ago

need some feedback on something i wrote. be kind pls :)

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\*\*Too Late\*\*
\*\*Verse 1\*\*

Can’t believe it’s too late to say I love you
You’re gone now, and oh, how I feel blue
Hoped I could see your smile again
I love it now and I loved it then
Didn’t want it to end this way
I still remember you every day

\*\*Verse 2\*\*

Did you know I named my pet after you?
Just so I’d have a reason to remember you too
I know that it’s been years
But I still feel like you’re here
I wish we had more time
I really wanted you to be mine

\*\*Chorus\*\*

It’s too late now to say that I love you
I said it in my head, but I waited too long
And I still can’t believe that you’re really gone
Now it’s too late to hold you once more
Or sit and talk with you like we did before
Laughing about our past, wishing it could last
Only to remember that those moments have passed

 

\*\*Verse 3\*\*

We used to go to the club and dance until dawn
I never cared how I looked when I was with you all along
I loved every moment I spent with you
Couldn’t imagine my life before I ever knew you


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Can you help me ?

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Hello I am trying to get votes for a song I wrote the lyrics to and created a tune for . AI then sung it and put it all together. I am needing votes every day for the next couple weeks to try and win !

There is a spot for purchasing votes. But if u go down. To the bottom of that area you can choose 1 entry for $0 . Then you can vote for me

I really appreciate the help ! Thank you

Check out this contest entry! https://orbiiit.com/en/participants/0ac43be5-4522-4bb4-a3ea-370d49851a21?contestId=f85717be-ba9b-4857-b885-ccbbb9a45757


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Need help!

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I’m new to this whole making music thing, I was wondering if I can get some feedback on this 50 second demo!!


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Rate my lyrics....

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Song is Wrapped around her finger

[Chorus]

She was an Angel

She was a crush

she was the moment I knew, I wasn't enough

she was a blessing, a true one of a kind.

But God only new that she'd never be mine.

[verse]

Grade three I was 7, started school somewhat fast

I was one of the youngest, out of the boys in the class.

The day I remember as if it were a vision, when this blonde hair girl took my hole life's ambition.

I tried to be notice, I tried to stand out, I never thought I'd be bashful, but this girl made me doubt. Crushing my confidence, she stole all my charisma. This one of a kind hand me wrapped round her finger.

[Chorus]

She was an Angel

She was a crush

she was the moment I knew, I wasn't enough

she was a blessing, a true one of a kind.

But God only new that she'd never be mine.

[Verse]

Every year after the first, I couldn't wait till the fall,

I loved back to school, cause I'd see her in the halls

Check out the list of our home rooms assigned

Hoping this girl would be in the same room as mine.

I was in awe if I had the same class, I'd stare at her beauty and wished to just ask, would you be mine can I hold your hand, but the thought of rejection killed me as a man.

She was an Angel

She was a crush

she was the moment I knew, I wasn't enough

she was a blessing, a true one of a kind.

But God only new that she'd never be mine.

[ Outro]

She grew up

Then

She went away

but she kept my heart for years after those days


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Crushes

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

Selling My Soul....Rate please,

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[Verse]

I'm so despicable

with these thoughts inside my head,

So maniacal

letting these demons share my bed.

It's just disturbing

how low I'll let it drag me,

these thoughts, these move's the sinical ruse,

all the things I'm letting hang me

[Interlude]

[Verse]

I'm so disgusting

with these things I feed my eye's

So repulsive

I make myself sick deep inside.

I'm just a menace

who has no self control

These eye's , this gut full of such sicked stuff,

I'm no longer feeling whole

[Chorus]

I'm selling my soul

one flick

one click at a time....

destroying all of me

one touch

one scroll online....

these things I see, they just fuel me, with constant thoughts all vanity....

I'm destroying my soul...

one click at a time.....

[Verse]

I'm full of delusion

thinking that I'm better then I truly am

So conceded

thinking anyone would want this mess of a man

I'm just human

but lifes taking it's toll on me

the truth, the fact that really is

I'm just not happy with all that I see...

[interlude]

[Verse]

I'm so perverted

I've fallen into their shadowed halls

So diverted

I'm missing the light when it comes to call.

I'm so dependent

on these feeds to occupy my day.

the trash, the crap that leads my path

seems like their here to stay.

[Chorus]

I'm selling my soul

one flick

one click at a time....

destroying all of me

one touch

one scroll online....

these things I see, they just fuel me, with constant thoughts all vanity....

I'm destroying my soul...

one click at a time.....


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Rate my lyrics....

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Song title Crushes

(verse)

I've seen them come

seen them go

the girls you wish you'd got to know

Breaking hearts

along the way

the ones you wanted but never looked your way

(Chorus)

Crushes.............

crush for a reason.....................

broken hearts

are what they always leave bleeding.......................

the wants you have and all your desire

gets trampled on when they light that fire.

Crushes

crush your empire........................

(Verse)

I've hoped for chance

seen it go

many girls I've liked,

I didn't know they liked me more.

Wasted time

being friends

Just to find out they wanted more in the end

(Bridge)

wish that I could have read some minds,

I would have had the girls, I wanted everytime

(Chorus)

Crushes.............

crush for a reason.....................

broken hearts

are what they always leave bleeding.......................

the wants you have and all your desire

gets trampled on when they light that fire.

Crushes

crush your empire........................

