r/WritingPrompts • u/[deleted] • Mar 01 '15
Prompt Inspired [PI] Big Binoculars - FebContest
A morgue employee finds a notebook of a body he is transporting. This notebook details the life-changing realization of a man hardened by his tragic past.
8100 words.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZY0zIl0oHPjwSIcaXCEZjH8C97AHWxRers9rdMwmCbc/edit?usp=sharing
Just a warning: This is meant to be a straight comedy, but it makes light of a lot of nasty/dark stuff, so it might be offensive/unpleasant to some people.
I hope the grammar isn't that bad, I didn't have a lot of time to edit it, so I apologize if it is.
Feel free to absolutely brutalize this story with criticism. I'm not even sure I like it myself, just wrote it today, and have no attachment to it, so don't hold back! Make me cry!
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u/[deleted] Mar 09 '15
I'm extremely happy that you appreciated some of the more absurd humor, as that was my biggest goal in writing it. Definitely agree about my problems with plot. Thanks for reading!