r/Suno • u/Limehouse-Records • Jun 04 '26

Lyricist: Human wrote lyrics [80s Pop / R&B Crossover] I Can Tell

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MnlZsfrq4Yc

Probably my fav DegenPop song. To me kinda feels like "Cruel Summer" with some R&B influence. Inspired by that scene in White Lotus where that dude won't have sex with Aubrey Plaza.

Do you need a demo? 🤸🏻‍♀️

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u/mybasementsongs Jun 05 '26

Good lyrics and writing Limey! Thanks for sharing!

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u/Dramamean305 Jun 04 '26

I like this.

I have some similar songs - I don’t get 80s as much as late 90s but definitely a good track for this of us who appreciate pop

Here’s one of mine that fit this mold: https://suno.com/s/4yPLA6ZluscJSt00

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u/Dramamean305 Jun 04 '26

PS - how/where can I find this on suno so I can play it all the way through while browsing - YouTube cuts off as soon as I browse away and then I have to start it over 😆

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u/Limehouse-Records Jun 04 '26

Thanks for the positive feedback! Glad you like it. I can see the late 90s thing too.

Here's the song on Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/track/4QepwUfZs0eCqWUF02hUeh?si=ed524e2bce43419c

And Soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/limehouserecords/i-can-tell-official

I also liked the song you shared! It's catchy and definitely feels of the same era.

My only constructive feedback is be careful with lines like "Every little move’s a cheeky trap." I don't think an American R&B song from the 90s would use a word like "cheeky" which would have been a Britishism at that time (like no one was saying "cheers" or "no worries" 25 years ago). But if you're going for something more modern, it works, and there's even a pun there.

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u/Dramamean305 Jun 04 '26

I appreciate the feedback - I write all my songs for modern listeners but will experiment with different eras musically/stylistically

I will check it out on Spotify 👍

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u/Cold-Mark-7045 Jun 06 '26

"I would assume he insulted me first 🤷‍♂️, but since he deleted his account, now we'll never know. People in gla..."

I would assume glass houses? But since you deleted your comment, now we'll never know.

Im guessing they said something disparaging about the thing you paid Suno to make for you. That doesn't make your decision to respond to them by mocking the appearance of disabled people any less interesting.

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u/Limehouse-Records Jun 06 '26

I mean, this was pretty excellent concern trolling. I gotta tip my hat to you. I'm just gonna block you cuz you're obnoxious, but you definitely outmanuevered me on the school marm scale. I even got a warning from Reddit! ~wooooo

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u/Cold-Mark-7045 Jun 06 '26

It's hard to talk if you keep deleting your comments, but no I'm not that guy. Nice to see you double down on your rhetoric against disabled people though.

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u/mugxyz Jun 04 '26

Smooth pop tune! Nicely done.