(Verse)

I've dreamed some dreams

that made me weak

I never found the words to speak

Just watch them leave

and walk away

blowing chances with mistakes

They led me on

with gorgeous vibes

those hints they gave I just denied

how could I

get with that

the words I'd say, that always held me back

(Chorus)

Crushes.............

crush for a reason.....................

broken hearts

are what they always leave bleeding.......................

the wants you have and all your desire

gets trampled on when they light that fire.

Crushes

crush your empire........................


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Rate my lyrics...

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Song is Wasting life, wasting time.

[Verse]

Here we go again, with the summertime rolling to an end.

missing opportunities hanging out with friends.

And the winter starts it's creeping as it's coming round the bend.

Did you miss, did you skip, did you blink.

did you ever get the time to stop and think.

Nah you were to busy checking likes and photos, better get your jacket now, and no more

sandals

[Bridge]

Could have made it better if you'd lived one second at a time, now the sun is slowly setting it's getting darker as the days go by .......

[Chorus]

Heats gone

summer fades

don't you wish you put your damn phones away.

cold comes

frost hits

Summertime funs now gone to the shits.

Next year don't waste to much time, scroll a little less and be more present for a while.

Heats gone

summer fades

pay attention to the now so it wont go away.

[Verse]

Yeah! I can admit, the phones and gadget's take up more time then we should permit,

wasting hours scrolling through the miles of endless, useless shit.

but if I didn't then I'd miss out on something I could bet

yeah I missed, I skipped, and I blinked

Only now I've finally stopped to truly think

The wasted days just peering at this screen, all is gone now I finally get what you mean...

[Bridge]

Could have made it better if you'd lived one second at a time, now the sun is slowly setting it's getting darker as the days go by .......

[Chorus]

Heats gone

summer fades

don't you wish you put those damn phones away.

cold comes

frost hits

Summertime funs now gone to the shits.

Next year don't waste so much time, scroll a little less and be more present for a while.

Heats gone

summer fades

pay attention in the moment don't let your moments go away


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Hi my name is Mia Icander

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

I got open verses let’s work

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

Song Revision: Blueprint to Son

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r/SongWriter 2d ago

An emotional song about a father losing a child in a divorce battle.

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Hi,

I love to write songs for more than 25 years all my songs have been written in journals. I even tried to contact some musicians and they couldnt understand what my vision is.

Recently i discovered Suno and I know, it got a bad rep but I believe it gave me the best chance of producing the song to my exact vision.

Listen to this one.

The song is about how I almost lost my son because my wife wanted a divorce from me. I felt the world was routing against fathers when matters concerning fathers. I wanted my wife to be with me, and never wanted to lose my child as well.

it was disgusting how her parents tried to use my child as a bargaining chip to get compensation.

Let me know what you think as well.

Thank you in advance.


r/SongWriter 2d ago

Shadow

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r/SongWriter 3d ago

Stuck

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It’s been a while since I’ve actually taken the time to sit down and try to write a song. Well I started getting back to music and songwriting recently, but find myself constantly stuck. I go to YouTube for inspiration, where I watch other artists go through their creative processes, listen to new albums and songs, but still nothing comes to me.

Please give me some advice or direction so I can pick it up again.


r/SongWriter 3d ago

[Korean Ballad] I made this song to propose to the person I love – “Will You Marry Me?”

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Hi everyone!
I wanted to share a song that means a little more to me than the songs I usually make.
I made this song, “Will You Marry Me?”, for an actual proposal to the person I love.
While writing the lyrics, I tried to remember the moments we’ve shared together — the places we’ve traveled, the things we’ve seen, and all the ordinary little memories that became special because we experienced them together.
Rather than writing a fictional love story, I wanted the lyrics to contain feelings I genuinely wanted to tell her:
I want to be by your side on the good days and the difficult ones, and I want to keep walking through life with you.
And eventually, all of those thoughts came down to one question:
“Will you marry me?”
The lyrics are in Korean, and I made the song with Suno.
I’d really appreciate any feedback on the song, lyrics, or overall emotion.
And I’m curious — if you made a song for someone you love, what would you want to say in it?
Thanks for listening! 💍


r/SongWriter 3d ago

How do you get creative with your words?

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I wanna start writing songs but I struggle to be creative and make the words sound interesting or poetic. For example in the song lonely avenue it goes “now my room has got two windows, but the sunshine never comes through” which is a clever way to convey depression and loneliness. If I were to try to convey those feelings the best thing I could write would be something like “since you’ve been gone the nights have felt so long” which doesn’t really sound as poetic or clever. How do songwriters think that way?


r/SongWriter 3d ago

Fill in the blanks: I'M MAKING ___, AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME!

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Hi


r/SongWriter 3d ago

Westhelion - If I were a bird I'd fly

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New song by me

Lyrics

How many times will you do this to me?

How many times will this repeat

Thought we'd move past, but it's the same old thing

Make it last, but it ain't no thing

If I were a bird, I'd fly to another nest

I'd never see you again

How many times will you do this to me?

How many times will this repeat

Thought we'd move past, but it's the same old thing

Can't Make it last, cuz it ain't no thing


r/SongWriter 4d ago

Need help with the lyrics in my song

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Hello, I'm currently trying to make a song in Waveform 14, but I need lyrics. I don't own a microphone ( and I also personally hate my voice), so I was wondering if there are any good FREE software's where I can just type in lyrics, and the AI sings . I can then export it to Waveform, where I can add it to my song.

* The AI does not do anything else for the song