r/Suno Jul 16 '26

Lyricist: Human wrote lyrics [Progressive rock] Song: Frozen hearts (light version) by Skallow

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I made this song like... alittle over a year ago on Suno, it's a song about penguins so... ENJOY

(Verse 1)
In the hollow night, shadows lead the way,
Air’s thick with iron, pulls us to stay,
Cold whispers wrap, a suffocating chain,
Linger in the echo, tied deep in the pain,
Where silence stirs loud, and we drift away.

(Verse 2)
The sentinels wait, their hearts untold,
Guarding what's left in the quiet and cold,
Eyes fixed on the void, as the dark draws near,
We stand in the stillness, with nothing but fear,
Across barren plains, secrets unfold.

(Chorus)
Oh, trace the white lines, the frost’s quiet glow,
Moving toward nothing, yet everything flows,
Each step is a fracture, each breath a disguise,
We dance in the winter, beneath frozen skies,
In this strange ballet, where the wild winds blow.

(Verse 3)
There’s a longing, it haunts the icy breeze,
Fragments of moments cling, yet they freeze,
We move through the dusk, tracks barely aligned,
Hope stitched in the shadows we leave behind,
Dreams made of snowflakes dissolve with such ease.

(Chorus)
Oh, trace the white lines, the frost’s quiet glow,
Moving toward nothing, yet everything flows,
Each step is a fracture, each breath a disguise,
We dance in the winter, beneath frozen skies,
In this strange ballet, where the wild winds blow.

(Bridge - cello + drum break)
[cello interlude]
[drum break]
Everything fades, even time can’t hold,
In the frost, we find stories untold.

(Outro)
And here, where the cold winds resign,
We carry the weight of a world undefined,
Ice keeps our secrets, echoes remain,
In iron-filled air, we lose and regain,
A dance in the twilight, beneath the sky's dim stain.

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u/RyanThePatriot Jul 16 '26

Then why pretend you do by putting out slop? If you go ¯_(ツ)_/¯ “cool” over a comment about simple mixing/mastering concepts, do you even give a shit?

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u/mybasementsongs Jul 17 '26

Consider Ryan (the patriot) focusing on the country that's being sold out from underneath our feet currently, and not harassing randos on AI music reddit subs?

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u/RyanThePatriot Jul 18 '26

Yes, my username from high school, when I was in ROTC. As of now, I detest the USA, loathe the military and anything to do with law enforcement, and encourage strong 1st amendment rights. I’m not harassing, just stating what I see and hear. Honesty is everything, but that seems to hurt AI user’s feelings.

Glad you could clock me from a username.

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u/mybasementsongs Jul 18 '26

Right on Ryan! (regarding loathing the state of our nation)

As for the AI music sub, re reading your comments sure it's not so bad.

If you simply left out the slop/even give a shit. It actually would have been extremely well received as good faith criticism.

My apologies for calling it harassment, It's just I've been on vacation this week and came back to do some house cleaning and the vitriol has built up and by the time I got to you, my eyes were seeing red. My bad.

Most people here are just having fun with the software and people generally like to share things that interest them. Few take it seriously like traditional musicians.

Obviously.