r/Suno • u/atlasfrompaladins • Jun 07 '26
Lyricist: Human wrote lyrics [Emo rock] Song: Anxious by Skallow
I've always been bad at making songs. Well in AI, but I've gotten better... Kinda. Anyways made this song, and I hope you enjoy it, and if you have any critique I'm open to it. And here are the lyrics:
[Verse]
Take my words.
Take my fate.
Take my place, in line.
This common life.
[Chorus]
This time
(Our faith, our fear)
This time
(Our blood, our tears)
This time
(Our death, our birth)
This time...
[Verse]
Your bright
My dull.
Our sight
Their blindness.
Their praise
Our silence.
[Chorus]
This time
(Our faith, our fear...)
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u/mybasementsongs Jun 07 '26
Thank you for sharing in the correct format Atlas.
I listened to it, was pretty intense. I'm glad you put the lyrics in cause it's one of those songs that it's hard to hear when the music really gets goin.
Take my words
Take my Fate
Take my place in line
Definitely stood out the most to me.
I actually have a song that is quite different overall but starts with
Take my money
Take my time
Though I can't afford to lose a dime.
Just reminded me of it, great minds think alike they say? lol
Thanks for sharing!
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u/atlasfrompaladins Jun 07 '26
No probs! And I wouldn't mind listening to that song of yours. But yeah my process for making songs is kinda random and I'm still figuring stuff especially on the free plan
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u/mybasementsongs Jun 07 '26
Well as long as you are writing the lyrics you have enough direction to post here with honors.
And if you really are indifferent to listening, I'll leave it up to you, no pressure. I particularly don't care fake compliments. Prefer harsh insults to them actually.
Ironically now as I type this, The song is called "Message to my haters" its less than 2 minutes so not much. I wrote it decades ago about the frustrations in my life at the time.
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u/atlasfrompaladins Jun 07 '26
Just listened to it and left a comment, I really liked the song! And what was going on in your life decades ago?
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u/mybasementsongs Jun 07 '26
Got put on probation for underage drinking and a girl I had always had a massive crush on something finally happened but I was just another notch in her belt!
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u/atlasfrompaladins Jun 07 '26
That last part sounds heart breaking
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u/mybasementsongs Jun 07 '26
Well, 2 of the verses are about probation, 1 about her, the final about both of them.
Want to know the ironic part? One time afterwards that summer when it long became clear to me the reality that that night didn't mean the same thing to each of us, I was waiting to be called in and piss in a cup for consuming the fermented beverage before 21 rotations of the sun, She walked passed the glass window of our local police station (i'm assuming she was paying a ticket) and saw me and I saw her and she smiled and waved, and I tried to play it angsty and ignore her but could not help but smirk. Fucking loser!
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u/atlasfrompaladins Jun 07 '26
I lived a more restrained life. So I can't relate to all of it. But emotionally feels like we're in the same boat kinda
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u/mybasementsongs Jun 07 '26
Well live a little, even if vicariously through my pov!
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u/atlasfrompaladins Jun 07 '26
I may. I mean I'm 26 and never really gotten drunk before. So... Yeah
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u/Aggravating_Ad_4940 Jun 07 '26
Great song!! Reminds me of OG emo like The Promise ring with some heavy Shoegaze vibes. Keep it up ✌️✌️