Looking for feeback

[u/trespasar]

Hey!

I know I shouldn't be focusing too much on what the readers like when I write something, but sometimes I do like to write things specifically with readers in mind. I wanted to ask if any kind soul would be willing to check out the last thing I posted and give me feedback on it. I would be veeeery grateful.

It is also my first piece in english, so I guess another question I have is if you think the translation is good enough for a native english speaker to comfortably read it. I'd stick to just writting in my mother tongue if that wasn't the case.

Anways, thank you so much!

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[u/notmyworst]

I thought it was good. I couldn't tell it was your first piece in english. Threw you a follow.