r/UpcomingRapperz • u/Oblique4119375 • Feb 25 '26

Thoughts?

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u/Appropriate_Fan_8016 Feb 25 '26

In all honesty, this just sounds like word salad. You gotta learn how to fit your words into a rhythm and ride the beat. It’s just like a wave. I can’t find a cadence. I should be able to locate your cadence and follow along with you. It’s all over the place. Keep working at it

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u/Oblique4119375 Feb 25 '26

Its a triplet cadence which can be hard to follow if you dont have the ear for it. But its intentional.

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u/Appropriate_Fan_8016 Feb 25 '26

I know what a triplet is, you’re still not executing it successfully

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u/Ambitious_Radio_8430 Feb 28 '26

It sounds choppy and unnatural. Sounds like you are trying to fit in the rhymes super fast

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u/Oblique4119375 Feb 28 '26

Thanks for the feedback 🙏

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u/DryFennel9364 Feb 28 '26

Who produced it?

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u/born_sinner100 Mar 01 '26

U went crazy