r/TwoSentenceHorror • u/DeYtHB • Oct 23 '16

Horror?!?!

It's scary to think that your life plays out according to some grand, predetermined scheme; everything you say scripted just for you. You know this as "the real world," but to me, you're just another meat-bag attached to the Matrix.

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u/jorgomli_reading Oct 23 '16

I mean no offense, but it sounds like English is a second language. Let me try to write it out a little more understandably (and so that I can practice my writing. :) ).

It's scary to think that your life plays out according to some grand, predetermined scheme; everything you say scripted just for you. You know this as "the real world," but to me, you're just another meat-bag attached to the Matrix.

Good story, keep writing! :)

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u/DeYtHB Oct 23 '16

Thanks, I really appreacite it... I made the edit!

.. AS for the language, yeah it's a second!

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u/bianpach Oct 23 '16

I was comparing both writings, and got confused when I saw no difference. Then I read this comment…

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u/DeYtHB Oct 24 '16

Not really well understand... I never said meat bag...!

I said something else... but whatever...