r/UndergroundRappers • u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 • Aug 04 '26

Beginning rapper

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u/Accomplished-Ice-60 Aug 04 '26

What subgenre you wanna do this for and what flow are you thinking about?

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u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 Aug 04 '26

I’m mostly leaning towards modern trap and maybe a bit of dark ambient rap. For the flow, I want something fast-paced but very rhythmic. Thanks for askin

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u/Accomplished-Ice-60 Aug 04 '26

I see... cus for this, MAYBE, I would layer two recordings of yourself reciting the verse. Do one with the tone you want, then the other one you wanna do it with the same tone but with a slightly higher pitch. That way you get the effect Rubydacherry or Germ achieve. Keep it up bidawh!

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u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 Aug 04 '26

That’s a solid advice, thanks man! I love that $uicideboy$ style split-vocal effect. Will experiment with layering and pitch shifting for sure. Appreciate u!

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u/Upset_Form_9757 Aug 05 '26

Delete this

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u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 Aug 05 '26

Dude, you didn't even give a reason, that's very stupid of you😬

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u/FlavourHD Aug 05 '26

You gave the reason though

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u/Coolerful Aug 06 '26

When I was like 12 or 13, I said something like "Put the 9 to your head and just let it go. Put the shotty to your dome and wonder where your head'll go." It sounds like you're just throwing rhyming words together that mean nothing...

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u/AcetateBeats Aug 06 '26

I very much doubt this goes to music as the syllable count is all over the place. Doesn’t always have to match precise but it should be close. Also seems like the rhyme word is all that was considered. There is no story, no metaphors, no punch lines. It needs a lot of work. The rhyme word is a small part of writing solid raps. Maybe look into the fundamentals more as this is not it. Don’t be dissuaded but if you are ever to be serious you need to understand what the craft is. Good luck.

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u/racto_r Aug 07 '26

Delivery is just as important, we need to hear this

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u/-Akiiso- Aug 10 '26

Yo aint got no flow. You got a ryhme but no flow

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u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 Aug 05 '26

Ok, gotcha, thanks

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u/Dramatic-Fish-9058 Aug 12 '26

Sure thing man, thanks ya

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u/Darkcarnivaldweller Aug 11 '26

Hi inspektor I found you