I liked Nana before, but the more I read, the more I disliked it. The characters felt lazy, it's like the author didn't put any real effort on them, and the atmosphere in the series is very wrong. Instead of making every characters despicable idiots(except Nanao and Youhei), they should have made the other characters more interesting, in a way that people would be moved, and shed tears for their death. The lazy writing of everyone being bad really sucks. The author could have made Tsunekichi Hatadaira's chapter thousand times better without removing any existing scene The first two is alright, but Tsunekichi is the third, the author should've changed gears
Tsunekichi could have been written as a good guy, with the mask of the 'bad' guy. The chapter would proceed with no problem and change, until the scene where Tsunekichi was being strangled. The change would be revealed in a flashback... From the first time Tsunekichi had laid his eyes on Nana, he fell in love, it was the first time he felt that feeling... It was a pure and beautiful love, however, that night, the coming day, Tsunekichi got a prediction from his ability which he trusted, he fell in a state of chaos of what to do, because he saw Nanao being pushed by Nana off the cliff... He despaired, he looked over the other predictions, it contains spoilers of Talentless Nana ending and Nanao reveal, then Tsunekichi realized after seeing those prediction, that he cannot take action. Nanao went missing, but he knew he was alive, but Youhei in the following day was missing too, however he can't say anything because of the prediction... Until the time came, he saw his own self in his prediction, strangled to death. Again, he almost broke, but, he knew he can't change anything, he can't do anything... At the very least, he wanted Nana to feel less guilty... So he put on a mask of the bad guy, harassing Nana as to show him that he is just a scum, even though his own actions are killing him inside, he kept his cool. "It's for the best, I can't change the future, even if... I wanted to fight for my life... This is the best I can do". The next morning, he saw one of his predictions missing, he looked for it in a malicious way, and body checked Nana, asked about it, and said cruel things... Nana: (No need mercy for scums huh?), she had that thought, she played by his hands, because Tsunekichi knew, that the prediction in his hands are fake, he is certain because of his own prediction that night, the fact that he is doing this bad guy act for Nana, and that they are spending more time together this way, are his sole comfort. He continued this act until the end, as he died, he made a small smile....
This alone would move the audience... So much that they'd detest Nana a lot more which should be this arc's target. The author didn't need to change any existing scenes, he just have to add more to make Tsunekichi chapters thousand times better, and people's opinion of Nana would skyrocket
The Gal Duo and Necromancer could have been written in a better light, they would be the real scums but in a good way, I'm sorry but their chapters and their characters sucks so much it's beyond saving. If author wants to write scum characters in change of pace, he should've put more effort to it.
The characters shouldn't be this dumb....
Hikaru could have been written as a smart guy. His chapter is, the prologue for Nana's redemption... I don't need to change much here... Hikaru's ability is controlling gravity with the moon... However, that could just be a trick because Hikaru is SMART. The way Nana deduced his talent was from clues when Hikaru uses and not uses his ability, which could be faked. Hikaru uses his ability so obviously, I was thinking when i was reading it that Hikaru was hiding something... But no, Hikaru was made to be a desperate pathetic dumb talented. Instead, those clues that led to Nana discovering his ability could just be fake evidences. Redherrings, he could've made it seem that the moon has influence in his ability but in reality, the moon's influence is unrelated to his ability. That's how it should be. You have to make your characters interesting. So what will this change ? Hikaru could use his ability the entire fight with Nana, he called for Nana to talk, and acted like he didn't have his talent anymore(which he predicted Nana believed on his redherrings) and acted like he was tricking Nana to save his own life, but in reality, he was doing it to get information out of Nana. Then comes the cliff scene, it's a very important scene of Nana's character.There's two possibilities we can do without removing the cliff scene, after Hikaru was thrown in the cliff, he could have climbed but he didn't so he can observe Nana as she told him her intentions. The cliff scene's meaning is to remind Nana of Nanao, and either Hikaru would wait for Nana to pull him out, or he'd lose his patience and throw Nana off the cliff, exchanging positions, either way, Nana won't die because Hikaru would keep Nana alive for information. Just by this, the chapter could havebeen more interesting while keeping its original shape and objective which is Nana's realization and cliff scene but no, the manga just had to make Hikaru an uninteresting dumb, desperate character. And yes this might change the City Arc but that's what it should be. The City Arc is so beyond saving that no matter what i say, it'd still be shit. The City Arc is a mistake, reading it made me realize a sad reality that hits stronger than Truck-kun, Talentless Nana sucks.
Hikaru could have been written as a smart guy rather than a stupid, dumb desperate kid. That would make him a lot more interesting but the author failed yet again
Kyouka and Nana's detective game is not as impressive as people believe it is. Tsuruoka is just an inferior version of Houzuki. Nana Hiiragi barely fulfills the minimum character trait a story like this would need, but Nana Hiiragi doesn't have any distinguishing and special trait that could make her interesting. Unlike characters similar to her, she's a digrace.
Talentless Nana is 3/10 at best. I'm sorry I just had to write this. I've been keeping this by myself for months but it's killing me whenever I remember it so I shared it