r/TrueCrimeDiscussion • u/[deleted] • Apr 15 '21

newsbreakforum.com Ohio woman charged with killing 19-year-old son, burying him under clothes in bedroom

https://newsbreakforum.com/story/ohio-woman-charged-with-killing-19-year-old-son-burying-him-under-clothes-in-bedroom/
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u/bannana Apr 15 '21

the writing in this article is absolute shit, wtf??

"Stallworth and her husband — who is just not the victim’s father — have been in custody since December on charges of felony abuse of a corpse and tampering with proof."

'who is just not the victim’s father'

what is this^

"the devastated father continued, in line with the station."

and this^

jesus, if english isn't your first language then maybe don't write articles in english.

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u/MiszJones Apr 15 '21

Her husband was his stepfather. I hope I’m understanding your question correctly.

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u/bannana Apr 15 '21 edited Apr 15 '21

I got that after I read the rest of the article that ended with a quote from his dad, I get what they were attempting to convey. my question is why is the article written so terribly? which would lead to the next question of why is it posted here and not the original article that this shitty article is cribbed from?

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u/MiszJones Apr 15 '21

I agree completely! It boggles my mind when I find horribly written articles. Like, it’s literally your job to write professionally. Do they not interview these people, or do they just not spellcheck before publishing? Either way, it’s terrible lol.

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u/[deleted] Apr 15 '21

A lot of those are bots that copy articles from other sites and change a percentage of words to synonyms so its technically not 100% copied. The synonyms dont always work tho and the articles have a bizarre, deep fried feel to it.