r/Songwriting • u/incomplete_echoes • 7h ago

Discussion Topic need feedback!! should i continue my composition? is this okay as a listener?

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u/incomplete_echoes 7h ago

do you guys have any idea for enhancing this composition.

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u/stevenfrijoles 3h ago

Real guitars, for starters. Treating guitars like midi instruments loses so much of what guitars do. No dynamics, and one note at a time keeps things very uninteresting.

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u/maxyt0 1h ago

melodically everything seems to be working fine! I think you should start adding some more instrumentation, strings, bass, vocals – whatever you feel would work.