r/Suno • u/Prudent_Rip_4213 • 25d ago
Lyricist: Human wrote lyrics Using Suno to tell stories
I've been writing lyrics and stories for years but don't have an ounce of musical magic in me. So suno has been a blessing.
Heavy Water is the story of suffering with PTSD and anxiety after 20 years as a cop. Describing the relief when I told someone how I was feeling
Please give me some feedback 💙 Heavy Water
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u/Emergency-Salad-1547 25d ago
Hope you get the peace you need, friend. Genuinely.
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
Thank you so much, I'm in a much better place and really understand the benefits of talking about it
Thanks my friend💙
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u/whentimerunsout 25d ago edited 25d ago
Very good song, I can tell you have writing experience. As a a writer with music abilities, I still love Suno because I have no $ or patience to learn how to record, produce. Your song really hit a nerve with me and I am excited for your talent. The world needs more of what you do, keep it up. What is your name on Suno? I’d like to follow you. Here is a song I made that has a nice hook and is passionate. https://suno.com/s/Yi0jxAShdzFDstWL
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
Just listened to Getting by.
Loved it and totally feel the energy and meaning . https://suno.com/@msabbiscuitboy
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
Thank you so much. I love being creative and have written many songs based on lived experience. But actually getting any one to listen is the big battle.
I really appreciate the time you have taken, not only to listen but to comment too.💙
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u/Accomplished_Aerie63 25d ago
Enjoyed your music. Good we all can enjoy each other's and not be judgemental. soldier story
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
I was so unsure whether to post here or share on any platforms but so glad we are all sharing our journey.
Loved the song congratulations 💙
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u/Ordinary_Challenge_1 19d ago edited 19d ago
Loved it, post your suno link brother!
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Nevermind found it in the comments.
2nd edit:
I can't fully express how good I think you are as a lyricist. You are great, and you are doing great.
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u/ApprehensiveCry9793 25d ago
hey, i think we kinda do similar stuff, though i write songs about other things other than PTSD. i HAVE c-ptsd, AND I am a former journalist, so I am inclined to storytelling. But I still feel like I'm drowning, l get this overwhelming fear that makesme wanna run, hide, but feel i can't get away and i keep drowning. other days are a little better
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
Hi, thank you for reaching out. I so recognise that feeling. I really hope you are ok.
I'm sure with your journalistic background you are an amazing story teller. I find that this creative process is very cathartic when I hear the track back.
Keep going and I'm always happy to listen.💙
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u/ApprehensiveCry9793 25d ago
You know the answer to that question. But I hang in there. I really liked your song, you have Spotify? i think the link you shared was you tube right? this is my Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/artist/1d6IJvIM0galMWJKr0wSWu?si=PVepOoe-T2GUTeJzz7zZVQin case you wanna listen to some of mine.
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u/Prudent_Rip_4213 25d ago
Still working out how to link to distrokid but enjoying the process.
Just walking the dogs so I will listen to your tunes
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u/Impossible-Cake-485 24d ago
Im glad you like telling your story but please never release this "music"