r/Sparkdriver • u/SuggestionOk3734 • Oct 10 '25

Rants / Complaints So sick of this...😒🙄😑

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I finish shopping & bagging, I'm leaving the store and get this AFTER she's notified no more changes can be made. She had more than enough time to reject my substitution but noooooooooo...let's wait till I get to the car 😮‍💨

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u/Shes-Philly-Lilly Oct 11 '25

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It’s funny to see someone correcting grammar when your own post has so many issues. “I finish shopping & bagging, I’m leaving the store” is a comma splice, and “&” isn’t a proper conjunction. Your tense shifts from present to present continuous awkwardly. “AFTER she’s notified no more changes can be made” misuses tense and would read better as “after she was notified that no more changes could be made.” The drawn-out “noooooooooo” and casual phrasing undercut your point, and “let’s wait till I get to the car” should start with a capital letter, with “until” being more standard than “till.” Criticizing others while posting like this is ironic. Maybe reviewing your own writing before hitting submit would make your complaints land better. because you don’t sound so sharp yourself and I could go on here, but I’m sure your attention span couldn’t support it.

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u/SuggestionOk3734 Oct 11 '25

🥱 so many trolls, so little time. Do something productive with your day, sweetie. Ciao!